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Jauary John

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作者: minatoflash

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John was an exorcist who tries to help innocent people from the grasps of ghosts and other evil entities.

He believes that he is helping those people in need, but is that true? Did he really help those people?

He didn't want to believe the other way, those who raised him taught that.

He has a secret that even he himself doesn't know. What would happen is that those in the opposite faction take advantage of this and try to manipulate everything.

The powers that he has will end those innocent people's lives? Did he finally get corrupted according to the enemies?

Let's dive into the story of Jauary John and find the answers.

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    minatoflash

    I hope everyone will enjoy my work. I will try my best to make it better.

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    Rex_xx

    Great concept, I want to read more of it.

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    Felition

    These are good but we need more horrifying moments. Consider introducing eerie settings, unexpected twists, and building suspense with chilling details. Amplify the fear factor by delving into characters' fears and vulnerabilities. Creating a sense of dread can enhance the overall horror experience.

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    Moonlight_sword

    great story, but you need to add more horror elements into it

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    Edwin_Peter

    Since the story said to be a fantasy and going as a horror story I'm giving you four stars

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    Check_Ing_5395

    I like this story so i gave you power stone and popularity.

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    Chandrank

    nice story. keep up the good work. expecting for more episodes

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    Adityaron

    You better read more novels like these to improve your style of writing.

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    Shuzam_Thunder

    The world background is a little mystery in this story. I have a feeling that it is similar to ours.

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    Elijm
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    Adrion_Nicole

    Your story is compelling, but refining your English could enhance its impact. Consider incorporating additional content into each episode to heighten the overall intrigue and engagement. Still, I'm giving you 5 stars to encourage you. Good luck.

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    sususasu

    keep up the good work. better work on your grammar though.[img=update]

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    Xerionn

    I love the idea, I hope that you can add some more interesting elements to the story to keep it engaging.

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    Shuzam_Thunder

    Expecting more thrilling events and twists

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    Elijm
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    I love possession based novels. but you need to add more details about how they get possessed and what they do after getting possessed.

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    akkon_Regain

    I think this is interesting is it horror or fantasy

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    jojirqm
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    Esta es una historia lenta pero emocionante, especialmente cuando llega a los últimos capítulos. Muy impresionante.

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    A_stanslavas

    The story name is the name of the main character and he died. Where is this story going?

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