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A guy dies and gets transmigrated into Harry Potter Universe and tries to become strongest.
Disclaimer : I don't own any part of Harry Potter Universe, J.K. Rowling Does.
I also don't own the cover picture.
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The best fanfiction that I read in webnovel. I especially love how you go about being selfish self insert instead of goody two shoes type of character design. Please continue to update this story.
A sub-par harry potter fanfiction, but enjoyable anyway. There is a lot of problem in this story (too many to list them all) but it is normal as it's the first story of the author. It's frustrating because the story could have been so much better that what it is actually. If you like HP FF give it a try, you could be surprised.
Good story I hope the update schedule still continues. It's cool with his anigami and his concept of cores Who's the pairing though? -------------------------------------------------------------
The dialogue between characters is so flat. Other characters are so one dimensional that it's ridiculous. Having the characters respond back without any emotion doesn't help. (You need to use question marks to end sentences that are questions. Without doing that, it really throws off the flow of the story.) I hope you work on your character development as I like the plot of the story.
The story itself is beautiful, but the development is too fast, likewise the story came from the mc's POV, it would be better if some part would be told from the author's POV, at any rate I love the novel it's just that each chapter is a bit short...
Very good story. But now you are at this point you should slow down,give more detail. Because if you continue like this you will end this story in 40 chapters. And feel more like a summary than a story ...
This is one of the best Harry Potter fan-fiction you will read. I can only think of one other that is as well done. Author has an AMAZING stamina level as he pumps out at least 2 chapters a day. Also were most focus on the MCs time in school, Author will soon be focusing on the time after. Which is extremely rare for a fanfic to get to.
I think it is a good story. Especially the speed in which the story is written. I hope the story doesnt slow down too much because of Harry in bis followup years Thanks for the story 😊
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Really good H.P. novel, it has really good speed , great knowledge on the lore and a character that doesn’t stick to Harry’s little suicide group. I’m really excited for the future of this novel and definitely recommend you to read it. Anyway, bye
Seriously a hidden gem not found anywhere else. Since this story concentrate on the MC than basing on the Boy-who-lived. Not being the sidekick or the canon fodder helping the brat. This is truly a fanfic that visualized the epitome of an OC and more likeable not being along with a dupe canon protagonist and more beyond that.
Amazing Story although can get a bit fast with the mulitple time skips but it works out well and eventually fits really well with overall pace of the story. Great update speed and while a bit sketchy first few chapters editing wise, its generally high quality and standards!
The story is great and dose not seem to be ending after Voldemort dies and not only that mc dose not give a f*ck about Harry and main timeline just using them from time to time truly a great work.
Great story, i am getting very excited about where the story is going as there are no filler chapters..................................................
for the greater good in the presence of dumdbledoor................hahahahahah😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤
this is one of the very good fanfic i read. good plot, i like the story of the insert waiting to get stronger first and not get tangled with the originals.
Author please update the story!! 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
bloody shame the author dropped it after saying he was resuming it because the story was reaching its peak for sure. Very fresh perspective for an MC to take Albus's role, loved it.
I binged the entire thing was pretty entertained thought reading Would like too see more frequent updates but that’s really it Would recommend giving this one a read
How can anyone say that it is the best fanfiction is beyond me. The main character is a psychopath who during his 17 years of life in the Harry Potter universe didn't bother to do anything besides studying. He has a good opinion of his caretaker in the orphanage and he is into NymphadoraTonks without any reason, probably because the author is crushing on her character or actress. He is supposedly an heir to one of the sacred houses, yet he is in a muggle orphanage and there is no mention of his magical guardian, all the factions just forgot the existence of another house who has a say in Wizengamot. All the house elves of his house disappeared too, he had to buy his own house elf. The author likes to make his opinion known in the comments, for example, "I won't write about romance and I won't write about the things that the main character changed in the books, because it's not that kind of novel." So you get 32 chapters of MC doing nothing, completely nothing and the author is proud of that. You get to see how he got O+ on everything, but he could have gotten O even before going to Hogwarts because he conveniently found all the books needed to know everything to graduate in a trunk of a dead wizard, just after the main character reincarnated/transmigrated to this world. Then he proceeds to close the door to his room and study, then after he gets Hogwarts list and gets to Hogwarts he proceeds to close the door to his room and study, and study. That's basically it, well almost, he became an animagus, he has two forms, normal golden falcon and magical shadow something which allows him to travel through shadows, original right? ... He is chosen as a Hogwarts Champion instead of Cedric, the first task is the same, the author just got Harry Cedric's dragon, and the MC got the horntail, he killed the dragon because he needed it for the ritual. The author decided that second task will go like in the canon so he just won't write about it. He goes on a dates with Tonks, but we don't see it, then he proceed to **** her, which we don't see, this goes for several months and he still calls her "Tonks". The author said that the novel starts after Voldemorts death, which can be interesting if done correctly, but it's not really HP fanfic when you insert your character in HP universe after all the plot already happened, it's just an original story in this universe, but because the author didn't want to get called on that he wrote that 30+ chapters that could be written in one chapter, because as he said the novel didn't even start. MC will get a harem, just not right now, he gets Tonks now then he will get another girls in another universe. But since "it isn't a novel like that" there won't be any romance besides "they went on a date, later they ****ed", boring. There is no action besides the fight with a dragon, but it went like that: "MC traps dragon in chains, but he doesn't completely trap him because he needs to kill the dragon, and he doesn't want to be knows as dark wizard, he turns away from the dragon, dragon escapes, attacks MC, MC kills dragon with his super original spell, the end". I don't really know what this novel is like and I don't really have great motivation to read later. The only redeeming original quality is authors idea about magical cores, though it isn't really original, it is copied from cultivation novels, magical core is in gaseous state, after first maturity it's in liquid state, then for Dumbledore, Voldemort and our MC there is solid state after second maturity. But after MC completes the ritual his core has grown to a maximum, so it doesn't get any stronger, boring.
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