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*SYSTEM ISN'T SENTIENT*
What happens when a person from our world wakes up in a sewer as a Skeleton? What happens when he finds out he is in the ever expanding and dangerous world of Marvel?
This is what happened to Ethan Blackett. A normal science teacher in his previous life, he is now thrust into the world of danger and intrigue as a monster.
Now, armed with the ability to travel to dungeon World's, and a gacha system, Ethan starts his journey of evolving to the peak and becoming the strongest in the universe.
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A/N: FL will be Lady Death.
The system is a gacha.
Also the progression will be a little slower. He won't become instantly overpowered.
Ethan uses his wits and not just power, you can see that in the way he deals with goblins in the first few chapters, using his abilities with cunning instead of fighting enemies head on.
The Marvel universe will be an AU, a mix of Fantastic Four, MCU, Comics and X-Men.
In future, Ethan will only be dependent on system for Gacha, anything else, he will be able to do it on his own, not right now tho.
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A good character design and the updating stability is good as well and I wasn't able to find
When it says the system isn't sentinent, that's all I need to read to bookmark this fanfic. Probably should always put that at the top.
I know I'm not that good and that's why I need your help. Please point out plot holes or something I missed, helps me improve. Also, don't just trash it for no reason because I already have a hard time writing as is with the pressure of college exams and then a part time job along with pressure from my parents to get a government job. I can't handle unjustified trashing man, it hurts my soul, which doesn't usually care about most things. Anyways, too much of sob story of my life, not like I am worse than many people out there. So ask any questions about the fic that you have and give some love through those power stones people.
Well, you should skip the part that it's a rewrite, usually rewrites are abandoned very quickly that's why people don't take the time to read.
It’s a really good fanfic, however I have one major problem with the dialogue. It’s way too formal. Like every conversation is way too formal that it starts to feel stiff between characters. If you can fix the dialogue, then I’d give this a five star rating. Other than that, I’m loving it. But please try to fix it.
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You should make the FL lady death. That way they’re both skeletons.