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I like it a lot. At first, there was a lot of time skipping, but it made sense because he had to train for so long. Honestly, I hope he doesn't go against Night Raid and eventually teams up with them or something. Shipping MC and Esdeath. Also, I hope he accepts Ruby as a disciple. Hoping the author comes back and continues writing this.
This turns into crap after chapter 12, this novel started out really well, with him being a cold-hearted assassin, etc, and thinking logically. However when canon arrives.. that goes down the drain.. his personality changes, in literally a chapter or 2, and is now wanting to save people he barely knows, and starts doing rash things for these people he does not know! dropped
Ellerine. Saglik yeni bolum gelse cok guzel olurdu offf. Atsan olmazmi lutfen ama yinede cok guzel ellerine saglik Ben bole gelisme istiyorudum tesekurler
Great novel keep up the good work. Great novel keep up the good work. Great novel keep up the good work. Great novel keep up the good work.
Did the author die? Where are the chapters? At least give the readers a warning if your gonna take a break or something. What the **** is up with this bull**** about being a 140-word minimum? I have seen plenty of reviews that just consist of the "Exp" and emoji bull****. Where is the justice? Is the website/app discriminating against me? It's because I'm a bear, isn't it? When I say bear don't think I'm a furry, it's cause of my name CapGrizzlyBear1203.
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when i found this particular novel i was interested in the title because of the similarities it had with irregular in magic high, however the story is pretty good with an interesting mc and i feel that it can go beyond the original anime story line for the setting of becoming a god. Perhaps the author should take up writing this story again if they find my review helpful. For the original storyline within the anime portion you should slow it down to match the pace of the anime from where you left off and continue to develop hte relationstip between mc and esdeath.
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A really mind-boggling question for me. Why is Seion's works considered top worthy while something like this isn't? I know he makes chapters as fast as I lose brain cells reading his work but they are all quite short and they are written even worse than chicken ****. Unless Webnovel is slowly being infected with cancer (Which it already is, yes you harem retards) then there's no way, just no way I can find a reason for this not being on the top. Yes the grammar might iff here to there but Seion's trash are even worse though, he can't even write it normally without the (!!!) and (...) after each and every sentence.
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While at first, I found it good. The MC was an Assasin and not a wannabe, he was cold but then that cold icy exterior started to melt after meeting Shadow. After that, I started to find some flaws with the character development and some inconsistencies in the plot. Due to this, I was about to quit, but then it started to get better, like, way better than before. He may not be the perfect Assasin but nonetheless, he is still very dangerous. His icy exterior started to peel/melt off even more after meeting Esdeath and the character development was really smooth, it didn't feel unnatural at all. Overall, this is a hidden gem, or maybe not so hidden oh well either wich is fine. Btw the warning is complete bull****, the Grammar is not that bad, not the best but it is still good compared to others and is readable so I could actually understand the Storyline
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Honestly speaking the novel itself is very good and the character descriptions are awesome but the updates aren't as frequent anymore making it less interesting.
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ninguém vai bater tão duro como a vida. Mas não trata-se de bater duro: se trata de quanto você aguenta apanhar e seguir em frente, o quanto você é capaz de tentar e continuar aguentando. É assim que se consegue vencer
ninguém vai bater tão duro como a vida. Mas não trata-se de bater duro: se trata de quanto você aguenta apanhar e seguir em frente, o quanto você é capaz de tentar e continuar aguentando. É assim que se consegue vencer
Might wanna use grammerly. Plot seems ok so far but the grammer puts people off. You have to describe your fight scenes better as well. After all, this is akame ga kill so I expect many fight scenes as well. But your grammer ruins it. Get an editor as well to proofread
Rate you highly only on stability but you really need to improve your grammer. Your fight scenes are written quite terribly and you should hire some editor to proofread your story. Your worle background is nothing, just the usual akame ga kill. Nothing new
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This novel is very good and I love to read it ,cool and cold MC without too broken abilities and the daily release with long chapters is just a blessing thanks for uploading this novel and keep up the good work ,giving you 5 stars for the novel. I recommend everyone to read this novel this one of the best akame ga kill fan fiction for those who cursed the original for the ****ed up story. Support the author with power stones and comments.
Did the author die? Where are the chapters? At least give the readers a warning if your gonna take a break or something. What the **** is up with this bull**** about being a 140-word minimum? I have seen plenty of reviews that just consist of the "Exp" and emoji bull****. Where is the justice? Is the website/app discriminating against me? It's because I'm a bear, isn't it? When I say bear don't think I'm a furry, it's cause of my name CapGrizzlyBear1203.
I like it a lot. At first, there was a lot of time skipping, but it made sense because he had to train for so long. Honestly, I hope he doesn't go against Night Raid and eventually teams up with them or something. Shipping MC and Esdeath. Also, I hope he accepts Ruby as a disciple. Hoping the author comes back and continues writing this.
