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In a pool of web novels that suffers from cliche and copy-paste worlds, this author managed to create a unique experience through his epic world-building and superb writing style which doesn't shy away from the bloody implications of the story.
The author demonstrates mastery in crafting a captivating narrative, standing out for the skill in developing an engaging plot, characterizing individuals in a detailed manner, and creating a world rich in details. The plot is well-balanced, featuring intriguing twists that keep the reader eagerly anticipating what will happen next. The meticulous description of the characters fosters an emotional connection, delving convincingly into their motivations. Overall, the work transcends mere storytelling, providing a captivating literary experience!!!! Keep up the excellent work, author!!!!!!!!
HERE FIVE STARS FOR YOU! DON'T ASK ME WHY IM HERE! BECAUSE I WANTED TO DO THIS. Just reading this novel until 20+ chapter, u will see how good this story!
Oh no! I ran out of Power Stone! I'll come back tomorrow to read more and give the power stone! this book is worth more than only Power Stone, actually! The writing style is awesome! I could imagine all the scenes moment by moment. Great job!
From the previous reviews, you can tell that this story has something solid going for it. What can I say? Read this book. Really. You will not only love it, but you also won’t regret it. 5 solid stars.
This book is totally worth it. I must say, I'm not even half way through but I'm hooked. I can't wait to continue. The only advise I have for guys out there, try it out right now.
Nice supernatural story. Red it twice and it is awesome! Please give this author respect and love.
A great story with a gripping plot and good writing style! The author's narration is very apt and detailed that readers can visualize the situations! Not too hard and boring to read but fun instead!!
Good writing. the author has a great potential and the novel as well, I like reading a adventure fantasy and this is giving. you brought different elements into this story which I like it, I hope you keep up the good work!
This Novel is very unique in it's own way with the character and the System involved in it, especially in the way the system goes off and challenges the MC the way it does. Very nice. There are a few mistakes in the beginning chapters I believe that could improve the writing quality a bit , but it's not something too off putting that would discourage viewing it. Characters as well as the World background are done well. The Story has a nice flow to it.
Hello readers, a reading scout here. This is certainly a good read, writing quality is good with no punctuation errors and good paragraphing. Story development is smooth and pacing is what keeps me reading. Characters are well fleshed out but need more depth and I'm sure they'll get more in the future as the story progresses. As for the world background it is still too early to tell so I'll let the time do the deed. A very good read indeed, give it a try. Cheers!
I like the way the story is written, and like that there are a bunch of elements brought together. it does get a bit confusing sometimes though... especially for a fast reader like me
The story is amazing and engaging. Also the writing style is really different than other novels I've read. Overall this novel is really amazing. Also respect for the author for writing for a year now👏🏻
I love the story from the first chapter. it's good written and also it's readers will not find it difficult to understand. Your on the way to succes. Good luck and keep this up.
This is very well written, pure fiction and good story lines. It's very entertaining with characters that keeps it engaging and colorful. I hope that the story progress more, keep up the good work
A unique take on the mix of elements and magical bloodlines. The story has potential with the introduction of the school and quests. Worth a read for fantasy fans.
I really liked the concept and background of your story. Your story is really different from the ones I have red so far. Keep it up. 💓💓💓
I genuinely enjoyed the story. There are no mistakes in writing, so there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s really good and I took a liking in Eden, he is a well written character. Recomend 10/10!
An amazing work of art nonetheless! It was a mixed emotion of joyride and entertainment. I must tell future readers to check this one out! [img=recommend]
Thank you for this wonderful story. When I read tis story, this reminds me of Full Metal Alchemist and Harry Potter which I read. The different is that it has a system to make things clear. It is better than Harry Potter to me.
Wow! Good novel Author, I really liked what I just read! Eden's character felt good and I won't spoil here but the mystery, the school, the quests everything is really good which is making me wonder what will happen next! I am waiting for more chapters!! Highly recommended!
Intriguing premise with a very interesting way of writing, Author writes in a style of his own that builds a beautiful image of the novel world. Dialogues are done well, a little bit childish actually but enough to keep one’s blood boiling as the mc makes his grand speech… Overall a five stars for me. A little bit of advice from me, I think the synopsis could have been done better. At list, break them to more paragraphs so that it wouldn’t look like a very huge block that make my eyes dizzy from afar lol. Keep up the good work, author! I kept the book in my library so will be expecting more updates soon!
This story feels like nothing in particular, but for some reason I'm still really invested haha. Good job author, hopefully I'll eventually get through all 100 or so chapters...
