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MC gets reincarnated into the World of Game fo Thrones with the LOTR system.This is written for pure entertainment purposes and nothing else.
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Grammer has some serious issues not like not knowing english, more along the lines of not knowing how to use auto correct or spell check, the words are combined and punctuation is non existsnt so that sentance structure makes it unreadable, which I dont say lightly. Plot is ok and idea itself is a great idea just poorly executed with 0 true backstory and just using the system to just insert anything the author can't plan out on their own, overall unreadable, but decent idea.
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Theirs like a bunch of stuff wrong with this fic I cant even start to list them like the biggest problem with this fic is its grammar like it's really and I mean it really hard to follow so of the stuff dont even make sense, and my second problem about this story in how the author literally just gives the name of the character original LOTR character to the M.C when he could have been original and given him a name but that's like most authors on this sight.
I can't call this story more than a teenage fantasy, a harem and an easy walk of the main character through the world of Game of Thrones, that's the whole point of this story
for me the mc SHOULD not even be there, have you ever seen a president (king) giving advice to another country (kingdom) I don't think so? or also staying in another kingdom that is not his, it is as if he is no longer native to his own land, and also because he made the mc a king but he is not doing any of that he is just a councilor from another kingdom nothing more , I here excited to see a mc king of his OWN KINGDOM, but I see a councilor from a kingdom that is not even native
The idea is good but the writing is really bad. From Grammar to spelling to words that do not even make sense being there. It’s really hard to read with so many mistakes
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I didn't even get past chapter 2 all the errors that are on there even with the paragraph comment corrections that the author never used actually fix the chapters even after 7 months it's not worth the read cuz it's like he just threw words on a paper and didn't even try to fix anything that was wrong with them
the story is nice but the grammar and the spelling . seriously dude please find a editor or someone to help out with proof reading your chapters. it really ruins the mood when some lines go line . "Dragon hold sword down foot kick and her" really please get an editor
Needless to say, this story has a lot to improve on. However, I have to emphasize that the author is on the right track, I just have to hope that the author continues to progress as a writer, and that he continues to update this peculiar story
i like the fanfic pls double check the sentences it's sometimes unreadable keep up the update bro
the story is good like the storyline but I would like it if you would slow down( don't make the story feel rushed) and it would be better if you are not making most of the characters immortals or if you want to make them immortals don't make everyone an immortal let it be a privilege to only people that are close to them another thing you did not account for is in his kingdom there are supposed to people that will start losing their bloodlines to marrying of people that don't have magic
Not for me, read the first 9 chapters and we'll what can I say other than I found it rather boring. Just feels like the MC is granted everything easily and the way the author writes just feels like like someone is pressing the fast forward button on a remote. First chapter for example he dead, reincarnates and then mentions a starter pack and then it's all skipped over with the MC having a settlement of dwarves and elves. All the best but not for me which is a shame due to elements used.
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actually there are many plothole in this fanfic, but because I really enjoy reading this fanfic, I give it a rating of 4.2. unlike other fanfics that have a lot of plotholes and the story is difficult for me to enjoy and the fanfic author replied to my review with a bad view, your fanfic is very good to enjoy.
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I really enjoy it so far. you could do alot with it i hope you add more chapters soon[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
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so far it's started off good, easy to follow and nothing too complicated to understand about the timeline. I kinda wish it went more into explaining the system a little bit.
So, the author hasnt put the tags. Harem is one of them. I dont like Harem stories so i abandon this ship. But the writing quality and the updates are frequents, so if anybody likes harem is a good novel for you.