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A young lady was suffering from an incurable disease and it destroyed her life. She died from the disease but a Being who lived since the beginning of time took pity on her and decided to grant her 6 wishes
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so far so great nine chapters in with so much potential and vanishingly rare plot setup mistakes forget the grammar it's Completely legible very eager for future chapters and giddy with thoughts of a complete novel of similar quality
Giving it a good rating because of the potential I see in it. .................................................. Let's hope it doesn't get dropped like many others I've read.
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I mostly like the story that happened and I want to continue the story. Furthermore, I like it more that there are kinds of magic in other animes.
Its great and all but the writing quality is a tad bit bad and i would recommend proof reading through but everything else is good
✨Хей, продолжай писать фанфик✨, он хорошо продуманный и без сюжетных дыр. Мне очень нравится читать это , про грамматику можешь забыть, пока это можно прочитать все в порядке. Прошу, продолжи писать фанфик, мне нравится 🥰
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I was too mean in the last review but still F*** you F*** harry Potter ................ . ................ . ................ . ...............
It needs editing so that the grammar is fixed but the story so far is good. So my rating is -1 star for the grammar but other then that the story is great so 4 stars I'm looking forward for more :D
Great story ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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I like the fanfiction ..............................🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜🖤💜💜💜🖤❤🧡💛💚💕💓💗💗💔
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Love the story please keep up the great work! Also is that immortality granting herb in her gate of babel? And any other interesting items in there she might use?
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This is a pretty good book although it has some grammar mistakes that can be easily fixed. The main character and the plot is better than other fanfics I've read.