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I Wish For the Top of the Tower

Fantasy 47 章 40.8K ビュー
作者: AthensAwaitsMe

4.81 (27 レビュー結果)

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Once upon a time, they believed in happy endings. But for them, there is no such thing.
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Cleo is an average teen in high school, with an unhealthy obsession with a novel called "A Song of Sorrow". The story is about a young prince who falls in love with a country girl at a school for magic. Unfortunately, the girl dies a tragic death, leaving the prince to mourn for her alone. The prince, unwilling to accept such a fate, decides to climb the Tower of Wishes, a tower with 100 floors and monsters on each floor. Legend claimed that if someone were to conquer the tower, they would be granted a wish, but after countless attempts, the prince dies at the hands of the final boss of the 99th floor. Cleo was never really satisfied with the ending of the novel, since she had been rooting for the prince the entire time. One day, after an accident on her way to school, she wakes up in the world of the characters she had always wanted to meet. Will Cleo be able to save her prince or will she succumb to the miserable fate that awaits her? And who is the mysterious man watching her every move?
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Schedule: Updates mostly on weekdays (but it depends)
Chapter Length: 800-1600 words

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Brian_Hanes_117

The writing is interesting, and the introduction was captivating. I would definitely recommend this as a fun new story. The writer is off to a good attempt for what seems to be an early start. However, I would like to see more development in terms of visual description (what the characters, environment, and other things looks like). I'd like to see a more fleshed out background and a bit more meat to this tale. With that being said, I wish the author the best on his/her writing voyage. With all that being said, I invite the author to check out my adventure fanfic "Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger (TLV)". It is a spinoff of "Avatar: Macai's Journey (AMJ)". It might help to read the first 1-3 chapters of AMJ first, but I really don't think that's necessary to enjoy this one.

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Albinus_istamar

Good work, interesting script, good setting, with a fluid reading without major traffic jams. Within the Isekai genre it has a good chance of being one of the good ones.

11mth
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Mickey1207

Such a great story with interesting characters. The plot is intriguing and it hook me in. I can’t wait for more 🔥

11mth
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Ryker_Bale

Hey! I like it :) Keep up good work. What makes this book interesting is the effort put into building the world. I think I will look up ur novel after few weeks also!

11mth
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Alan_Grimlord

This isekai has potential....the beginning comes off pretty well it pushes you into the characters and the small world for awhile and it adds context to the novel the character likes. This novel has potential

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MIMI24

The writing is good. It is just the beginning but the premise is good and has suspense. Cleo's backstory needs to be stronger. Waiting for the work to update more. All the bast.

1yr
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AthensAwaitsMe

Shameless author alert! Just giving myself a review for all the hard work I've done for this. And maybe boost my reviews a bit. Hope you enjoy the story!

1yr
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UelUel

It's only in the first chapter yet but the story looks promising... Keep it up and i upload more chapters... I might change my review after remembering some more.

1yr
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WhiteAuthor

Its a great novel and i think it really hooks u in since the start, and i would totally suggest everyone at least give it a try and see if its for them.

7mth
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ImmortalClown

I must say this story is so good that I have to write a review. Overall, the writing quality is good, the plot and romance was done nicely. Although the isekai plot of dying by trunk-kun is overused, who doesn't like trunk-kun? I feel like it deserves to have its character seeing how it is used all the time. Anyways, I have one complaint though. it's the spacing! Please, space your work! I can't stress how important this is! No reader likes reading a very long paragraph. It just kills the mood. That's the only thing keeping me back from giving a complete five star review. Continue writing this story, Author. May the story bless you.

7mth
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superAyan

The author's narrations is direct and descriptive. No unnecessary parts but plenty of points where mysteries are introduced, making the readers guess what would happen next. Writing is good too, except some paragraphs that are very long😅.

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Perishable_Heaven

Honestly I love story that takes place inside a book of the characters universe. It allows use the reader to see how competent our protagonist and a bit of their personality by how they choose to interact with the story they find themselves in. The writing style is a conversational based with some detail about the happening going on and some background detail. I like it. The writing is smoothly connected and the transitions between scenes are smooth. you can tell the author is genuinely invested and cares about their story. 5 stars your doing a great job, keep it up

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Chibueze_eze

Wow I'm actually surprised to find myself enjoying this book. Amazing writing. A little emotional but it has it's charm too. I definitely recommend.💪💪💪❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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OrbitAround

The romance was sweet, it really hit my heart with love. Good job, very details and clear writing styles. I added it to my library! Every each of character had it own unique sense, that make me really can tell which one is which. And it story goes move interesting and more addicting the more I read it. Good job for author and good luck, I love your book! Wish to see it until the end.

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Rishabh_sharma_RIS

when the writer thinking and the story writing are impressive and I like it

9mth
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LONG_LIN

Wow! This is a interesting and entertaining novel. Can't wait to read more of it

9mth
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GMSJakers

An engaging storyline, a nicely done background, and slick character design make this book one to read. The plot is balanced and fun to read.

9mth
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MEWCHAN19

So hello as a fellow writer who writes in this specific genre i have completed till chapter 15 i can assure you that the more you will read it the more you will drawn towards the story. also i like reading the other world story and good character and an interesting plot hooks you in the story... also one advice i know it's hard but yeah be a little more descriptive .. 100% i recommend the story. keep up the good work!

9mth
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MS_Studio_3460

I don't understand why this novel is not famous yet

9mth
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Fallency

Exciting, engaging, enticing and enthralling! This work checks all the boxes of a promising novel. Great penmanship, strong plot, and intriguing characters. My only regret is that it has too few chapters. I have already read till the end, I need more chapters! Author please update soon!

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