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"What? That chicken is actually a phoenix?"
"You're telling me that this dog is a qilin?"
"This little lizard is the legendary dragon?"
"What kind of weird pet shop is this? When did legendary beasts become so easy to find!"
An ordinary looking shop, but what hides inside are legendary cultivation pets. Step inside, but only if you dare.
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The writing is fine as well as the updates, but the world background is a complete ripoff of previously existing translated novels on this website, for example, the old man buying food for his pet, both were fire type which he could've at least changed the element but no he didn't. Another point, is the angel he met, the only difference is that its an angel instead of a protass/god, otherwise its exactly the same other than the fact that he made it earlier on in the story. Feel free to delete this author, but i can keep writing a new review.
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This novel is one of those where the MC gets a system not to power-up themselves but to run a business. I personally really like this kind of novels, so it's interesting to read. So far there are only 4 chapters so I guess the shop would become more and more popular overtime. A few suggestions I wanted to give based on my personal opinion (author you can ignore these if you want since they are just my opinions) Do a bit more world building, there are certain things I was able to imagine on my own but also things that I couldn't create a mental image of. One such thing is the shop: there is a transformation but the reader doesn't get to know much about how it looks now compared to before. I'd recommend checking out Black Tech Internet Cafe or some other similar novels to get inspiration on how to describe the changes. From the general writing perspective I'd suggest avoiding repetitive use of words such as realized and shabby, and look for some synonyms. The plot is a bit fast but I don't mind that too much. Overall it's a very nice novel. I hope Lin Fan's sister isn't crazy and the shop grows well. Keep working hard!
exact similar with astral pet store only different names and different chapter order you need some diferrences man not just names an arc that astral pet store haven't done or something
astral pet store copycat? meh...,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
This novel is amazing! - Sarcasm-. This novel seems similar to a certain Qidian Novel ahem Astral Pet Store. Okayz enough if the jokes. This novel is exactly like Astral Pet Store. The only thing that is different is how fast the plot moves and how they meet the Angel in early chapters. Where as we have just met Joanna in Astral Pet Store. Not only that, but the concept of infinite revives, electrocution when MC swears. The only thing really different that is noticable is the weird ass. sister. Which in itself is gross and a main reason why I dropped after literally less than 30 minutes of reading
Writing is rushed and seems to be an imitation of Astral Pet Store, so originality wise it's just a copy even the most of the plots I.e Old man with pet food and the first few customers. I could stand that, but the plot lines are quite squished together with not much story, not much monologue either and just tries with cheap tricks that makes no sense.
I'm sorry to give such a low rating but the author doesn't know what to write. I don't mean grammar, I'm not English and I can understand history very well. He writes without thinking about future or previous chapters, he focuses only on the current story arc. Take for example when the Lin family is kidnapped: The parents are weak and the protagonist has to bow, huh no, plot twist, they are actually much stronger than they show! This is revealed in the future, but then why did the father allow his family to be kidnapped? But it doesn't matter, it's a bad thing but it didn't bring this to the drop, but the exact same thing happens shortly after (shortly after the parents reveal their power), even worse than in the beginning. The protagonist does nothing when his mother and sister are taken away in front of him, despite the fact that the enemy has said he wants them both, making it clear what he wants the two women ... I continued reading to find out the motivation, which marked the drop of the series: "Oh no, because if you intervene, your father will have a block, it doesn't matter if your sister and your mother are violated." (The phrase is not quite like that, but the gist is this. We know that nothing will happen, since the author is not faithful to what he writes and invents things to create plot twists that break the plot). This is why I dropped, but there are a lot of smaller errors, which don't make the story understand. Like the conflict of the two souls within the protagonist, which was not transmitted at all. Conflict? Nothing ever happened between the two souls, it's just a stretch for the growth of the protagonist. The relationships of the characters that come out of nowhere. The fact that the protagonist loves animals (even when he was on earth, written as someone who defended and saved animals), and then makes them die only because they can be brought to life. In short, there are many errors of writing (not English). Besides this is an unoriginal story, I have never read astral pet shop or what it's called, so I don't judge the beginning. I just say that he does not quote but copies many things, such as the character of Momonga (not a quote), the tribulations of the sky / lightning, the examination of the tamers which is identical to two other stories (theory to a very famous one, and practical punching beasts to improve their strength, which you should have already read in another fairly famous story). In short, I do not recommend the story. The rating is not a precise star, a little more (1,8), since it has some nice chapters, but it is not enough for the two stars. I struggled to read up to chapter 300+, as I didn't want to drop until I figured things out, but that chapter is pretty awful.
