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A cold-hearted Assassin yet an overprotective father, Max, dies failing to save his daughter and his life.
However, he was given a second chance in life as he reincarnates into a Demon while his daughter with a Hero's bloodline.
How will their fate be? How will their paths cross? Will Max be able to kill the God of Destiny to have a chance to live with his daughter?
This is a story about a father and daughter reincarnating into a magical world where strong deities and mythical creatures roam around the world.
Join me to see Max's Journey and His daughter's.
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I have to say as a first review... This is interesting, sure it may be a topic people have already seen before but another perspective from another author is appreciated in making the case suitable. I hope other readers would take in the consideration of reading this work.
Are you looking for a cold-hearted Main Character but gentle in front of her daughter? A supposed slice of life but with an interesting twist? A reincarnation in another world and reconciliation with her daughter? Come and read, and find out how Max would deal the problem of becoming a demon while her daughter is the future hero!
Sooo I can say that I like how the story starts. We get a few chapters that show Max our MC and his beloved daughter Ana in modern day, their previous life. I especially like what the MC plan for the organization he's quiting. The writing is neat and easy to understand. I really hope the author can make it big with this story. We'll see how our MC gets stronger with the system All the best author!
TLDR: You should read this. Similair vibes as Custom Made Demon King but this book is all original - which to be clear is something good! (CMDK is pretty much a fan fic). So far it seems like the author has really put alot of thought into how the story will progress. The world seems very well thoughtout and a wide cast of characters has been introduced/foreshadowed. I am especially happy to see that the author uses time skips instead of filler to get through periods in which not much is going on. Keep up the good work!
The first few chapters were dam* interesting being a father and cute daughter who faced the unfortune of betrayel and died. Although he used his ' intelligence and insight ' to revenge instantly which later in the story vaporited and mc became dumb average. Anyway Everything is good after he transmograted, became demon and etc...the issue start after his daughter birth to another baron couple, when instead of the story should starts being interesting the author just made it bland. For one the mc just became... useless. He starts being highly emotional like some club dancer facing difficulties with her bf. his power and skills advancment came to a halt even though he starts building that useless army and what made all this boring? His thoughts process. Like bruh he can't even fight more than 3 on the same level as him(canon fodders in that world) yet he wants to take down gods? Like bruh the level gap in between is just crazy, next is the author focus...i believe like me many found it boring to have the pov changed on someone else for so long when the mc himself didn't have many time screen. Why would i care about reading 10 chapters about bunch of nobels and entrance exam when the mc himself isn't in that academy, for the daughter? It make it even more weird when she had new parents and you start introducing heug(or whatever his name) who is likely to be her bf when again...the begining should focus on the mc more and he could have disguised and join the academy to bring more chaos and train with their resources instead of ^i will make gods perish for puting me against my hero daughter and kill their devotee bla bla bla^. Overall a good start but i just found it boring to read about side story in the begining of the main one. A remake for this with more serious matter and a little twik in his personality and his daughter will make it way better. Instead of this wanabe demon emperor and army you could have him use that forest for far more improvement yet he just left after being a little strong. and more creativity on his chaotic core instead of thunder slash and fireball. Man that's long lol. Good luck
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This story starts with a happy but also sad part and then blast off into a world of adventure and determination. The MC is very well written along with his relationships with other characters. There are some discrepancies in the writing i.e. missing a word here and there, sometimes spellcheck puts down a word that doesn’t fit the sentence but it does not make it difficult to read. Overall I’m happy I found this book and hope to keep reading it to the end.
This is a nice story. The plot of the story is interesting, I have no complaints about it. The plot of trying to kill a God to be with the mc's daughter is similar to the cliche of an mc trying to save/reunite with a love interest which I think is overused or maybe the ones with that cliche performed it badly but for this story I don't mind it. But, there are some problems like Grammer, where I'm confused at some parts. Another problem is that the mc doesn't seem to act like a middle-aged man and an assassin. He is an assassin but acts like a swordsman going head to head with his opponents. apart from the problems I said, this novel is a good one to read.
Is there going to be romance? Or Is this like completely slice of life? I just want to know but I'll read it regardless cuz it looks good from the comments
I'm currently on Chapter 95 and have to say that I really like your story. The speed is a bit slower, but I don't think that's bad, you have a lot of time to get into the world and story. And I am sure that much exciting and interesting will come.
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I never review a novel, but by far, this is the best story I have come across. Keep up the good work…and update more. The wait is killing me.
Such an interesting story. The beginning is good but I feel like more interesting parts will be coming soon. Would totally recommend the book [img=update][img=recommend]
I will go out of my awkwardness and inferiority complex and say this, this book deserves my 5 star. I believe I will be able to captivate many people's heart. The starting journey of this book might feel slow to some people, I hope you can stick to it. Also, I will say in terms of writing skill, I might be the worst author in WN but I can say with a little belief my story telling capability isn't. And, last thing, Enjoy!