one piece luffy the gamer

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Daoist236167

Very amazing and is a good gamer fiction and has op mc 😂🤣🤣🤣😆😆😆😆🤣🤣🤣🤣😉🤣😉😘😘😍😍😎😋😋😋😎😍😍😆😉😆😍😎😎😍😍😆😉😉😉😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😍😍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂😆😆😎😄😃😁😂😊😊😀😝😕😀😊😊😗😕😕😀😊😊😗😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕💀💀💀💀💀😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🖕🖕😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

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LV 15

TheHanged_Man

Good history, amusing and all but the grammar is ****, my first langage is not English but its still hard to read xd. The 5 devil fruits is also op but personally I like when the mc only have 1 DF. But good job, just try to do more paragraph separe the line, etc. The text is too much together.