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Good start, good character, have a nice potential. Cant wait to read more chapter! So what are you waiting for mister author? Go write more chapter and post them! Please dont be like other certain author that dropped their story without clear reason like natural disaster or bed ridden sick or cripled... Or gotten sick because of excesive ejaculation *tuggingsomeone*
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Well, it's like this since dropped novel! I will change it the moment it's updated! Unfortunately.... Good story which is short-lived! Fanfic after all, it's rare to see finished fanfic!
Good fan fiction. I love the interactions between the characters. Don't drop this, it is an enjoying read. Try to not let the Mc very Op, at least, admiral level or a little above, we need to see some intense battles too. Other than that, everything is perfect.
Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation One piece !!!!!!!!!!!!! op mc 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
Author-nim I want to ask.. Are you release this story ini "wattpad" too?? I find your story release in "***.wattpad.com" by _EtramaRaizel_69
Is this story dropped?? I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!
Awesome story cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
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昨天莉卡納看著暈過去的斬夜，頓時覺得氣消了一大半，這時才突然發現自己沒有穿衣服，莉卡納臉上通紅，慌忙捂住自己的身體，隨後又想到斬夜已經昏了過去，這才鬆了一口氣，低頭看著斬夜光溜溜的身體，馬上臉上一紅飛快的跑回了房間，穿好衣服之後，過了好一會兒莉卡納才從羞澀中回過神來，可是腦海中卻不自覺得回想斬夜那光溜溜的樣子，莉卡納俏臉通紅一片，可是越是這樣，腦海就越不自覺的回想。
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Ok I have nothing to complain about i love it. I really like how you are having the mc training the crew. I have a idea for Nami instead of using science to control the wether have him teach her a dou to do so.
good background.Thank you for this story author but please dont leave us hanging after tis googd story pls dont drop it.again thank you very much
昨天莉卡納看著暈過去的斬夜，頓時覺得氣消了一大半，這時才突然發現自己沒有穿衣服，莉卡納臉上通紅，慌忙捂住自己的身體，隨後又想到斬夜已經昏了過去，這才鬆了一口氣，低頭看著斬夜光溜溜的身體，馬上臉上一紅飛快的跑回了房間，穿好衣服之後，過了好一會兒莉卡納才從羞澀中回過神來，可是腦海中卻不自覺得回想斬夜那光溜溜的樣子，莉卡納俏臉通紅一片，可是越是這樣，腦海就越不自覺的回想。
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It's a good novel, but to slow at update... ...can you make it little faster for the update? Your reader are not patient enough to waiting for 1 chapter each week...
Good story and background. The mc is op but it's really fun to read. Good luck and I hope you can continue it.