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Ye Ming transmigrated to a world of swords and magic, here there are giant dragons, elves, orcs, magical beasts, the undead… Ye Ming realized that he was a student who obtained the last place at the Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry and was about to be expelled. “Ding, Supreme Skills System, loading……” “Ding, unknown reason, system bug has occurred……” “Fixing bug……” “Bug fixed, skill points remaining: max!” …… Looking at the skill panel that had appeared before his eyes, Ye Ming tried to click on the “+” icon behind the “Fireball” magic. “Ding! Your Fireball has improved, currently Level 6.” “Ding! Your Fireball has improved, currently Level 7.” “Ding! Your Fireball has improved, currently Level 8.” “Ding! Your Fireball has improved, currently Level 9.”...... “Congratulations on your self-taught mastery, you have understood the “Laws of Blasting Fire’, your Fireball has evolved to become Forbidden Spell: Dark Sun Blast!” Looking at the enormous fireball that was as deep and dark as a black hole floating before him, Ye Ming smiled and started going crazy on his skill points…… The next day, Ye Ming dragged his exhausted body to the wizardry academy library. He knew that he had to learn new skills now. Because~ the skills that he’d learned before all became forbidden spells! He tried to light a fire for a barbeque and almost blasted away the entire academy!
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レビューを書くThe concept is really godamn good, and the story could actually pull off such a thing in the earlier chapters. However, during the tournament that I forget why the mc joins in, there's a beauty... a beauty who was 'So exceptionally cold' and then just decides to not be cold anymore when she sees the mc and how powerful he is. Of course, at the moment, the story is still not THAT bad, but I think I know where the story is going.
Problems:- 1. Bad sentence structure 2. Unreasonable occurrences of exclamations 3. Bad logic Not recommended at all. I gave this a try despite red flags, and I regretted it. Your English skills might degrade by prolonged exposure to this sort of content, so read at your own risk.
I kinda like the idea of the more overpowered spells costing more, so that he has to constantly get new spells. Then has to upgrade those spells to fight enemies many before he's ready. Just sounds cool.
dont waste your time, this novel so trash even trash can feel proud about themself. you better read children and yet found it more interesting than this one.
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Clickbait with Hogwarts No romance tag even though romance appears early on Garbage writing like from some child fantasy Cliches Do i have to say even more to tell you to go away? Dont waste your time on trash like this!!!
Trash.... Plot holes everywhere.... For example when the mc fired the op fireball it was basically like a small sun and yet he survived.... just depleted of mama and I'm sure at his stage he shouldn't be able to cast that in the first place having unlimited skill points is one thing having unlimited mana is another mastery increased not level so I can't get why the spell evolved into something so op instead of intermediate mastery..ECT second the mc is braindead where is the character interface? I want to see his int stat because I'm sure it's 1 and it's says his skill points reached the maximum not unlimited I'm sure the system has a level of sp until a certain level Chinese and medieval doesn't mix I see you tried but you didn't put much thought into as I can see I could feel my brain cells going crazy screaming to run away just at the first chapter I know I'm just a buzz kill but it is what it is this is trash 🗑️.
Not even decent novels these days just trash ´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´ ´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´ ´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´ ´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´
This story improved my understanding of the phrase “mind-numbing”. 120% cliche. I thought one-sentence paragraphs were bad, but apparently that’s not “exciting” enough, so here we see half-sentence paragraphs. I’m sorry — I could not make it past chapter 2. It felt like I was reading Invisible Dragon except with less soul.
I really like the concept but reading these 20 chaps I don't know why he didn't learn any other spells I mean all he gotta do is just stare at those spells right.
Making money off of fanfiction is ILLEGAL. And this is far from being considered good fanfiction. The original itself is only good for its world building, and this has gone into the negatives. Even if it's originally in Chinese, this should be found elsewhere than in Trial. True rating: 0*
Clickbait with Hogwarts No romance tag even though romance appears early on Garbage writing like from some child fantasy Cliches Do i have to say even more to tell you to go away? Dont waste your time on trash like this!
I don't know if its just me but I don't like how magic learning is systematic learning. Everyone learns the same spells and you have to "cultivate" to learn spells. I would like it much more if there were some creativity involved with the spells. I've seen this exact fireball spell almost 10 times in 10 different novels by now.
The story had an interesting concept but the writing is so dumb that it ruins it for me. MC randomly joins a fighting ring to gain money before explaining what he needs money for. Then he spends days fighting there instead of covering his basics and learning the skilled needed to protect himself. A shield spell or perhaps evasion or something. Maybe find some good passive skills. Instead the MC wastes his time and ours with banal nonsense.
I don't even know wth I'm reading. Hogwarts? What? This is just some random CN garbage mixed with some western magic, it makes no sense whatsoever.
This story is about a transmigrator whose system only activates after three years. In those three years, he’s become infamous as a half-baked mage who can’t manage to do anything more than light up a cigarette. Fortunately for him, his system has a bug when it activates and in trying to fix itself, it gives the MC infinite skill points. And well, I’m sure most Webnovel readers know this song and dance already. He’s able to easily become OP and overturn everyone’s opinion on him. It’s basically the same old story. But the translation is decent enough, so if this kind of OP story is the kind you enjoy, it’s a solid choice for a light read as long as you don’t expect anything groundbreaking.
feels like it was written by a grade schooler. definitely on the list of trash novels not worth wasting time on, but not the absolute worst on this platform plot is a mixture of contrived nonsense and cliches and illogical thought processes. feels like the love child of a bad fan-fic of some bad isekai novel met a bad cultivation novel, and then the scenes were chopped up and thrown together. i think the author had some scenes from other novels in mind and tried to recreate them into his poorly thought out story. not the worst on this platform, but it is on the list of trash i don't want to read. could have genuinely been written by a kid. if so, sorry for the scathing review, maybe come back to writing after you have more experience/graduate from grade-school? if you enjoy this novel: my condolences, the webnovel app must have taken it's toll on you. I feel your pain, there are many bad stories on here, but try to recover, maybe pick up a "professional" novel every now and then so as to dilute your sinking standards with something of quality?
can't remember the last time I saw an original story in trial read. everything is just pure garbage now. if I could I would give 0 stars. 😠