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Summary: I was 6 years old, when I realized I was not simply reborn in the country that ruled over my own.. previous country, and in the time when said oppression was going on. Read on to find what I do in the Magical world of Harry Potter.
~~NO HAREM!~~
I won't focus much on his school life, as you might judge by the tags. But yes, I'll start in school, so don't worry.
SHOUT OUT TO MY OWN BOOK, "THE LEGENDS OF BALDUR!" READ IT IF YOU HAVEN'T!
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It's a hoax, it's a garbage harem, not a normal piece. The author put a false tag. It was a nice development of the main character's relationship, and he just added another girl just because. Garbage. 🖕🖕🖕🖕👎👎👎👎👎🖕🖕🖕🖕👎👎👎👎👎🖕🖕🖕🖕👎👎👎👎👎🖕🖕🖕🖕👎👎👎👎👎🖕🖕🖕🖕👎👎👎👎👎🖕🖕🖕🖕👎👎👎👎👎🖕🖕🖕🖕👎👎👎👎👎🖕🖕🖕🖕👎👎👎👎👎
IT'S NOT A HAREM!!! THANK GOD THE ALMIGHTY 🙇🙇🙇 Looking forward for more and hopefully you won't drop any of your work 🥺 Please don't. Thank you and Keep it up
So I dropped this at chapter 5, mostly because all the worlds are combined into the one he was born into. The problem lies in the fact that the worlds don't mesh well at all but for some reason the continuity stays the same as when they were different worlds. They somehow don't seem to know anything about each other at all? How do wizards not know about mutants? Muggles have known about mutants for a long time, its why they secretly hunt them down to experiment on, but wizards know nothing about them? The Author says Rowena Ravenclaw was a mutant/witch, Slitherin was likely one too. So why are they ignored by the ICW? Like I said these worlds don't mesh well at all and I'm sad because I truly liked the story up to this revelation.
This Gets infected guys The girl would give up her man if the Other girl is not okay with sharing went downhill Fast look Out fellow Anti-harem sect members but first 16 chapter is good authers excuse is ”2 people is not a harem” yes it is
It's a harem, with weird stuff as per usual with this author, read at your own risk expecting anything as this author doesn't bother to put the tags an goes far in saying "no harem" and then introduces another woman. Form your own opinion before posting a review though, read.
Fivevstar review for such a great author!!! I love how your timeskip on his study didn't disturb the plot and your interaction with people... The best part is your Mc uniqueness and his way of tackling problem.. This is Weirdo certified fanfic. Read at your own risk.
it's so hard to find a novel with good grammar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good writing quality. 🤩 Nice writing style. 🤩 Fabulous update speed. 🤩 Looking forward to see what will author pull from his hat here. 👍🏻
great fic but seriously dropped??? you have one on hiatus and dropped a really good fanfic. is it health reason? laziness? writers block? if your going to write then drop or put good stories on hiatus then just don't waste space on webnovel
The writing quality is good, great even for the standards of this site. The stability of updates is good, at least 1 or multiple updates every day so no problems there. The story is good, I like how it starts so far in the past instead of the usual Harry Potter Hogwarts Era. The world building is, well, harry potter, so there's obviously no problems there. As for character design, well it's not the characters who I have a problem with, it's just when you said 'no harem' I assumed it would be that, but no, the MC has 2 girls with him, and you could argue that it's not technically a harem, but author, I don't think you understand why people don't want harem in the first place. Well actually, this could just be my own reason and everyone else thinks differently, but for me, it's not because of the fact harems usually turn into the MC collecting pretty women instead of actual development, it's just because of the nature of multiple wives. I guess for me, as soon as the MC gets more than one girl it becomes an unequal relationship where the guy has multiple girls loyal to him and only him while he isn't just loyal to one person. It also really doesn't fit into the Harry Potter world where even the purebloods have one wife. Like, Lucius Malfoy in canon has one wife, and if there's anyone you'd expect to have multiple wives, it's him, at least in my opinion. In the end, it's a personal preference and I will just never enjoy 'harems' at all, and I would have appreciated a disclaimer that he gets into a relationship with more than one woman.
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Take my love dear author. Based on your previous novels I will give this novel 5 stars regardless of chapters. I just think you will do a great job as you did with those novels.
