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Death God's System

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作者: bearateme_

4.7 (25 レビュー結果)

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“Don’t be a hero,” he whispered. “Heroes die alone.”

Jester, the god of death and misery goes back in time to take revenge against his previous reincarnation.

Keiren Astaroth finds himself at death's door, forced to pay for sins he did not commit. The seven races fought for a throne, the highest seat in the universe.

Trapped in the future, Keiren must live as Caedes Volkov, someone the 7 races want dead.

If that wasn't enough? Keiren Astaroth was the son of Ifrit, the first primordial. He was the rightful heir to what Jester was essentially stripped of.
The Forgotten Throne.
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The ML will not just wake up and be oh so the devourer of worlds or anything as such. So please don't expect him to get his powers in the starting chapters. He'll grow, develop, and only then will he realize his purpose in the world.

The purpose of Caedes Volkov.
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[Webnovel Spirity Awards 2024 Entry]
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    itoade
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    Not a lot of chapters yet so not a lot to say. I will say that I absolutely adore the MC! He’s a precious lil killing machine lol. I do think the author might need to work through some edits because the dialogue sometimes feels out of place or takes me out of the story at times but other than that, a fun read so far. UPDATE PLEASE I MISS CAEDES ALREADY

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    Den_of_wolves

    Let me tell you about Death God's System. It's a book that transports you to a whole new world, where myths are real and action is non-stop. The main character? They're pretty fascinating and the differing perspective adds a lot of depth and makes the read more interesting. But what really impresses me is the world-building – it's like uncovering hidden treasures with every turn of the page. Can't wait to see where the story goes next. Overall, Death God's System is an exciting read that showcases the author's talent and leaves you eagerly anticipating more adventures.

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    Starslide

    It's an intriguing concept, with primordials and battle scenes. The grammar is quite good, and the story has a tint of expectation within. If you are a lover of OP characters and bloodthirsty fights, this is surely a catch.

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    bearateme_

    Shameless Author here, I plan to release 5 to 6 chapters weekly, depending on the support I gett. Hope Y'all like my book! Ask me in the comments if anyone has a doubt, opinion or anything that could help me improve the book. Yours Truly, Beer? uhh no, Bearateme-

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    saasxwrite

    i can't even explain my emotions on this book, the detailed writing and the consistent update would keep you hooked. i don't want to add spoilers but damn add this book to you library ♥️♥️

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    Beyond_the_wall

    The story is really well written. Read a little and you will be hooked up!

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    Zexeli
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    A story with a hooking premise. It has a very vivid and descriptive world building that will drop you into a new world. If you are searching for a story to read while drinking your beer 🍺, then this is a story for you!!!

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    Lapuleu

    Overall, I think this has great potential. From what I've read, it's not quite there yet, but it is still very good compared to the average. The characters and story development are good, but I feel it is going too quickly and is hard to grasp. The story and background also feel barebones and are only there for the plot. A more in-depth exposition would do a lot of good for the beginning. Taking a little more time and descriptiveness would help the pacing and overall quality.

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    Santhosh746_

    Great story, had me invested right from the first chapter. The character writing is pretty good and I went through quite a lot of emotions while reading the story. Especially a certain character made me want to punch him in the face. Any story that manages to get such emotions out of me is a certain win in my book.

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    ATLS
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    Some issues include minor grammar/spelling mistakes or clunky descriptions and dialogue that break immersion. However, most of the time the writing quality is decent. The story takes quite a few twists and turns, keeping you on your toes. Personally, this is the part in which this novel excels the most. The characters sometimes feel a little flat or clunky, and the world isn’t explained that well except in the prologue chapter 0. Imo, if you need a prologue to explain your world and its power system, then even if your worldbuilding is interesting, its exposition isnt top tier

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    Ray_Y
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    "Death God's System" hooked me from the start with its intriguing premise and well-developed world-building. I found the main character, both fascinating and charming, providing a unique perspective that added depth to the story. While the pacing can feel a bit rushed at times, the overall potential of this novel is undeniable, I love how the author goes into detail in some part. After finishing each chapter, I eagerly want to read more. I look forward to seeing how the story unfolds. It's an exciting read that showcases the author's talent and leaves me wanting more. I will definitely recommend this book.

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    DivineCrimson

    Story started strong and quickly catch the flow. Good character deigns and excellent plot. So far it's developing well, and shows high potential. Recommend to check out.

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    Vanilla_Chino

    A lot of potential in this novel, only wish the author would post more often. From the story pacing, charming mc, and tense moments; it’s a constructed with amazing craftsmanship from the masterful author.

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    Spirit_Immortal

    Well a very good and interesting novel ! But there is not much chap too do a proper review yet to read the joke i add ..WILL GIVE A PROPER REVIEW AFTER READING 60 CHAPS ... 1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! 16. This is by no means, copied. It's original. 17. I skipped 13 too.

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    Shadowwarrior_007

    Not a lot of chapters yet, but Mythology is my Dr.ug and this one hehe, Keep writing author

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    Writers_Ablood

    The story itself has a great and interesting premise, though there's not a lot of chapters out right now, we can expect some great things in the future. I'd say the only thing that irks me is the pacing. If the story moves just a tad bit slower and everything is well explained and foreshadowed, it'd be a richer experience. Grammar wise, it's quite solid, though there's some typo's here and there. I'd say the author is doing a great job, because while reading the story I could definitely see the complexity of the world background. The fight scenes in the beginning also had many elements, but overall I do think it could use some gravitas. Good work though! Hope you continue writing.

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    Todo_Aio

    Wow! this book had me hooked. the story is so far amazing like it with some noticable great foreshadowing the strongest point this novel has is the world building that's amusing to know it's lore, it deserve more attention, seriously a hidden gem

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    TofSpades

    What an amazing story written in an expert way. The author is able to weave an almost mythical world, incorporating action and lots of foreshadowing. I was kept at the edge of my seat throughout every chapter. Great work author! This book will definitely blow!

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    Toppy_GF

    Nice book with a great beginning. The book has great potential though not much chapters, expecting the author to update more. Overall I like the well-developed characters and the pace of the book. Can't wait for more from the author ☺️

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    baandrews

    Cute wholesome nove.... wait a second! Ugh, ouch, yikes! Writer seems he just starting out, but I hope he will keep spoiling us! There is room for improvement sure, but dont know what to write without spoiling anything!

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