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In a realm where the mystical has become mundane, and the spark of magic is a rare and precious thing, those with the innate ability to channel Gaia hold sway over their destiny. These select individuals, wielding unique and potent powers, forge the path of their will, shaping the world according to their desires. That is why in most societies, Gaia users are at the pinnacle.
Into this strange and unfamiliar world, a teenager named Milo awakens. Confused and disoriented, he finds himself unable to remember anything, his past a blank slate, completely erased. His name is the only tether anchoring him to his existence. With no other choice, he embarks on a journey of self-discovery, seeking to understand his place in this world.
As Milo delves deeper into the unknown, he begins to unlock the potential of his Gaia, finding within himself abilities that defy explanation. He becomes embroiled in conflicts and alliances, discovering that his gift of Gaia may be both a blessing and a curse. But as he battles the forces that seek to control or destroy him, one question will always linger in his mind: Who was he before? The quest for identity becomes a perilous journey through a fantastical landscape where magic is scarce, but its impact is profound. In seeking to find himself, Milo might just reshape the world itself.
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Beautifully written and the characters are interesting. The setting is described so intricately you can literally imagine every scene<3
This is a good book. I have just read the first 4chapters and I can say that I am already addicted to the flow of events. I need more chapters please. Author, do something.
I must say that this novel is very well written and explain eveything in detail. The interaction betwen the character is done well. However, based from the synopsis and first chapter, the reader will not understand the outline and plot of the story much. It gonna be hard to attract the new reader especially in this platform. Overall, the book is great and I hope you do well in the future. Good luck!
This book was truly impressive. Well-developed characters, engaging plot, and a satisfying ending. Kept my attention from start to finish. Overall, it's an exceptional read and worth all 5 stars.
I absolutely adore the story genre! The first chapter has an enchanting ability to captivate readers, drawing them effortlessly into the narrative. The seamless and graceful transition between scenes creates a beautiful flow that leaves me utterly intrigued and yearning for more. Keep up the great work author!
First of all, I love your book cover! This will help you drawn new readers because of how cool it looks however, I suggest that you may add some at least a little filler on it that would make it like a 'wow' factor if new readers would see it. ^_^ Second, your synopsis. It can be considered part of a prologue or chapter 01 because it's too long. I suggest that you may summarize it or make it short. Put a little vague detail on it but not too much so that your readers would be curious on how the story of the plot goes on. Third and last. The plot. I get it that this might be the usual amnesiac MC that got thrown to another world (harsh word for to be thrown xD xD xD) but even if that is the case, I like how you put an effort to the plot and the interaction of Milo and Lok that seems like a natural to me. Keep writing! ^_^
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A nice beginning, would love to read it further please keep writing. The writing style is fluid enough, a little more effort to brush it up a notch higher. Characters were drawn good, but there were several weird decisions they made (which According to me didn't fit in their nature) but if may have so something to do with foreshadowing so. The thing I liked the most is the overall atmosphere, or world building, it gives the right kind of vibes for a elven tale . Thankyou for sharing and keep writing.
Early review! 🤩 I must say, the story promises to be full of adventure. I love how each character has their own personality and feels fully fleshed out. The fighting scenes are simply a chef's kiss, and the vivid descriptions of locations truly immerse you in the story. This is one of the best works I've read with flawless grammar. Thank you to the author for creating such an amazing world. Keep up the good work! 💕
It's a nicely written book. The author is really skilled in using words and language to captivate you. The story is also very nice, even though there are still a few chapters, I think it'll be a pretty good story if the author keeps up the good work. I enjoyed reading it hope it'll get more and more readers soon
The world kinda hits at home, also the illustration looks peaceful i liked it a lot. The usage of language looks cool. Keep it up you got it.
Early Review! And man, what an incredible read! From start to finish, the story was a whirlwind of action, drama, and suspense. The premise is truly original and engaging, with a protagonist who is relatable and likable. The world-building is impressive, with a unique and immersive setting that draws the reader in. The conflict between the protagonist and his father is emotionally compelling, and the stakes feel high throughout. The writing style is clear and easy to follow, with a perfect balance of description and dialogue. I can't recommend this story highly enough! 😃
Wow. That detail though... There's only 8 chapters so far but it's really good. The detailed explanations of not only the characters but the scenery as well is incredible. It flows well and the overall mystery keeps you coming back to find out what might happen next. Well done!
The description is the best I read. The story developed quite fast. The MC find himself in a beach without any memory then he make a friend and began to prepared for his journey. The characters need to fleshed out. The mc had no recall of his past and he found himself in a strange place, you could work about his mentality. Maybe he would feel fear and suspicious. He would go to discover where he is and not to plant someone to show him where he would go. The mc is going through an adventure so he could make decision for himself. Maybe at first, he refused to go with Lok, then he followed him silently (The mc is an active one) You should make his desire for discovering his identity his own goal, maybe he would even step over his friends for this reason. If he were to convince Lok and use him to enter into the warden's tower (sorry for the names if I didn't remember them) and be caught then thrown at the Gabble then expelled with Lok. Right then the MC is making decisions for himself and not following the plot. Make the MC leads the story to a heart whelming adventure. All the best. Your description is the best.
Hello everyone! Author here to give myself a review. I hope you enjoyed reading through my novel. It's set in an original world and story that isn't conventional for this platform, but I'll continue writing because this novel is my labour of love. I've always wanted to get my story out there, and now I'm doing it! How exciting! If you enjoyed it, please leave a review! It'll help me grow a lot whilst writing. Thank you for reading, and have an amazing day!