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Elemental Dissonance - dropped

Fantasy 53 章 286.9K ビュー
作者: khansubhan070

4.78 (12 レビュー結果)

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Friday 13th September 2019 was the Day of Doom&Destiny
It was the Day of doom for many but also the day of Destiny for some.
It was the Day when some lost all their fortune but it was also the day when some got powers transcending the Influence of wealth.
It was the Day of Elemental Dissonance.

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Disclaimer:
(1) : This is my first story and I'm not a native English speaker so yea please BNBR with your comments and some honest reviews would be very much appreciated.
(2) : 3 Chapters/Week, I would try to do more if I get enough time.
(3) : Beliefs and opinions shared in the novel by the characters do not represent the personal beliefs of the author.
(4) The average chapter length is about 0.9k to 1k words. It would increase don't worry.
Update: 1.5k words per chapter, chapter 31 onwards, please motivate me with your powerstones if you want more lengthy chapters.
(5) : Story progression is slow, if you don't like slow-progressive novels then this story isn't for you.

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Gran_Rodeo

It is something unique, never expected someone would make an apocalypse novel on Arabia, stability is good this guy updates regularly, writing quality is somewhat average but hey! He is a non-native person.

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khansubhan070

Hey there it's just me the Author continuing the sacred tradition of authors, giving 5star reviews on their own books..... Don't waste time just read the Book.... Have fun.

5yr
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Eagle_Blue

He's my country man, a man from Arabia, a man of culture, I'm gonna give him 5 stars and that's it, no further reason must be required right?.......

4yr
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Daoist223279

Exp, exp, exp, exp, exp, exp, exp, exp, exp, exp, exp, exp, ex, pex, pex, pex, pex, pex, pex, pex, pex, exp, exp, exp, exp, exp, exp, exp, exp.

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DianQi123

Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!!

4yr
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Ronald_Duck

QUACK QUACK QUACK QUACK, hmmm hmmm *coughing* 1)Enough stupidity for today, let's get down to real business, the plotline although stretched many times, almost like author want to increase his word count, but still it's an amazing piece of story without many visible plot holes that could be found in many original stories from non-native writers. 2) Stability of update, I guess this bar should be removed because new and original authors would have a time doing something completely new. 3) Story by far is very realistic to the point of ultra core graphics *just kidding*, it's very relatable everyone acts natural and do not perform sheer stupidities all the time. 4) Although a bit mangled, he's a new template not many have explored. 5) I don't know much about the world background except the earth is Infact the same.

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Venerable_Linfeng

Let me give you a full five stars review..........................................................................................................

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Krutch

Starts off interesting, but the MC is so utterly unlikeable it kills the story. He doesn't work for a single thing; he's thrown into impossible situations and miraculously saved by happenstance every time. He doesn't think for himself at all, not acting until forced to by outside sources. The only thing he has going for him is plot armor. The scale of the story gets too big way too quick as well. Instead of building the MC up gradually and slowly having him face stronger beings he immediately gets thrown into scenarios he absolutely cannot survive until something, or someone, he has nothing to do with saves him. Why are these godlike beings bothering to go out of their way to do anything with him? The story has a lot of potential, but it's trying to do too much at once.

4yr
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Sayyad_Ali_5025

It's a great novel , the author has explored a very unexplored country that really needed some exploration, not all people live in America or Europe. Though the stability is low it has to be expected, he's a college student.

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Hatice_Demirci

Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!! Review should be more than 140 characters!!!!

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magnoliaringdom

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact magnoliaringdom@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out!

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Krizantem

New and fresh book , I will keep reading and looking for it.Thank you New and fresh book , I will keep reading and looking for it.Thank you New and fresh book , I will keep reading and looking for it.Thank you

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