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I don't know why...but I read it and understood the title as the : The Mail Amazon and I was like : the great duck is this about? Then I read it again 3 times before realizing I hat the title was I blame the lack of sleep and being awake for 20 hours.
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The first 10 chapters is utterly garbage with rushed/forced dialogue glaring plot holes in each one and power scales that makes you question if the author even knows about the DC world, Olympus gods and it's mythology or is he just using DC character names and then making up their stories and personality with the defense of its an FF. And judging by there being no real complaints and negative reviews, im starting to think the author is deleting them.
I would vote but already used my daily sorry hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Amazingly scuffed. Author had a good idea but the dialogue between two different people feels like the same person. There was no obvious shift in demeanor or attitude. A primordial goddess like Nyx does not bow to the whims of mortal even if such a mortal has ties with the Greek Pantheon. Whitestair_Ivory said it best. I should have read his review on this before deciding to read it
great idea great start ................................................................................................................................................but you ruined it with the escape scene
more today please more today please more today please more today please more today please more today please more today please more today please
Was going to give a 2/5 solely based on the first 10 chapters but after that, it only went up which made me really happy. The premise was really good but the execution was done poorly at the beginning. I suggest you rewrite the first 10 chapters as they lacked logic and common sense with some pretty disgusting plot holes. Not hating as I enjoy the story the more it goes but if you fixed those beginning chapters then you'd receive a lot more readers that don't drop it before it gets good. Everything is good except the dialogue, it is either really really cringe or decent. That is my only criticism in future chapters. Apart from that good job author!
Author is mentally handicapped obviously, he doesn't know a thing about DC, he's the cringiest person I've ever seen, he's pathetic, deleting most negative reviews. wq: 3 its average not good not that bad sd: 1 makes no sense and is a pile of trash cd: 1 all robots without Personality us: its fine wb: author doesn't know power scales and lore.
So cringe, stupid MC, worst interaction I've ever seen, Chunni MC, UGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGGGGGGHHHHHHGGGGGG
From the beginning it sounds good. it goes down hill really fast from there. I would never recommend this to anybody. just trash. the writing quality ain't bad though.
I'll be honest it was sorta hard to read what you wrote. The idea was solid but there was alot of stuff you could've done to spice it up and the way you make each character talk is really out of place. Nearly every person has said 'guy' and have talked similarly to one another. The story is ok but could be better executed.
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Well so far there is only 2 chapters so far I think words count to 1000-2000 words. Well it's a pretty great so far hope you keep it up also more pls
I liked it its great im glad your back And updating again as i though it got droped but the only thing that annoys me is diana as it Seems she controls him but love It so far
truly this author is a god among men to have created this masterpiece. never have I seen this much greatness in my life. everyone should absolutely read this.
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