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Earth's Representative; the Adventurous Queen's Path

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作者: Scarlet_Embers

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Ashly Rosenwoods is just your regular unique and unremarkable person. Different in her own ways, but not someone you'd consider as especially extraordinary. Alas, something chose her.
After a series of events that leave her dying, she's given a choice; an opportunity to live, at the cost of losing her normal life and gaining powers she'd have to be responsible for. In fact, she comes to bear a title that no one has ever had- being the Representative of Earth!
Coming to know astonishing truths and with her new powers and opportunities, while still maintaining her identity as a regular teenage high-schooler she starts to make her unique, unknown road of exciting adventures, filled with struggles, pain, fun, excitement, dangers and dreams.
What will she choose to do with the power she now has? What dreams will she lose and what dreams will she gain? How will she change? Where will she reach? How high will she rise? Where will her road lead to?
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For a more revealing synopsis, I recommend reading my review.
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Hi, this is my original work, and also my first time writing a novel. I hope it will be very fun for us! :D
The Earth here is almost the same as ours, but a bit different and in the future.
I would love to hear your thoughts in the comments!
Oh, and at first maybe you'll get a bit confused about the things happening to her, but soon enough it'll start to make sense and things will get really exciting!
Btw, my native language isn't English but don't worry about the grammar. Anyways, if there's something wrong just write in a comment and I'll fix it.
Enjoy!!! :D

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Hi, Author here, with an honest review. I can't promise that I will update the story regularly- I'm a student and this is also my first novel- so I gave that 1 star. Again, as my first novel I'm not sure about my story- 3 stars for story development. My character design isn't bad so 4 stars, and the world background starts with Earth (kinda) so 4 stars too. My writing quality is 5 stars- my grammar is almost impeccable and my vocabulary isn't bad. If you're hesitating about trying the story out, this is a bit more revealing synopsis: The story is about Ashly, a 15 years old girl, who gets into a building with bombs planted in it. By a stroke of luck she survives, and to continue living, she jumps out of the burning building on a tree. However, the doctors think she still wouldn't make it- but suddenly a mysterious man (if that is what he is) shows up and offers her a choice, an opportunity to live. He doesn't explain the details. She agrees, and eventually finds her self with new powers- 'transforming' to a different race with wings, manipulating elements, being immortal and bearing the title of the Representative- specifically, the Representative of Earth. With this new opportunity, she decides to have a fun life of adventures while trying to reach new places, meet new races, visit different planets, make friends and get stronger. Spoiler!!: [All this also revolves mainly around the PRC- the Planet Ranking Competition. I'm sure that you don't need more than that to understand.]

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Lancee

A beautiful masterpiece. A creative writing skill the author has, from the first person intersection and the imaginary created through those sentences. The words flow perfectly together making the story seamless. A great read

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