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EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY
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We all know about the word ‘Essence’. Heard a lot about it, making use of it. Commonly known as an extract of herbs and food. Regardless, what if this essence is a part of a natural element. Like Fire, water, earth, and wind; imagine a rare element called Essence…..
Eden, called in full name Eden Locker discovers on his thirteenth birthday that he is mixed blood, Magus. Unlike some humans around him who are half or sometimes pure. This growing Magus can easily change the circulation of his blood from complete human to pure Magus. It is a story of an orphan boy who is adapter by a family that also carries a different bloodline.
At first, life remains normal for him but, then one day everything changes when Eden gets an invitation from the school named Bridge to Golden Gate. A school where the combination of fantasy and reality features a different world. Along with a new journey in life, Eden also encounters a different system. Quest after quest, Eden began to attach along with the system when suddenly the Main Quest opens itself and ask him to complete a quest that is forbidden in the school.
What will Eden do to complete it? Will there be further quests such as this? How will Eden Locker adjust his life path along with the new system and the fantasy school?
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In a pool of web novels that suffers from cliche and copy-paste worlds, this author managed to create a unique experience through his epic world-building and superb writing style which doesn't shy away from the bloody implications of the story.
The author demonstrates mastery in crafting a captivating narrative, standing out for the skill in developing an engaging plot, characterizing individuals in a detailed manner, and creating a world rich in details. The plot is well-balanced, featuring intriguing twists that keep the reader eagerly anticipating what will happen next. The meticulous description of the characters fosters an emotional connection, delving convincingly into their motivations. Overall, the work transcends mere storytelling, providing a captivating literary experience!!!! Keep up the excellent work, author!!!!!!!!
good writing quality ,world background too much but I can't connect to it , it like mix of everything , wizard , Harry Potter style school ( with all hyped students ,teachers and a principal ). MC is also like Harry Potter [ adopted , mean sibling and mother and a father ( who won't let MC die from bullying , but not home to stop the bully ) ]. MC is a magus. but............ .... . .... . MC is also a regressor ( who travelled back to past ) . MC has system . . . .. . . MC is Dracula .. . . . . . . World suddenly started opening portals every where like solo leveling ...MC's bullying sister is a Vampire . . some how MC is considered a trash despite everyone knowing he is a magus and Dracula . he has lowest bloodline ?? . i think even normal humans are better than him ??? don't ask me why . are you guys confused ?!. well I'm . .... ...... i read almost 20 chapters and i think story didn't even started yet , chapters till now are all just empty hyping about MC's past greatness ,his tragedy and how he was considered weak somehow???. there is also hype about that HP school . it was boring
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The story is pretty decent for me. It has the potential I must say. Writing quality is okay but I spotted several ones. Though not to be a big deal and I still enjoyed my reading. The pacing is fine and also the narration. All in all, a good read. Improve more and I hope you will become a veteran author in the future. 😉
Really good novel with an interesting plot and acceptable pacing. Furthermore, there is good grammar and sentence construction, while the characters do indeed feel alive. Overall great novel. Can't wait for more!
HERE FIVE STARS FOR YOU! DON'T ASK ME WHY IM HERE! BECAUSE I WANTED TO DO THIS. Just reading this novel until 20+ chapter, u will see how good this story!
Intriguing premise with a very interesting way of writing, Author writes in a style of his own that builds a beautiful image of the novel world. Dialogues are done well, a little bit childish actually but enough to keep one’s blood boiling as the mc makes his grand speech… Overall a five stars for me. A little bit of advice from me, I think the synopsis could have been done better. At list, break them to more paragraphs so that it wouldn’t look like a very huge block that make my eyes dizzy from afar lol. Keep up the good work, author! I kept the book in my library so will be expecting more updates soon!
great story with ita unique storyline tbhx the writing itself need some fixing with the grammars and all and development is kinfa then again this novel is brand new, i might change my feview futher on.
Nice story. I like it. Nice Nice Nice Nice Author go ahead, you will be succeed and keep writing. Thank you for your book. 🥰🥰🥰🥗[img=recommend][img=coins]
Amazing! This has the potential to be a great system novel. Characters:The characters are good. Eden is well written and a great mc.He is not too arrogant nor too humble. Side characters are good as well. Writing quality: It is good but there are some tying mistakes. Story development: The pace is amazing, the fast pace will hook you into reading. The worldbuilding is very interesting and unique. The system itself is my favorite part in the story. Overall, if you love system novel with likeable characters, great worldbuilding, and a awesome system then u should give it a try.
I would like to say that this story can be great once edited. I've seen locked chapters in the later part. You should cooperate with the editor to make these adjustments. Overall, I expect a unique turn of things. Keep up the good work, author!
This story is amazing I really liked first chapter! Writing style is really good and I like how you took the MC back in time. Synopsis is great it gives you a good information about the story do you can understand it better. I suggest this story to you all Great job 👏🏻 [img=recommend]
I like that the synopsis is well written and so clear. The opening chapter also the scenes are cool and tense enough to make me want to read further. Nice job author! Keep it up! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I loved the story line, it's perfectly written and the plot is amazing, can't wait to read more, please keep uploading, keep it up❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I give you five stars to encourage you. I like your story. Don't stop your amazing writing. I hope you will be do your best. Thank you for your story.
From the previous reviews, you can tell that this story has something solid going for it. What can I say? Read this book. Really. You will not only love it, but you also won’t regret it. 5 solid stars.
Oh no! I ran out of Power Stone! I'll come back tomorrow to read more and give the power stone! this book is worth more than only Power Stone, actually! The writing style is awesome! I could imagine all the scenes moment by moment. Great job!
A great story with a gripping plot and good writing style! The author's narration is very apt and detailed that readers can visualize the situations! Not too hard and boring to read but fun instead!!
I like the way the story is written, and like that there are a bunch of elements brought together. it does get a bit confusing sometimes though... especially for a fast reader like me
Thank you for this wonderful story. When I read tis story, this reminds me of Full Metal Alchemist and Harry Potter which I read. The different is that it has a system to make things clear. It is better than Harry Potter to me.
I love it ❤ i like supernatural stories but this days it is not easy to find one that is not repeating itself like 50 others. Thia onw though is unique and amazing. You managed to surprise me with a really good adventure thank you 😁❤