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When someone is reborn into the pokemon world as a rich second generation, theres only one thing to do. Become the very best! Only problem is he's a perfectionist which means it's going to be a slower journey to the top than most. Luckily enough he's rich and won't have to squander for small resources like other protaginists would, starting off on their journey.
(Heavy AU)
Im writing this story because I keep getting pissed off when reading chinese pokemon fanfics where protaginists make stupid decisions and don't let pokemon reach what I view as their max potential.
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A good pokemon fanfic. Writing quality is great and I like the characters so far. I can't wait to see how strong the MC gets in the future! My two main complains would be that the world building hasn't been gone into that deeply, and the readers are still missing many of the changes in the world compared to regular pokemon games or anime. For the next I just hope that the author developed the interpersonal relationships more, his connection to his family is a little lacking.
You could ask how, considering magic was different between worlds, but you see, since magic was mostly make-believe and worked on mystical associations instead of hard, cold rules, it was a surprisingly easy process. I just had to keep in mind what I was supposed to call and for what reason, and the entire thing basically built itself.
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Personally i am a big fan of Pokemon fanfics, admittedly they're hard to be done right but so far i am really liking your start on this new fic. keep up the good work. now enough about the compliments lets get do the review so the current 2 chapters so far. Writing quality - So far so good not many if at all any mistakes in sentence structure and spelling, everything is quite smooth and rolls off the screen, which honestly is a big accomplishment on this site haha :). Updates Speeds - So far so good once a-day (2 chapters currently for 2 days) Story Development and world background - I will group these two together since the usually go hand in hand in my opinion, Its Pokemon so just that gets a good rating to me, which direction it will go we shall find out. Personally i think the idea of a perfection seeking psychic in Pokemon is a really interesting way to go (personally i like aura too but its usually overdone), also the perfection seeking quirk is really interesting not many have done this before in any Fan-Fic. Character Design - Again a really interesting quirk of perfection seeking it shall be interesting to see how the MC develops and how he goes about training, his Pokemon and what his goal are and how he sets to achieve them. Overall great start i'am looking forward to reading more :) 5/5. :)
It's good and I like it ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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good ideas and great concept! thanks author ![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] please keep writing[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
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the story is great and I hope it does not get dropped. the story is interesting and is a good read if you just want fun pokemon story. though I wish for more chapters.
Honestly i really love it,but its just not for Me🥕🌮🍅🌮🌮🌮🍠🍅🌮🥕🍠🥕🌮🍅🌮🍅🍠🍅🍠🍅🍠🍅🌮🍅🌮🍅🍠🍅🌮🍅🍠🍠🍅🍠🍅🍠🍅🍠🍠🍈🍠🍅🍠🍈🍠🍠🍅🍈
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Just for the synopsis I like your style... Also I need something other then a Chinese novels style..........................................
as person who doesn't gives reviews that much i would just give a simple review. i like it and i enjoy reading it much. with almost all good pokemon fanfics either getting dropped, hiatus or not even posting anything i would like to give a review so that the author and the possible readers may know that this is good but i may have trash taste. dont drop author-san!