/ Fantasy / Dungeon WAR: Raising goblins as a dungeon
概要
It has the ability create life as thought it was a measly feat.
With its power it can destroy worlds and create civilisations.
It exists everywhere, where you step, what you see and what you breath is part of it.
One can say it's not only omniscient and omnipotent, but omnipresent as well.
But what is It?
A deity?
No, it's a dungeon.
...
A young man from earth has found himself reincarnated as a dungeon. In this new world, he is now but a child.
Armed with nothing else but his genius creation capability, come watch him as he struggles to survive this world where his kind are treated as nothing but tools.
"Hmm? Another group of adventurers is sent to close me down?" He laughed.
"Clearly, they didn't understand when i killed all of their armies... wait, that boy has a good looking soul. Why don't I turn him into a slime?"
From the deepest pits of the dungeons, terrifying creatures awoke as they had been ordered by the creature they live in.
Be the strongest dragons living in the deepest levels of the dungeon, to the weakest goblins only known for being cannon fodder.
Each of these creatures got up to greet the newcomer, because he ordered them to.
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one of the few novels I enjoy on this app I do not often give out 5 star reviews but you my good sir have earned it
it's a good novel but it's pretty slow rn but ig that's because there's only 15 chapters. overall good writing and progress
Very pleasant and addictive reading, a book with a dungeon theme is something I love, after all books about dungeons are very fascinating and fun and the author seems to be someone fun and funny by the comments he left at the end of each chapter, except a few.
Before I go into any detail, I need to mention a few things..., for one, the book feels more like the author is writing it for themselves and not others, or they just don't care all that much about the readability. On average, it's like 0.7 spelling mistakes per paragraph and it can get tricky to guess at first sight, so it does sometimes break the immersion. The other thing is that, there was this one chapter (I just checked - chapter 6) at the beginning of the story introducing some new characters and then nothing more for more than 40 chapters. No mention, no obvious development in that area, it wasn't even a full chapter that was first dedicated to it.OK, fine. I'm good now, so let's get to the story, shall we?First of all, and something that personally got me interested, was the world building and the way author explained why you can't just pop a gun out of nowhere and "win the game". It's very intuitive and nicely weaved into the world. The background was also neatly put together without revealing too much.The story goes rather slow, but has enough action to keep you invested in the plot. And as we reach the plot I have a feeling (not a good one) that we will get some oh so worked to the bone MC's very tragic backstory... It wasn't introduced yet (I'm on chapter 51 right now), what it is, but there were some thing that made me think so and they also messed quite a bit with the image of the MC.At first as we are introduced to the MC and learn that they (author refers to the as "he" MOST of the time) are a dungeon, we are also told that they think they remember being human and some other things, but no spoiler... The point is that they discard that thought right the next second and we start to learn more about him in the light of something detached from the world of mortals, living in a different reality, in more ways than one, but then things happen and for some weird reason...Please consider, if you want to read ahead as it will be a teeny tiny spoiler.Please consider, if you want to read ahead as it will be a teeny tiny spoiler.Please consider, if you want to read ahead as it will be a teeny tiny spoiler....for some weird reason he just suddenly remembers that he ?was? ones a human, because he got a headache over having too many options about what to do (in all honesty, there were just two... it was just two options... and not really that complicated) and now our beloved MC is acting like a scared lil' ... I won't say it. Judge yourself. After a short moment, things are back to normal, but man, really?
it's soo gooood broo just go like that it's just awesome broooo I love it.just if you could do a mass release also sometimes it would be awesome
For the most part the story is great, perfect even in some aspects however as time goes on the weiting quality seems to plummet, either get an editor or at least a free grammar program as there are tons of small things like typos and the ocasional misspelt or downright wrong word. It’d make the book way more enjoyable to read.
it's got fantastic art and I find myself intrigued by the plot. I want to read more and learn more of your writing, so keep it up, author
Shameless author review here. Im surprised it took me so long to actually write this review as I usually write them the moment the book is put up. And believe me who has seen this book from beginning to end(because it's in my head) it's awesome. Becaue of the setting of this book, you can find many different an interesting genres. Fantasy, sci-fi or even xianxia. All these are here as well as some familiar characters from stories you may have seen before. What do I mean by that? You have to read the book to find out.