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He Became A Monstrous Genius After Obtaining A Time Dilation Artifact

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Kailen Darkhaven's world crumbled when his parents died two years ago in a beast tide invasion in New York City. Alongside slipping into depression that caused his grades in school to drop exponentially, he failed to become an awakened on his sixteenth birthday. Losing his consciousness due to his frail body and a life of poverty one evening in an alleyway on his 17th birthday, he thought he would die, only to wake up in the same alleyway to a shocking holographic screen before him
''Fusion complete, you have obtained a time dilation artifact.. You are too weak, you will be taken into the pocket world of the time dilation artifact to train in 3...2...1....''
Follow Kailen's journey, as he embarks on a journey with this cheat item, to stand at the Zenith of of the Universe.

This novel is participating in Webnovel Spirity Awards 2025.

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Not the best thing i've ever read of course, not by a long shot but i do see some potential. the world background is very mediocre. the writing style leaves much to be desired like how you use a lot of "..." in every dialogue so u can reduce the usage of this. There are very few grammatical mistakes so that's good but that can also be improved. all in all i'll pay attention to you for a while.

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The artisan 3 here..Don't tell me I'm shameless.if you were the author , wouldn't you give your own work a 5 star review?.. .Tsk.. What ,you want me to kowtow 3 times and yell to the heavens ,martial Uncle,please forgive me!!?..Never...! ahem...enough prelude... Let's get to know a few things about our protagonist... Kailen Darkhaven has trust issues, serious trust issues.... As a teenager he has witnessed firsthand the cruelty of human nature in the world he lives, from both awakened and mundane people... His experiences has shaped him into what he is... However he will mature... At the beginning of his journey, Kailen believes that he cannot afford the risk of trusting any human and he can only rely on himself . As for strength , he will rely on the time dilation artifact throughout the novel ... however with time, life and situations will teach him that even with overpowered strength , valuing and forming relationships are necessary...Things such as relying on others for emotional support and encouragement,and the need for human companionship will come to matter to him.. He will heal from the pain of his past, and learn to trust others... However Some few things will remain constant throughout the novel: Kailen will be ruthless to his enemies, extremely ruthless .. To him, anyone who wants him dead or anyone who would want to cause him or any of his loved ones harm must die-because if the situation were reversed, in a world where the strong preys on the weak, he would be the one to die at the hands of the opposite party.. Kailen will equally cherish the bonds he will form ,and will do anything for his friends... Also,this is not a harem novel , Kailen will have one romantic partner However ,Kailen will have friends ,both males and females .. At his core, Kailen will be a loner, but it won't change the fact that he will have friends and forge bonds he will grow to appreciate... The novel explores themes of revenge, emotional healing and emotional maturity, friendship, corruption , and self discovery ... Enough spoilers... if you want more,read the novel .. Thanks for sticking around... Participating in Webnovel Spirity Awards... Your support will be greatly appreciated

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