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Football singularity

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作者: TrikoRex223

4.35 (56 レビュー結果)

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A story about a man that died with a lot of regrets. Follow him as gets a chance to rewrite his story and do right by those whom he fails in the past. Follow his journey as he embarks on the road to becoming The Greatest Of All Time, The Goat, The singularity. Of the beautiful game of Football




Thank you for giving my novel a chance I’m quit new to this so I hope you enjoyable read in a world of my creation

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    TOS
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    This is good. I hope you will not drop it unless you have valid reasons. We'll keep coming back every time you post, so don't worry about not having devoted readers.

    1yr
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    Steve_Aaron

    Just another Nigerian encouraging a fellow country man ..Don't stop your work is great [img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp]

    7mth
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    Suck_Deez_Nutz_

    pretty good novel ............I love it .................If you are READING THIS go and finish the novel trust me you will not get dissapointed ................................................................................................................................... MESSAGE TO THE CREATER ----- very little to no information about the world is written !! work needed on this .......... ....... i have been watching this since day 1 so I can tell you as a loyal reader that you need to make the character a bit more attached to the reader *heart to heart* also if possible you can also develop more on supporting characters and their emotional attachment !! trust me it helps alottt .. also *system* is given much less importance you need to make it vast and add alot of skills (active and passive)...... make these all work and this novel's popularity will increase tremendously as it is already a pretty good novel................................................................... even if you don't I will still watch this till the end ......... best wishes and regards from my behalf :)

    5mth
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    Rakim_Mwaura_4997

    Love the novel especially the interaction with the system and the fact the mc seem fun with some personality

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    2yr
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    Kenrio
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    The grammar is trash for a contracted novel and the dialogue is completely idiotic. The mc is in the body of a 5 year old but everyone treat him like a teenager. The worse is how his adopted mother start training him even thought mc is a malnourished 5 year old, she don't even try to leave him in the hospital to check his healt, with this you can see how much thought the author really put in the novel. Another completely thing is how every 6 year old is playing better than adults, author clearly don't made his research before this, you should know that at this age kid are developing their coordination and muscle so for the to do what is described is ridiculuos. The fic have a great premise but the execution is trash on all levels

    1yr
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    MikarTheGoat

    Hope you keep up the good work this is me show some support and appreciation Thank you Author san

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    2yr
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    spaceman25

    honestly it's a good book ,but it seems to be focusing more on everything other than football itself ,which isn't a bad thing but just isn't my cup of tea keep up the good work👍🏽

    1yr
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    Toby_Lewis

    The Story seems promising hope the author sticks to it looking forward to see how it develops 🙌

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    2yr
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    wolfly_1662

    It's extremely hard to find a good sports book on webnovel. Yet this is one of the best I've ever read so far.

    1yr
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    Popolos324

    it's really, really, really, really slow. like it been a year still story started and Mc is still the same age

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    8mth
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    soso1111

    Found another sport/Football novel again, great. Read a chapter or two but I'm not really a fan of 1st person narrative so skipping this. Anyway great novel and good luck

    1yr
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    Kaizou_Koi

    I like this very much author.I hope u will continue to update it regularly and won't drop this in midway.I wish u good luck and stay healthy.

    1yr
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    Navigator_Ray

    It's quite good so far, though the story has not started yet, but the pacing and writing are quite good. keep it up author 👍 and what about the update schedule author???

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    1yr
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    NahuelDZ

    The story is very good, probably the best there is on the subject of football, although there is a novel that is very good, but that is not the theme, the real problem of this story, or what for me is a problem, is which develops very, very slowly, if in each game there are 3 or 4 episodes, we will never be able to see him play on a professional team, for the rest, it is very good.

    11mth
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    Dark_B
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    I really liked how he started in the story! Instead of just playing football, it’s also about character development as well as setting a foothold into his “new life”. There are some wrong-written words but everything is still easy to understand👍🏼 but because of the development it has a rather slow start but all in all I really recommend reading the story!

    1yr
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    Salman_

    the story going the right path for a sporting novel it has what it takes to make you read and wait for the updates expecting more

    1yr
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    LGK_maore

    really like it i do appreciate the concept of this novel first then i admit that the author gave an admirable hard-working writtings with good-built future bases for what is comming🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

    1yr
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    Toby_Lewis

    Love the direction that the story is heading. Keep up the good work

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    ZxMiJohn

    l don't know how many years it will take but l will wait for the story to arrive when he is 17 years old or 18 years old or when he debut his career professionally. after that l will binge read all that

    11mth
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    Lovijly

    I'm not good at making reviews but let me tell you this it is definitely good however it is a bit slow paced and it can be annoying with so little chapter but the moment it has 100+ chapters it will be hella good the detail is deluxe and at the moment mc is a bit arrogant but i hope with more chapters he will slowly become more humble and nice outside the field but still a beast on the field good luck author good luck and you're doing a great job at making this story

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    1yr
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    heh_
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    this is the first time I read sport novel and I didn't expect it, it was so good, hope author upload 7 chapters a week, except that everything is good

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    1yr
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    rampa2510

    Great book with a lot of potential. Please read the first volume before making conclusions as that helps build the overall plot. After that the football part starts and it started as you expected the mc is playing pro football for the first time and he makes mistake learns and keeps getting better I hope the author keeps writing the Novel since I already had a football novel ghost on me which didn't fit well. Great work

    1yr
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