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Starting life as a college student is hard, but not as hard as dying on your very first day.
Ali Asad was just your average guy, ready to start fresh in a new city for college. But when he jumped into traffic to save a mysterious woman, his good deed got him killed—fast and painfully.
Just when he thought it was game over, he woke up alive... sort of. Turns out, the woman he saved, Carrisa, had a few tricks up her sleeve. Now resurrected as an immortal being and renamed Alicarde, he’s thrust into a world of ancient power struggles, dark magic, and impossible expectations.
Bound to Carrisa’s fate, Alicarde quickly learns that being immortal isn’t all it's cracked up to be. Instead of focusing on classes or meeting new friends, he’s dodging dangerous foes, navigating Carrisa’s high-stakes supernatural battles, and trying to figure out just what his role is in all this madness.
All while struggling with the fact that he really didn’t sign up for any of this.
Thrown into a fight for survival with powers he barely understands and a fate that’s now intertwined with Carrisa’s, Alicarde has to adapt fast—or risk dying all over again, this time for good.
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I'm actually not sure which surprises me more, the low number of views or the immensely high writing quality. The author makes me feel like a newbie writer (technically I am) but still, the way he guides the reader's imagination. the dialogue, character interactions, world-building, and even the character designs are well made. simply a gem
This is a highly underrated work. It's written very professionally and has a very unique story. The main character is enjoyable. The side characters are as well. Especially Carissa. I'm a huge fan of comedic moments between characters in things I read/watch. This has plenty of them. The pacing of the story is done very smoothly. I could on and on all day about how amazing this story is and why it's amazing, but I think I'll end it here.
Writing quality: 5/10 So basically, the quality of writing is pretty decent,, only not that great since the author is a beginner. The author overdescribes things a lot; even something unnecessary to the plot is described. I hope it gets better later on. Updates 10/10 - He atleast updates daily. Grammar 7/10: Decent but needs some more work, could use some clarity. Also, a, side note - The author should make shorter paragraphs since most of his paragraphs are long sometimes the flow is broken and doesn't feel engaging enough to keep reading Dialogs 6/10: Stop using filler words in every sentence. I can understand who is talking with the flow of the narration; I don't have to keep parrot that "she said" and "He said." The dialogs sometimes seem monotonous Story 7.5/10: It's a decent plot. It seems interesting, can be even better if the author improves it. It can be decent read if the author improves his writing in the long run. Definitely people interested give it shot before judging - Indian_Painter
This story is soo good i just started reading yesterday but i can tell that its a good story(at least the start) keep up the good work and don't mind the haters. also if u drop:
Been following the updates for a while now, and all I can say is, absolute master piece, the writing is surprisingly professional, unlike the typical Web novel junk you find while randomly roaming about, the plot is fast paced and author somehow still manages to keep it interesting, and then the characters, let's just say culture has been highly maintained😂😂😂😂