The characters are something else, my god. The character writing is impeccable. I just love the mc and not to forget the story, it's so emirsive. Seriously great job.
good writing quality ,world background too much but I can't connect to it , it like mix of everything , wizard , Harry Potter style school ( with all hyped students ,teachers and a principal ). MC is also like Harry Potter [ adopted , mean sibling and mother and a father ( who won't let MC die from bullying , but not home to stop the bully ) ]. MC is a magus. but............ .... . .... . MC is also a regressor ( who travelled back to past ) . MC has system . . . .. . . MC is Dracula .. . . . . . . World suddenly started opening portals every where like solo leveling ...MC's bullying sister is a Vampire . . some how MC is considered a trash despite everyone knowing he is a magus and Dracula . he has lowest bloodline ?? . i think even normal humans are better than him ??? don't ask me why . are you guys confused ?!. well I'm . .... ...... i read almost 20 chapters and i think story didn't even started yet , chapters till now are all just empty hyping about MC's past greatness ,his tragedy and how he was considered weak somehow???. there is also hype about that HP school . it was boring
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It’s got an awesome world with boundless possibilities and a great main storyline. The prologue gives you a good idea of what he wants his future to be, but the way the story’s set up minimizes the chance of spoilers. All in all, a great work!
This is a really unique take on the usually repetitive and predictable system genre, and I really like it! I've read 10 chapters so far, and the MC seems really interesting and it's a breath of fresh air! There are a couple of grammatical mistakes here and there, but setting that aside, amazing story author! will def read more :D
Hello readers, a reading scout here. This is certainly a good read, writing quality is good with no punctuation errors and good paragraphing. Story development is smooth and pacing is what keeps me reading. Characters are well fleshed out. The world background is perfect as well. A very good read indeed, give it a try. Cheers!
This story has great world building, a lot of characters, and a lot of character development. If you're looking for a story that has a rich story line, this one's for you!
The pacing is amazing. The writing is good. The characters and world built by the author are well done. If you like system novels, then this story is a must to check out.
I love it ❤ i like supernatural stories but this days it is not easy to find one that is not repeating itself like 50 others. Thia onw though is unique and amazing. You managed to surprise me with a really good adventure thank you 😁❤
In a pool of web novels that suffers from cliche and copy-paste worlds, this author managed to create a unique experience through his epic world-building and superb writing style which doesn't shy away from the bloody implications of the story.
The author demonstrates mastery in crafting a captivating narrative, standing out for the skill in developing an engaging plot, characterizing individuals in a detailed manner, and creating a world rich in details. The plot is well-balanced, featuring intriguing twists that keep the reader eagerly anticipating what will happen next. The meticulous description of the characters fosters an emotional connection, delving convincingly into their motivations. Overall, the work transcends mere storytelling, providing a captivating literary experience!!!! Keep up the excellent work, author!!!!!!!!
HERE FIVE STARS FOR YOU! DON'T ASK ME WHY IM HERE! BECAUSE I WANTED TO DO THIS. Just reading this novel until 20+ chapter, u will see how good this story!
Oh no! I ran out of Power Stone! I'll come back tomorrow to read more and give the power stone! this book is worth more than only Power Stone, actually! The writing style is awesome! I could imagine all the scenes moment by moment. Great job!
From the previous reviews, you can tell that this story has something solid going for it. What can I say? Read this book. Really. You will not only love it, but you also won’t regret it. 5 solid stars.
This book is totally worth it. I must say, I'm not even half way through but I'm hooked. I can't wait to continue. The only advise I have for guys out there, try it out right now.
Nice supernatural story. Red it twice and it is awesome! Please give this author respect and love.
A great story with a gripping plot and good writing style! The author's narration is very apt and detailed that readers can visualize the situations! Not too hard and boring to read but fun instead!!
Good writing. the author has a great potential and the novel as well, I like reading a adventure fantasy and this is giving. you brought different elements into this story which I like it, I hope you keep up the good work!
This Novel is very unique in it's own way with the character and the System involved in it, especially in the way the system goes off and challenges the MC the way it does. Very nice. There are a few mistakes in the beginning chapters I believe that could improve the writing quality a bit , but it's not something too off putting that would discourage viewing it. Characters as well as the World background are done well. The Story has a nice flow to it.
Hello readers, a reading scout here. This is certainly a good read, writing quality is good with no punctuation errors and good paragraphing. Story development is smooth and pacing is what keeps me reading. Characters are well fleshed out but need more depth and I'm sure they'll get more in the future as the story progresses. As for the world background it is still too early to tell so I'll let the time do the deed. A very good read indeed, give it a try. Cheers!
