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a reincarnated young man with a system that allows him to develop his abilities, with the condition of fulfilling missions from which he will be able to choose three options or he will have a punishment if he does not comply with the chosen option.
Before the final era of the Targaryen dynasty an illegitimate son was born to the lord of the house Dayne. The young man reincarnated after his death in a SWAT operation, at the hands of criminals while trying to rescue a young woman they were trying to kidnap, in this encounter he ended up being stabbed in the heart.
(excuse my poor english and grammar (2/10), it's not my native language)
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The story isn't horrible for what it is. A mash of clichéd game of throne fanfic elements fused together while still trying to find its own unique pathway to take. some people like cliche. emotional situations fall short but that can improve as the authors writing and English improve. there's a decent story in here if the quality increase in future chapters. Also, The systems seems very vague and op basically just fitting to the users wants which is definitely a negative. other than that I'd say give the story a try you might like it.
the plot is going good and this is another GOT fanfic that has future prospect. coming from the perspective of a free reader. I hope the author won't drop this. thank you for the latest 10chapters and it's all great. praying for your mental health 👌😊✌️
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The system is too OP. I don't like that it's sentient. It also knows things the MC doesn't know, so the MC just have to ask it and voila, who needs spies or an info network right? The quests don't make sense, it's just Kill this, save that. I mean that may not sound that bad, but what if thE MC is a 4 yo and the target to save is thousands of miles away? The dialogue is also ridiculous, the first time he saw Oberyn, no Hi or Hello, he jumped to "your sister and her children would be killed". That's so cringe, he's asking to be killed ffs.
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Like any shameless author I give myself 5 stars because I like how I carry my story, although I'm a novice in creating fanfics, I hope you like my story.
it's good if just a little slow but that's just me being impatient wanting to plot to hurry up to cannon but yeah its one of the better GOT fanfic out their.
The story is good but it isnt written well. The sentence structure is really bad, the plot and such is fine imo since it is a fanfic, but the grammar/overall structure is so bad sometimes that it just takes you out of the narrative. Get a proof reader and this might be a 4/5 star story. Btw I got to chapter 23 before stopping. Plot (spoiler) Decently op mc but not to the point where he could just instakill night king and be done with it. Slow story but not to slow. Starts just before roberts rebillion with the usual saving of some characters
The story is unique, so I'm reading it and I hope you finish it, and don't give it up halfway
well tbh, I didn't really like it. the writing quality is good for a translated work but my problem with it is the powers he got from the system I wish they were more medieval world oriented instead of flying thundergod I would have liked more knight/swordsman-oriented skills. but if you wish for wish fulfillment elements in Game of Thrones this is the one for you.
Sometimes I ask myself if the author ever thinks before they write their story. Many things defy logic, and what's with the new trend of authors making their main characters significantly taller than their actual age?
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Not very good. The author seems not only very inexperienced in writing, but also inexperienced in life. A lot of things written will seem nonsensical to anyone with any life experience...