Aaaaaaaah that was amazingggggggg!!!!!! Thank you for the chapters!!!!!!!!!
Awesomeeee!!!!! Now I'm starting to get fired up!!! I really like these developments!!! Thank you for the chapters!!!!! :D
I would've either spontaneously combusted or banged my head into the wall repeatedly after hearing this. June has got some steel nerves for sure. Thank you for the chapters!!!! :D And have a great day! :)
Rule number one for a murderer: don't leave any evidence behind. Look, you gotta go over the basics again. You'll sabotage yourself at this rate. And thank you for the chapter :)
Also he 'stole' yet another idea from my list of ideas and started a young justice fanfic as well. I'm going to kill him…not soon but I'm going to do it…eventually.
Young Justice: Ghost
Anime & Comics · Arokey
Yeah, I also don't think he really needs a father figure, but I do wonder what it would be like if Oliver would kinda get him more comfortable with male authority figures and help him get over some of his trauma- as a sort of character development, y'know?
Thank you for the chapter!!!! :D I really liked this chapter- first of all the scene with Dinah and Oliver was really wholesome and fluffy and warm, and I'm glad they all finally talked about it. Plus, I think Oliver will kinda reach something close to a father figure, which would be positive. And Conner developing his powers further and Dante developing powerful, trustworthy people around him and not fighting a lone battle is great! I also like how he used his powers- I like this 'using everything you can' mindset more than being hesitant because of the ethical difficulty of invading another person's mind and essentially 'stealing' the skills they worked hard to get- because behaving morally righteous right now would really put his life in danger, so I'm glad he made a more rational decision. Plus it is REALLY cool, this kind of manipulation-just crafty and useful and discreet. I really like where this story is going!! Also, thank you for pushing down the voices of a couple of annoying idiots that say whatever sh#t they do. Keep doing that, ignore them.
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Ignore them, Please!!! There also lots of people who enjoy a complex teenage MC that undergoes character development!! Jeansus Christmas, don't stop writing because of them!! Ughhhhh!! ...And thank you for the chapter :) P.S- I really liked everything up to now, and the chapter that Dante cried was one of my favorites, also I like that you didn't make Dinah dumb and that she noticed his trauma and is trying to help, and the ending of this chapter was really funny XD
Author Rant: Since some people want an emotionless fifteen year that has his life and future put together, I've officially lost some motivation to write this. I'll be taking a break from writing for a few days or so.
Young Justice: Ghost
Anime & Comics · Arokey
Well she's smart so she'll just let go of her crush herself, and instead stay simply as a very loyal teammate, and one day she'll get in a relationship with somebody else.
Also ran into another problem while going through my plans for this story. That problem/oversight is Artemis. Now I need to figure out what to do with her without ruining this book.
Young Justice: Ghost
Anime & Comics · Arokey
Depends on what you're planning to do with it, I guess. It can always declare that it wants to name itself, and that would really work if it's ever going to manifest as a being independent of Dante's body. If it's always going to be like this, I think calling it The Force or something similar is okay.
Author Rant: Now I have run into a problem, I can't figure out a name for Dante's force and I can't keep calling it 'the force' every time so I need suggestions.
Young Justice: Ghost
Anime & Comics · Arokey
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original Earth's Representative; the Adventurous Queen's Path
Ashly Rosenwoods is just your regular unique and unremarkable person. Different in her own ways, but not someone you'd consider as especially extraordinary. Alas, something chose her. After a series of events that leave her dying, she's given a choice; an opportunity to live, at the cost of losing her normal life and gaining powers she'd have to be responsible for. In fact, she comes to bear a title that no one has ever had- being the Representative of Earth! Coming to know astonishing truths and with her new powers and opportunities, while still maintaining her identity as a regular teenage high-schooler she starts to make her unique, unknown road of exciting adventures, filled with struggles, pain, fun, excitement, dangers and dreams. What will she choose to do with the power she now has? What dreams will she lose and what dreams will she gain? How will she change? Where will she reach? How high will she rise? Where will her road lead to? ....................................................................................................................... For a more revealing synopsis, I recommend reading my review. ....................................................................................................................... Hi, this is my original work, and also my first time writing a novel. I hope it will be very fun for us! :D The Earth here is almost the same as ours, but a bit different and in the future. I would love to hear your thoughts in the comments! Oh, and at first maybe you'll get a bit confused about the things happening to her, but soon enough it'll start to make sense and things will get really exciting! Btw, my native language isn't English but don't worry about the grammar. Anyways, if there's something wrong just write in a comment and I'll fix it. Enjoy!!! :D11 Chs 2 お気に入り
Also, I cannot express the joy of getting 3 chapters at once by using words
From Thug to Idol: Transmigrating to a Survival Show
Fantasy · SandKastle