This turns into crap after chapter 12, this novel started out really well, with him being a cold-hearted assassin, etc, and thinking logically. However when canon arrives.. that goes down the drain.. his personality changes, in literally a chapter or 2, and is now wanting to save people he barely knows, and starts doing rash things for these people he does not know! dropped
Ellerine. Saglik yeni bolum gelse cok guzel olurdu offf. Atsan olmazmi lutfen ama yinede cok guzel ellerine saglik Ben bole gelisme istiyorudum tesekurler
Great novel keep up the good work. Great novel keep up the good work. Great novel keep up the good work. Great novel keep up the good work.
Did the author die? Where are the chapters? At least give the readers a warning if your gonna take a break or something. What the **** is up with this bull**** about being a 140-word minimum? I have seen plenty of reviews that just consist of the "Exp" and emoji bull****. Where is the justice? Is the website/app discriminating against me? It's because I'm a bear, isn't it? When I say bear don't think I'm a furry, it's cause of my name CapGrizzlyBear1203.
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when i found this particular novel i was interested in the title because of the similarities it had with irregular in magic high, however the story is pretty good with an interesting mc and i feel that it can go beyond the original anime story line for the setting of becoming a god. Perhaps the author should take up writing this story again if they find my review helpful. For the original storyline within the anime portion you should slow it down to match the pace of the anime from where you left off and continue to develop hte relationstip between mc and esdeath.
Writing Quality - ??? [*Ding.. Host seu nivel e insuficiente para poder saber a verdade] -------------------------------------------------------------------- Stability of Updates - ??? [*Ding.. Host seu nivel e insuficiente para poder saber a verdade] ------------------------------------------------------------------- Story Development - ??? [*Ding.. Host seu nivel e insuficiente para poder saber a verdade] ------------------------------------------------------------------- Character Design - ??? [*Ding.. Host seu nivel e insuficiente para poder saber a verdade] ------------------------------------------------------------------- World Background - ??? [*Ding.. Host seu nivel e insuficiente para poder saber a verdade] -------------------------------------------------------------------
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A really mind-boggling question for me. Why is Seion's works considered top worthy while something like this isn't? I know he makes chapters as fast as I lose brain cells reading his work but they are all quite short and they are written even worse than chicken ****. Unless Webnovel is slowly being infected with cancer (Which it already is, yes you harem retards) then there's no way, just no way I can find a reason for this not being on the top. Yes the grammar might iff here to there but Seion's trash are even worse though, he can't even write it normally without the (!!!) and (...) after each and every sentence.
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While at first, I found it good. The MC was an Assasin and not a wannabe, he was cold but then that cold icy exterior started to melt after meeting Shadow. After that, I started to find some flaws with the character development and some inconsistencies in the plot. Due to this, I was about to quit, but then it started to get better, like, way better than before. He may not be the perfect Assasin but nonetheless, he is still very dangerous. His icy exterior started to peel/melt off even more after meeting Esdeath and the character development was really smooth, it didn't feel unnatural at all. Overall, this is a hidden gem, or maybe not so hidden oh well either wich is fine. Btw the warning is complete bull****, the Grammar is not that bad, not the best but it is still good compared to others and is readable so I could actually understand the Storyline
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Honestly speaking the novel itself is very good and the character descriptions are awesome but the updates aren't as frequent anymore making it less interesting.
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ninguém vai bater tão duro como a vida. Mas não trata-se de bater duro: se trata de quanto você aguenta apanhar e seguir em frente, o quanto você é capaz de tentar e continuar aguentando. É assim que se consegue vencer
ninguém vai bater tão duro como a vida. Mas não trata-se de bater duro: se trata de quanto você aguenta apanhar e seguir em frente, o quanto você é capaz de tentar e continuar aguentando. É assim que se consegue vencer
Might wanna use grammerly. Plot seems ok so far but the grammer puts people off. You have to describe your fight scenes better as well. After all, this is akame ga kill so I expect many fight scenes as well. But your grammer ruins it. Get an editor as well to proofread
Rate you highly only on stability but you really need to improve your grammer. Your fight scenes are written quite terribly and you should hire some editor to proofread your story. Your worle background is nothing, just the usual akame ga kill. Nothing new
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This novel is very good and I love to read it ,cool and cold MC without too broken abilities and the daily release with long chapters is just a blessing thanks for uploading this novel and keep up the good work ,giving you 5 stars for the novel. I recommend everyone to read this novel this one of the best akame ga kill fan fiction for those who cursed the original for the ****ed up story. Support the author with power stones and comments.
Did the author die? Where are the chapters? At least give the readers a warning if your gonna take a break or something. What the **** is up with this bull**** about being a 140-word minimum? I have seen plenty of reviews that just consist of the "Exp" and emoji bull****. Where is the justice? Is the website/app discriminating against me? It's because I'm a bear, isn't it? When I say bear don't think I'm a furry, it's cause of my name CapGrizzlyBear1203.