I like the way the story is written, and like that there are a bunch of elements brought together. it does get a bit confusing sometimes though... especially for a fast reader like me
The story is amazing and engaging. Also the writing style is really different than other novels I've read. Overall this novel is really amazing. Also respect for the author for writing for a year now👏🏻
I love the story from the first chapter. it's good written and also it's readers will not find it difficult to understand. Your on the way to succes. Good luck and keep this up.
This is very well written, pure fiction and good story lines. It's very entertaining with characters that keeps it engaging and colorful. I hope that the story progress more, keep up the good work
A unique take on the mix of elements and magical bloodlines. The story has potential with the introduction of the school and quests. Worth a read for fantasy fans.
I really liked the concept and background of your story. Your story is really different from the ones I have red so far. Keep it up. 💓💓💓
I genuinely enjoyed the story. There are no mistakes in writing, so there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s really good and I took a liking in Eden, he is a well written character. Recomend 10/10!
An amazing work of art nonetheless! It was a mixed emotion of joyride and entertainment. I must tell future readers to check this one out! [img=recommend]
Thank you for this wonderful story. When I read tis story, this reminds me of Full Metal Alchemist and Harry Potter which I read. The different is that it has a system to make things clear. It is better than Harry Potter to me.
Wow! Good novel Author, I really liked what I just read! Eden's character felt good and I won't spoil here but the mystery, the school, the quests everything is really good which is making me wonder what will happen next! I am waiting for more chapters!! Highly recommended!
Intriguing premise with a very interesting way of writing, Author writes in a style of his own that builds a beautiful image of the novel world. Dialogues are done well, a little bit childish actually but enough to keep one’s blood boiling as the mc makes his grand speech… Overall a five stars for me. A little bit of advice from me, I think the synopsis could have been done better. At list, break them to more paragraphs so that it wouldn’t look like a very huge block that make my eyes dizzy from afar lol. Keep up the good work, author! I kept the book in my library so will be expecting more updates soon!
This story feels like nothing in particular, but for some reason I'm still really invested haha. Good job author, hopefully I'll eventually get through all 100 or so chapters...
The characters are something else, my god. The character writing is impeccable. I just love the mc and not to forget the story, it's so emirsive. Seriously great job.
good writing quality ,world background too much but I can't connect to it , it like mix of everything , wizard , Harry Potter style school ( with all hyped students ,teachers and a principal ). MC is also like Harry Potter [ adopted , mean sibling and mother and a father ( who won't let MC die from bullying , but not home to stop the bully ) ]. MC is a magus. but............ .... . .... . MC is also a regressor ( who travelled back to past ) . MC has system . . . .. . . MC is Dracula .. . . . . . . World suddenly started opening portals every where like solo leveling ...MC's bullying sister is a Vampire . . some how MC is considered a trash despite everyone knowing he is a magus and Dracula . he has lowest bloodline ?? . i think even normal humans are better than him ??? don't ask me why . are you guys confused ?!. well I'm . .... ...... i read almost 20 chapters and i think story didn't even started yet , chapters till now are all just empty hyping about MC's past greatness ,his tragedy and how he was considered weak somehow???. there is also hype about that HP school . it was boring
ネタバレを明かす It’s got an awesome world with boundless possibilities and a great main storyline. The prologue gives you a good idea of what he wants his future to be, but the way the story’s set up minimizes the chance of spoilers. All in all, a great work!
This is a really unique take on the usually repetitive and predictable system genre, and I really like it! I've read 10 chapters so far, and the MC seems really interesting and it's a breath of fresh air! There are a couple of grammatical mistakes here and there, but setting that aside, amazing story author! will def read more :D
Hello readers, a reading scout here. This is certainly a good read, writing quality is good with no punctuation errors and good paragraphing. Story development is smooth and pacing is what keeps me reading. Characters are well fleshed out. The world background is perfect as well. A very good read indeed, give it a try. Cheers!
This story has great world building, a lot of characters, and a lot of character development. If you're looking for a story that has a rich story line, this one's for you!
The pacing is amazing. The writing is good. The characters and world built by the author are well done. If you like system novels, then this story is a must to check out.
I love it ❤ i like supernatural stories but this days it is not easy to find one that is not repeating itself like 50 others. Thia onw though is unique and amazing. You managed to surprise me with a really good adventure thank you 😁❤