MY HAREM IN DC & MARVEL MULTIVERSE

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Xcalibur_Xc

Hello there. Author here with 5 star review as always. This is my first fan fiction and English isn't my native language. So, have a little patience with me and tell me if there are any typos or mistakes. Thank you for reading...

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Chaos_Order8

Until ch 100 the FF is still good. Nothing to complain about. The MC is good and all. The FL have good characters and are interesting not F*** Dolls. I do want see more action. And the new wallpaper is hot 🔥😍 Rouge if iam not wrong.

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Disturbing_Reality

I loved this fic the slow burn theme actually helped it develop so much I would recommend everyone reading this review to try it out but there's just one tiny problem WHERE'S PART 2?! I'm waiting for it's:

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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

The concept is nice but the story itself has too fast, random chaotic pacing to be easy to follow. It reads a bit like an MTL in writing quality too with wuxia typical situations. As the story progresses the pacing becomes faster and faster too. His sister who in the first 15 chapters is referred to in a way that it seems to be a little sister, turns out to not be all that little as the story suddenly takes an 18+ twist with her when shopping. Which is kinda awkward because you then realise that is was a language issue that caused the assumption that she was atleast 10 years younger untill that point that things take such a turn.... So yeah, on the whole, the concept is fun, but the story itself could do with some better pacing and more natural grammar in English.

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Moist_Lettace

So far im about 46 Chapters in and im really enjoying things. The writing quality is good so if you’re heavy on that its not a problem. Also I think the author did a good job integrating the Marvel and Dc worlds together.

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O_Mysery

I like how the author introduced some forgotten powers like void from Marvel and weapon master from DC while keeping it balanced as the fic's name. You have my praise for showing the dark side of the war instead of flashy fights that ignores the damage and deaths regular civilians suffer while the heroes go home safe and sound. And obviously, the s*xual contents are well written. Dialogues can be improved further. Overall an interesting concept depicting the daily life of a civilian MC struggling with his new power.

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jon_hathaway

so far not a bad read only complaint is i feel the mc has a bad attitude towards literally everything so far hopefully that gets better later in story but all round not a bad read

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Psan

quoute "It's an êrôge-focused story that isn't focused on serious stuff".... ME: Reads the problems that mc will face.. "The one who laughs"... how this is not serious lol?

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Xcalibur_Xc

I think I have mentioned what to expect from this fic in the fic description and in the first chapter. I also do public polls for the READERS OF CULTURES and then I decide what to focus on. Even then, some retards are spamming fake reviews and comments randomly without any explanations. THOSE BRAINLESS COMMENTS AND REVIEWS WILL BE DELETED>

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KingofTheWorld

If you are a man of culture, you must read this. Good writing and I like the story line[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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SystemUpdate

The best part of this FanFiction is the crossover with marvel, dc, and the authors inclusion of awakenings. While there aren’t many chapters, it’s still, in my opinion, one of the better fan fictions out there. This fanfiction and the spider are simply the best.

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Insert_Here

keep up the great work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Mustard555

Changing my review from 3 stars to 5 stars. The start of this fiction was too rough and the MC is one of the most hated characters from the start and many drop it due to that. Some even say they lost their brain cells and MC is idi#t. To them- Don't say that without reading the vol3. Do you know what character development is? Trust me, the character development of MC and the other characters around him is insane. I love the depth of the characters and the growth beyond what you often find in your regular fan fiction. You want a good story to read, this is it. Slow burn that rewards you in just perfect time.

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Daoistmzfncv

Good potential. Never expected proper story development after reading the first 3 chapters, but I was wrong. Good story progress. I don't mind the slow pace as long as the quality doesn't drop.

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krish_digwal

Nice amalgamation universe, I just i wished threre was a bit more chaos going on in the world, or hearing about the world, what is going on, would also be cool.

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Wesley_Hylry

the plot develops well, we have twists that surprised even me blue balling? so far yes, but the wait is worth it hehe 😏

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Mli_Po

i like these because there are no ntr and I quite like it

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Chickenthunder

I'm at chapter 50 and while the author has thrown a lot of information out way concerning the MC, his life and everything that is going on, it's not hard to follow at all and I'm rather enjoying the story. It's not all s*x like you would think it would be based on the title, it's well written and thought out so far, I will update my review once I get further into the novel.

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IRL21

One of the best written fanfic about a merged world. I like the author's idea of focusing on the changes in the life of a regular civilian rather than the same old heroes. It's really good and author used simple words for everyone to understand. Plus those awesome E scenes. Keep up the good work and ignore those toxic spammers reading without proper knowledge of the MCU and DCU.