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Majin's Journey

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作者: Yoesph

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Waking up in the middle of space with no memories and a strange body will throw anybody for a loop, especially if you happen to be in the world of DBZ.

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It's my first ever story, and I don't have a solid plan on where to take it or how the characterization will go. It will be a slower story and is mostly just for my own practice, but if I start developing something I enjoy, I will plan things more extensively. Please leave any and all feedback!

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Yoesph

Author Review: Hey, guys! I hope to get great feedback and grow as a writer during this story. Any comments, ideas, or criticisms are welcome!

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Full_superior123

I know this is late but I have to say the author is trying so hard to nerf his majin abilities and magic it’s not even funny he’s semi-fear of changing canon which doesn’t matter in the long run forgets cell or gero can steal dna/data if he goes to earth best place to go is yardrat to train his body and mind for more move skills. ……………just a review……………….

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Finnish_man

Very good amezing stuff cant wiat for more tho i am good at englhis lol

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