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Honkai Star Rail - Isekai'd With A Stellaron Within

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作者: Meritas

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From the frozen lands of an unknown world emerged a single man, young and filled with life. Despite his earlier issues with how he got there, he quickly understands the situation. With a fragmented memory due to specific reasons he is to understand as time goes on, he makes his way along the already-known crew of the Astral Express. How will his adventures unfold with grained knowledge that comes to him at specific times?

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idle_enthusiast

this my opinion after read first 20 chapter. there is so much that can improve in this fiction: - to fast pace so fast that you barely understand emotion or even action of character, barely can feel mc frustration or anything with short and weak build up. - lack of explanation and absurdity it breaks the suspension of disbelief, suddenly a mundane guy made a sword out of junk and fought silvermane guard with pipe, even with the crew the fact he held himself against them makes no sense. - his interaction with other characters has no weight, most of his interaction feels forced so other characters think mc matters and mc dialogue feels either made so it can move quickly to the next part or fans try to insert their own opinion in the middle of the scene. - mc interaction and action feel like someone excited entering a game, skipping boring things and interjecting in part he wants to be involved in, feel like someone playing than someone lives inside the story. - talk big about changing things but by the end of the day just follow the original plot and only try to enter himself in the plot, his existence seems meaningless, still in the end he gets what he wants because that's how suppose to be in this story.

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kill_21

I'm enjoying this amazing piece of fiction all i have to say is

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L0NE
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It's a really good HSR fic I like how the author writes character interactions and I hope they don't drop it.

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Abhijith_Nair_1948

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Ed_bear

Loving it so far, I do have a few questions though like will there be a love interest if so is it a harem or not (personally I hope it's not a harem) and what not...

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LawGamer129

Author's torturing him/her-self with these fast chapter updates that I just have to give it a review, although from what I've read, this fanfic deserves a MINIMUM of 4.5 stars anyway, good update stability as far as I'm aware, character design... Idk how to rate that, story development is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING (Though this is opinion based), writing quality is also top notch. This is an absolute masterpiece (though I implore the author to pls not overwork yourself)

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Kagemia_Nougami

Up the review~~ Truly worth reading!

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