First 6 chapters are so good after mc become idiot İf you say your friend you can see their mind and manipulate them even if he dont break realationship with you she/he cant belavie you And he say some one can kill or make bad things to him if her friend say other people his abilities (lol) İf his friend doesnt have occulemency you are not safe and 700 years old ghost have a love with mc :D?? I dropped on 30 I think i found diamond but copper So many wrong information
A fantastic read so far! I generally don't write in-depth reviews because: 1. I like to let people make up their own minds and reviews are often too biased to really allow people to do so without influencing them before they have a chance to read. 2. I'm generally pants at getting my point/feelings across. But, for this Fan-fic, I feel the need to drop down my personal opinion so far (c40) of this story. I hope this encourages future readers to give this story a chance. Writing Quality (4/5): Is actually pretty solid, a few minor mistake with sentence structure, spelling and grammar, but it's easy to ignore for the most part. But I do strongly suggest to the Author that you do spend a few moments every other chapter reading back on you older releases and correcting these errors as you find them. It not only makes your story more immersive for it's readers, but it will also help write you going into the future. Stability of Updates (3/5): Well, I'm biased here. I doubt I will ever give a perfect 5/5 for any review I might give to anyone in the future, because releases are never fast enough for me. But so far, it's been alright! (WORK HARDER!) (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻ Story Development (5/5): The plot is well written and thought out. It flows nicely and generally makes sense. Also look, for people who hate on the 'harem' genre, the romance in this story isn't a 'harem'. It is a polygynous relationship at best and kinky at worst. A 3 person relationship in such a setting doth not make a harem. I suggest if you're not convinced that you actually google search the meaning of 'harem' and have your mind blown. Character Design (4/5): What can I say? So far your characters are well written and have quite some depth to them. If I had any real complaint about this topic, it's that your side characters don't really play any major role. I'd love to see more PoV's from the wives side, or even mini arc's where the wives play more of a role instead of the MC. But that's just me. World Background (5/5): My rating might change going into the future of the series, but it's unlikely with how well the story has been written to date. But honestly, if you can't get a 5/5 while using both Marvel and Harry Potter universes then you're clearly doing something wrong. Welp, I hope this helps anyone in the future. @Author: Keep up the great work!
Waste of time, completley ruined by harem. Doesnt even have the tag, but everything more than 1 is a harem and it completly ruines some characters. They become just your regular anime girls for no reason whatsoever. Would expect more from someone thar existed for afew centuries. Started good, becaame shit real fast.
A story in the Harry Potter world that doesn't revolve around him but is still well written, interesting and creative. It does cross over with another universe but very subtly and without destroying HP continuity or major impacting the story so far. The MC has gradual progression that accelerates as he solidifies his foundation without instantly becoming bullshitly OP.
Eight chapters in and it's quite good so far, easily above most works on this site. Author has implemented some new and interesting ideas to the world of Harry Potter so far which I've quite enjoyed such as a certain ghost and the Room of Requirements. Writing Quality - Grammar is quite good with few errors and has likely been edited/revised before being posted. Sentences and paragraphs are well-structured and are easy to read as well as visually pleasing. No massive paragraph blocks here! Update Stability - Eight chapters in three days. Nuff said. Story Development - Blitzing through the early years, and that's a good thing too. I'm biased here as I don't enjoy reading about young MC's so this is great! :) Character Design - MC is a self insert and other characters have had very little detail given. The chapters to date have focused more on the development of the MC's capabilities not the people and their interactions. World Background - Very very little world building. We know the world is a mix of Harry Potter and Marvel, the current Date, and potential future events. You could say 'you don't need to build the world if we know he belongs to Marvel/HP mix', and I somewhat agree, but he has spent several years in this world. He should be learning about what he 'knows' from the books/movies/comics to what his reality is, and that should be reflected somehow.
Just started reading the novel and right now I am at 3rd chapter. Gotta say, I love it. Compared to the other fanfiction on this site, it is a gold mine. so, spoilers, the story starts at 1924 so it is a long way from the main cast of harry Potter, he is also about 8years elder to Tom riddle with the guant bloodline, so I have lot of expectations for this novel. The MC is a normal human, unlike most times where it's a psychopath or a sociopath or a really horny teenager. so there that as a bonus. Read the novel, This is a hidden gem.
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Not many chapters but it’s already one of my favorites. Really like how you’re starting things author, great work and can’t wait for dozens of more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!
First of all whyd you drop the book? And for that I curse you second of all I enjoyed the book and its amazing and for that I thank you for writing it but do you really habe to drop this one its amazing ya know
COMPLETELY SHAMELESS AUTHOR! Yes, know the votes aren't working for this book, I've contacted the Customer service, and they said they'll work on it. I'm just waiting now. Cheers!