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I lost my Copy System and awakened a Plundering System

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作者: Dragon_Heart9

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概要

Draco Xandros, an average young man, awakened an SS-Ranked Copy Talent and a Copy System. With these two strength, he had hope of fulfilling his hidden dream (becoming a hero) but fate said otherwise for him.

Betrayed by the person he loved most, he lost his system and talent, his life hanging on a thread.

Why?

Why me?

This question passed through his mind. The paining of getting his system and talent extracted and getting betrayed by his love made him fall in abyss.

[Detecting sufficient energy to awaken the system]

[Activating the Plundering System]

**[Host has successfully awakened the Plundering System]**

**[Gained an SSS+ Talent Ability: Plunder]**

**[Gained an SSS+ Talent Ability: ????? Dragon Power]**

**[Gained an SSS+ Talent Ability: ????? Phoenix Power]**

This voice brought a change to his life.

Farming EXP, getting stronger, completing missions.

This was his daily life.

Until a memory fragment surfaced...

It turned out his identity wasn’t what it seemed. His past life, his parents—everything was shocking, as he found himself caught in a whirlpool of secrets.

Follow Draco’s journey as he uncovers the missing pieces of the puzzle and the hidden truths about his past life.

A/N:

The novel entails a story about system holders. All ability Awakener have their own system, but in some classes, some Awakener are chosen by unique system, such as the Plundering System (MC's second system), Fox System, Thunder God System, Fire God System, Vampire System, Undead System and many more.

I would say the novel has a foundation of magic with little Eastern Fantasy. It is a novel where the stronger prey on the stronger.

You'll surely love it.

As for the systems origin, I'll drop a hint: gods

Please also note, the MC will be overpowered after the awakening of the Plundering System. However, in the beginning, he is just slightly above a genius fighter.

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    Dragon_Heart9

    Shameless Author here, speaking after writing fifteen chapters of this novel. I will shamelessly give myself a five-star review. This novel entails a story about systems. All Ability Awakeners have their own system, but in some classes, some Awakeners are chosen by unique systems, such as the Plundering System (MC's second system), Thunder God System (Chapter 14), Vampire System, Undead System, Fox System, Dragon System, and many more. I would say it has a bit of Eastern fantasy with magic. The novel follows the MC's journey as he battles these unique system holders, subduing some and plundering others. It is a world where the strong prey on the stronger. You'll surely love it. As for the systems' origin, I'll just drop a hint: gods. Feel free to ask any further questions related to this. Thank you for continuing to support this shameless Author.

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    dndeath
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    with a title and summary about his plundering system it is very dissapointing that the awakening doesn't even happen within the free chapters.

    3mth
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    Dre_Williams_3412

    This novel needs a total rework. It is written like a middle school kid wrote it. A lot of the sentences don’t make sense and you can’t even tell who is the main the character. It’s very rough.

    3mth
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    manaso_4156

    my fave char is rose 🌹🌹🌹 also i like the background of the story. good work author, keep it up!

    2mth
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    Devdan
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    This shit gass 🔥🔥, talent awakening? My cup of tea 🍵. The story is good so far, the details about the school for each district, the families, everything is 🥂. Keep up the good work bro 💪🏻

    4mth
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    DaoistqypEYe

    Another WebNovel where a shameless author is going for a moneygrab. The story while decent is suppressed by the authors shi**y spamming of the “system panel” taking up 3/4 of almost every chapter. Annoying as f**k. Get better and write for real.

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    DaoistArbore

    My complaints of the story would have to be, in this order, kidnapping of loved ones (for any duration of time), memory loss of loved ones, the NSFW scenes, (even as a person that is usually happy to read them just kind of annoyed me to no end and I’m not really sure why. Maybe because it doesn’t feel like there is any closeness to any of them besides Rose and so it just feels like a continuation of a one night stand instead of any romance)

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    QuinnGee

    Author, your writing style is so good 👍 I got hooked on this book. More chapters please

    4mth
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    Beersheba

    I'm not a professional in writing reviews but your book rocks I love how detailed your writing is from the prologue to chapter 4. you started a bit slow but later I got the hang of it. it's so interesting. I love the interactions between the characters, just from your writing I got to know the kind of dynamics the friends have. it's amazing 😍.

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    Vine_Sunday

    at first, I was confused. but moving on it turned out quite nice; the lighthearted banters is a nice one. and the world building is very unique - dormant mysterious energy discovered in humans. there's room for improvement in the sentences structure, but it's potential is lofty

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    DONT_TOUCH_ME

    This need more 5 stars!!! Very nice story! One of my cup of tea! Everyone should give this a try as well!

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    SHADEWHISPER

    It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.

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    AMV_Weakly

    Seems like a decent story, but just not for me. It's written in a cartoonish/anime way, as though I should read it while visualising what's written like a cartoon or an anime. A lot of minor details are left out, and it feels like things happen in defiance if reality. Feels like people teleport all over the place, turn into dust clouds when they run, cough up blood from irritation, etc. On top of all this, everything feels like it's all over the place, with no solid connection between events that follow each other, or logic to the encounters and flow of the story. While the writing quality is quite good, with few errors, the story doesn't seem like it has any substance. The characters behave way too goofy for my tastes. A lot of it feels illogical in that way. I kinda like the premise, but I feel it's poorly executed. I read up to chapter 15, and I don't know if it improved later on, but that's how iIfeel about it. But good luck to the author, and I hope your novel goes well.

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    JWB_Kante

    Great work from the author, keep updating

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    Draserraney

    Not bad. I managed to read the first four chapters and I cn tell this story is lit.🔥 I’m adding u to my collection~

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    DaoistEa038S

    The storyline is intriguing and Ming Locke happens to be my favorite character 😊 keep up the good work author 😊

    3mth
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    Ramat_Omotolani

    Nice one author ... I just added it to my library

    3mth
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    FenikeX
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    Betrayal = NTR ? .

    4mth
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    Lonely_Apex

    Well... What can I say, this is an absolute gem. I decided to check this novel out after seeing its name and I have to admit that I'm impressed. After reading nine chapters, I have decided to drop my review, so that readers would know the world they're about to step into. First of all, the world background is epic, the characters are amazing and all have their unique perks. There is great pleasure earned from reading this book, and I have to say that I recommend this book to all those who love a story with a good pace, great characters and understandable world-building. I have to say... Good Job, author. Just never drop this book. I'm off to read the rest after this short pause for a review.

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    NAVIRUNAVIII

    I like this system and academy story. Hope the main character will get more powerfull and beat his enemy. The academy story mostly highlight the relations between MC and his friends, and there is develop a romantic things with the Heroine. Good writing and keep it up!

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