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One piece:Dark force( Hiatus)

Fantasy 38 章 1.0M ビュー
作者: RoScore

4.03 (13 レビュー結果)

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概要

Lex Gruber a sinister man is killed and transmitted to One piece world. See how he goes forth on his journey with his new found freedom to become a man feared by world.
What he desires is not to become the king of pirates but to be revered by all and to let loose all his unholy cravings.


Disclaimer: I don't own 'one piece'.My work is pure fan-fiction

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kwertyu

should've known not to expect to much i was liking the strory so far but it got ruined by tanya lol big busty retarded swordman i know it will be a wankfest very soon so i dropped it and there is no sinister at all it's just a typical chinese shallow wuxia mc trying to be dark and his devil fruit is lame it drains his strength to fast

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Lorelynf

Recommended! Recommended! RECOMMENDED BY SUPEEEER ME! IF YOU LOVE ONE PIECE AND LITTLE DARK HUMOR MC WITH BRAINS PLUS ONE UNIQUE DEVIL FRUIT THEN THIS IS FOR YOU! 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡 🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭 Puck inglesh.

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Booon
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bruh, i honestly don't say this often but i think this is really good and has a lot of potential, minor grammar issues but over all its REALLY good, <3 don't drop it, you have something going here.

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SVCERVANTES

You're an animal !!, one of the best novels I'm reading, why does it take you so long to show your talent by writing so few episodes? !!?!?! I look forward to new chapters, please do it periodically! Continue with this line of thinking, it is not necessary for the protagonist to be a man of charity, if someone tells you "I was hoping the protagonist was kinder ..." they are idiots, idiots! I give you all my support !!! [img=recommend]

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Uncle_Sheogorath

At first, it was fine I expected a villainous character. However, what I didn't expect is for the mc to be a crazy psychopath without any goals other than causing chaos. It is quite boring and also disturbing, for example, mc kills a boy's sick sister randomly and the author tries to justify it. WTF?

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moises_vahn

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Maxusssss

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avokadomango

Good book Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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