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A man died in our world. Due to the rules of reincarnation and the amount of Karma he had attained in life, he was reincarnated into an alternate world he was familiar with. Unfortunately for him, he was going to the world of Invincible.
Now he must not only survive against the normal superhero threats but also the Viltrumite threat
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At first I was really loving the story and his unique ability but it kinda ruined the story when he killed both mark and omniman. Like I somewhat understand him killing Omniman even though there was probably a way to solve the issue without killing him but mark killing eve was completely random. Especially when he should a have been helping his bro out at that moment or at least trying to stop the fight or something. Like mark wouldn't sit back and watch his father and brother kill each other even if he is weak. I feel like that chapter was just extremely rushed and out of place but I enjoyed the story before then.👍
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Giving up on all Invincible fics after this, most of them are written to be "Gary Stu wants to suck off Invincible and have teenage drama", it quickly got boring but qith the amount of fake 5 star reviews that get spammed as soon as the first chapter dropa on this site/app, then stories like this end up with more than 4 stars
It was good however in the most recent chapter mc killed both Omni man and invincible And invincable killed eve so not my cup of tea but it has good grammar the character writing is alright and it updates a lot
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Great story and interesting main character. However the character designs for the side characters are lacking and are kind of 2D. Not much world building because it kind of assumes you know invincible story. Though a little rushed it is a great story and I hope that the author continues to write and not get burned out. Just one thing I dislike is that Invincible, my favorite character, is dead.
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The grammar is excellent there are no plot holes that I could see, overall it was kind of nice to read. However there are no arcs or plot that makes one invested in the story, and it's more like reading a diary, I personally lost interest at chapter 8 and dropped it.
Love your kiri fic and I've read that so long ago. And today I was like is there any invincible fics and bam! Your just popped off when I searched invincible thank you for writing this
this is one of the little times that I don't know what I will say about a novel more than good, so good job author I can't wait for more chapters
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A little learning is a dangerous thing. I don’t know what happen in 2nd season. But I think Omni man might become a good person. And I think Because of MC Invincible died. If he let the plot go the way it went out in series ( where invincible fight Omni man), Invincible might not become what he became. It's just my opinion.
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Great novel[img=recommend] Would have loved it if you really completed the novel.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
THIS is gold i couldn't stop until I was finished this story was wonderful please give us more or at least a sequel to this masterpiece of a book
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Calidad de la escritura (4/5); Estabilidad de las actualizaciones (1/5); Desarrollo de la historia (4/5); Diseño de personaje (5/5); Fondo mundial (5/5). *Por desgracia, el autor, abandono esta historia en el capitulo 26, en lo personal me parece EL MEJOR FANFIC vasado en INVENCIBLE (comic). Si buscas un fanfic de INVENCIBLE con profundidad, realismo y sin ser una copia de la versión animada, te lo recomiendo encarecidamente.
Harem or no harem? His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy There's vomit on his sweater already: Mom's spaghetti He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready To drop bombs, but he keeps on forgetting What he wrote down, the whole crowd goes so loud He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out He's choking, how? Everybody's joking now The clock's run out, time's up, over, blaow! Snap back to reality