Chiyo_Kobayashi

Chiyo_Kobayashi

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2023-04-04 入りました Global
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Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
3 months ago
Posted

Early review! I must say I'm a sucker for this kind of genres and I love the historical/mythological references madei n the story as well as the language diversity and overall story settings. You have the vision, and I'm here for it. Keep it up🫴💙🫂

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
4 months ago
Replied to Milllion

Right!

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The Divine Core

The Divine Core

Fantasy · Chiyo Kobayashi

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
4 months ago
Replied to Fallency

Well, there's one more to it...

Akira and Yua burst out a loud laughter.

The Divine Core

The Divine Core

Fantasy · Chiyo Kobayashi

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
8 months ago
Commented

"Itai" means "It hurts" in Japanese[img=recommend]

'Itai… What is this sensation? I haven't felt this in ages… Is this… the feeling of death? How long has it been?'

The Divine Core

The Divine Core

Fantasy · Chiyo Kobayashi

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
8 months ago
Posted

Early review! This really is a breath of fresh air. There's not much to say since there isn't enough chapters to really give my overall thoughts, but for now, I just know this would be a superb story. It has this poetic feel to it with a mixture of something that just lure me into the plot. Great work, and keep writing![img=strong]

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
8 months ago
Posted

The story is great, unique its own right. My only genuine gripe about it is the writer's upload schedule. Like wtf? I need more! A little tip as well: try breaking your paragraphs for a more visually appealing sight for your readers. Also, I encourage you to do periodic proof readings of your work. It could be every volume, every 50+ chapters or whatever schedule type that fits you, because I detected a few typos here and there. Overall, it's a pretty decent read. Highly recommend[img=recommend]

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
8 months ago
Posted

I came into this novel with high expectations based off the reviews it got, and it did not disappoint. Right off the first chapter, I just kept going and going and going til I hit the paywalled chapter. This is my early review, and I'm here to tell you that you won't be disappointed. Kudos, author. Love this work so much![img=recommend]

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
8 months ago
Replied to DylanHusand

Hi there👋

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
8 months ago
Commented

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"God's love is divided", a 14-year-old Henry Martin mumbled to himself with his eyes crimson red and his blood boiling, his left hand clinging ever so tightly to his little sister and his right hand a rusty dagger he picked up a few days ago while searching for food and clothing.

The Forsaken Ones

The Forsaken Ones

Fantasy · JayModii

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
8 months ago
Posted

By the pure penmanship alone, you can tell the experience this man must have conjured all these time. I have no complaints whatsoever. Is it the storyline, character development or the overall pacing? Everything's just a chef's kiss. This is an amazing novel thus far, and I highly recommend it. Keep it up!