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Esta es una historia lenta pero emocionante, especialmente cuando llega a los últimos capítulos. Muy impresionante.
The story name is the name of the main character and he died. Where is this story going?
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I love the idea, I hope that you can add some more interesting elements to the story to keep it engaging.
I love possession based novels. but you need to add more details about how they get possessed and what they do after getting possessed.
Since the story said to be a fantasy and going as a horror story I'm giving you four stars
The world background is a little mystery in this story. I have a feeling that it is similar to ours.
These are good but we need more horrifying moments. Consider introducing eerie settings, unexpected twists, and building suspense with chilling details. Amplify the fear factor by delving into characters' fears and vulnerabilities. Creating a sense of dread can enhance the overall horror experience.
Your story is compelling, but refining your English could enhance its impact. Consider incorporating additional content into each episode to heighten the overall intrigue and engagement. Still, I'm giving you 5 stars to encourage you. Good luck.
Esta es una historia lenta pero emocionante, especialmente cuando llega a los últimos capítulos. Muy impresionante.
The story name is the name of the main character and he died. Where is this story going?
ネタバレを明かす I love the idea, I hope that you can add some more interesting elements to the story to keep it engaging.
I love possession based novels. but you need to add more details about how they get possessed and what they do after getting possessed.
Since the story said to be a fantasy and going as a horror story I'm giving you four stars
The world background is a little mystery in this story. I have a feeling that it is similar to ours.
These are good but we need more horrifying moments. Consider introducing eerie settings, unexpected twists, and building suspense with chilling details. Amplify the fear factor by delving into characters' fears and vulnerabilities. Creating a sense of dread can enhance the overall horror experience.
Your story is compelling, but refining your English could enhance its impact. Consider incorporating additional content into each episode to heighten the overall intrigue and engagement. Still, I'm giving you 5 stars to encourage you. Good luck.
I hope everyone will enjoy my work. I will try my best to make it better.