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Nothing more than an ATG fanfiction.
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Well... Its very good so far. The author translates from PR-BR to English so the grammar mistakes are there but don't get in the way of the reading, so that's good. I like the interactions with Jasmine but I wish you could treat her better. For a 13-year-old girl, she has suffered a lot. So give her tasty food and desserts like cakes. Make her food from earth or chat about other realities with her, tell her stories from earth like bella and the beast. Like telling her about his previous life without mentioning the novel of course. Like Humans in his past life could fly without profound energy,.
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Very good novel i like it Good start keep going like that ...............................................................................................................................................
I like it and the direction its heading plus their aren't many fic's that revolve around ATG and have a good plot progression like this one
I have been looking for a good Against the gods story for a while now everytime I find one it is either abandoned or the person writing brings in to many different animes and never actually uses any of the techniques in the universe the main character is in and it spoils the story. Keep up the good work so far [img=update]
The story is amazing, I enjoy reading it, so please keep the chapters coming. Also, ignore the haters, they can just drop the story.
I hope to see this story continue to progress, and don't make haters get in your way. Honestly, I don't see them writing any story.
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There is any news about the author and new chapter? or should we consider as author already dropped? I really like this plot and hope the author can continue.
The update is really bad but the story is good . .. . . . ... . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. .. . . . . . . .
you have made this story truly likable so I hope you won't drop it and continue to write this novel i am rooting for you.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
aside from bit of word change, the writing quality is easy to read...mc is straight forward which is a +......... I recommend giving it a try
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this is off to a great start. keep it up. I'm looking forward to the next chapters, author. Ganbatte😜 (Sorry, my bad english. So, i use google translate XD)