概要
***WARNING*** SO BAD GRAMMAR THAT IT WILL MAKE YOUR EYES BLEED
Assassin who got transported to Akame Ga Kill world. What else to say?
MC: "emotionless", ruthless
I don't own Akame Ga Kill or anything related to it.
This is my first writing experience and English is not my main language.
Cover image was shamelessly stolen from: https://www.pinterest.co.uk/pin/173036810661740329/
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This novel is very good and I love to read it ,cool and cold MC without too broken abilities and the daily release with long chapters is just a blessing thanks for uploading this novel and keep up the good work ,giving you 5 stars for the novel. I recommend everyone to read this novel this one of the best akame ga kill fan fiction for those who cursed the original for the ****ed up story. Support the author with power stones and comments.
Good novel....... 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍Just dont kill night raid.... Mc x esdeath x akame .............., 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This turns into crap after chapter 12, this novel started out really well, with him being a cold-hearted assassin, etc, and thinking logically. However when canon arrives.. that goes down the drain.. his personality changes, in literally a chapter or 2, and is now wanting to save people he barely knows, and starts doing rash things for these people he does not know! dropped
I also like akame ga kill but im not a fan ... not vad 4 a fanfic but.... u author left so much detailes un explained... not every reader watch Akame Ga Kil... and ur setting is full of holes... like how the hell did the MC knew that his in that universe by just checking his body? And he even knew the direction of village? And the timeline?? Wtf i will remove this fanfic from my reading list... goodbye
I've just finished chapter 20 as I'm writing this and I have to say that I'm very happy with your work. There's not much a good fanfic out there but this definitely belong to the good ones. I want to give some suggestions for your writing : 1. Be confident to try and write something you haven't tried before, just start little by little and it will improve the story quality in the future. 2. Don't be a pushover and write everything that the readers want. This is your work and you need to consider what is good or help improve the story and ignore demand like MC pairing which doesn't align with his personality. 3. Write at your own pace and don't let it disturb your real life. Keep your body and mind healthy. That's all I got to say and I'll be watching how your work continues.
This fanf fic is about akame of all thing and I am goong to see what comes of it. It has 5 star all around do to how the story is a bit cynical but amazed at this point in time. You get that part when its this story cough* I wish this story the best all in all!
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Did the author die? Where are the chapters? At least give the readers a warning if your gonna take a break or something. What the **** is up with this bull**** about being a 140-word minimum? I have seen plenty of reviews that just consist of the "Exp" and emoji bull****. Where is the justice? Is the website/app discriminating against me? It's because I'm a bear, isn't it? When I say bear don't think I'm a furry, it's cause of my name CapGrizzlyBear1203.
I like it a lot. At first, there was a lot of time skipping, but it made sense because he had to train for so long. Honestly, I hope he doesn't go against Night Raid and eventually teams up with them or something. Shipping MC and Esdeath. Also, I hope he accepts Ruby as a disciple. Hoping the author comes back and continues writing this.
Great novel keep up the good work. Great novel keep up the good work. Great novel keep up the good work. Great novel keep up the good work.
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when i found this particular novel i was interested in the title because of the similarities it had with irregular in magic high, however the story is pretty good with an interesting mc and i feel that it can go beyond the original anime story line for the setting of becoming a god. Perhaps the author should take up writing this story again if they find my review helpful. For the original storyline within the anime portion you should slow it down to match the pace of the anime from where you left off and continue to develop hte relationstip between mc and esdeath.
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A really mind-boggling question for me. Why is Seion's works considered top worthy while something like this isn't? I know he makes chapters as fast as I lose brain cells reading his work but they are all quite short and they are written even worse than chicken ****. Unless Webnovel is slowly being infected with cancer (Which it already is, yes you harem retards) then there's no way, just no way I can find a reason for this not being on the top. Yes the grammar might iff here to there but Seion's trash are even worse though, he can't even write it normally without the (!!!) and (...) after each and every sentence.
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Did the author die? Where are the chapters? At least give the readers a warning if your gonna take a break or something. What the **** is up with this bull**** about being a 140-word minimum? I have seen plenty of reviews that just consist of the "Exp" and emoji bull****. Where is the justice? Is the website/app discriminating against me? It's because I'm a bear, isn't it? When I say bear don't think I'm a furry, it's cause of my name CapGrizzlyBear1203.