at first i'd your mc...but after read each chapter...your mc not mc but villain...im dissapointed...i dont mind if your mc copy paster from astral pet...but your mc same as mc from other cultiation
This novel prominently features animal abuse in a way that doesn't make it seem light hearted or as a joke. The pets actually get stronger after getting traumatized, without discussing any potential negative effects of physical abuse. The story seems rather shallow and based on other similar novels, with random decisions and plot points thrown in so that the author can get to the ending they want, but they clearly don't realize that the story is the line that happens in between rather than the points it connects to.
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With Due all respect, damn this is good idk why this novel has a low review, but I guarantee that this is good. Keep up the good work that's all hopefully you'll continue this.
Typical Novell about pet shop&cultivating, nothing interesting, the author is a school guy. The plot is boring, there are some love interested , but they are too typical and there is not intrigue.
The story is somehow the same as astral pet store. Though there's some changes. I hope that It'll be much more interesting than the other one.
to be honest I think this might be something created from the novel astral pet store I like that novel and since the author is different might as well treat it as a completely different one.... we never know maybe this one might become better than astral pet store novel
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Too similar to Astral Pet Store but I didn't mind it. One thing that bothers me though is he neglects his family too much and relies on plot armor to keep them safe. He could have done a lot more to make them stronger but let's them get taken away because he is too cautious when technically his employees and pets can overpower anyone. Author can just write no harm will befall the mom and sister until his dad is strong enough to help free them but any filial son will not take the risk.
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I decided to review this so as to clear some myths. Some idiots who read few initial chapters made some claims about this novel. This is for future readers so that they don't get duped. True this novel is similar to Astral pet store..... about 60-70% similar but not same or exactly similar. Those who haven't read astral pet store don't have to concern themselves with any nonsense and just read this. This novel isn't like other popcorn system novels out there. System isn't OP and helps(or tortures) MC in regards only to pet/pet shop. MC is sensible and not arrogant dickhead. Characters have decent personality. Power system is well defined. World building has some serious potential. Also there are some cliche plots here so though not a perfect but an enjoyable read. Now coming to those who have read Astral pet store. I am currently at chapter 447(reading MTL after chapter 351). If you read this novel for few chapters you may think it is same but it isnt if you read it to the latest chapter i.e. 90. MC's personality here and in astral pet store is quiet different and also his sister. the backstory behind the sibling's relationship is different. The circumstances of their parents is also different and also the family friend, there is no1 in astral pet store. The connections MC has in this novel is different than in Astral pet store, girls here are falling for MC slowly unlike in Astral pet store where we don't have anything of such sorts yet. Now talking about events.... events are similar but in essence different. The exhibition match is different. There is no Momomga in that novel. MC has all together different pets as compared to astral pet store. The relationship between MC and angelina is quite different than their counterparts in astral pet store. Also the extent of Angelina's power, her mobility all these are completely different as in astral pet store. Even the current event of inheritance is entirely different if readers have read though the thing about inheritance is similar. The allies and the enemies MC has are also different. I have mentioned all those things that this novel is different than astral pet store...... One could say this is a fan fic of that novel or inspired from that novel. If you binge read this novel then it will appear to be entirely same but if you read it carefully and give this novel time then you will know that ideas are similar but execution is entirely different. Events are similar but what exactly happens is entirely different. So it doesn't matter if you have read astral pet store or not this novel is a good read. Also the grammar, writing style, narrations is much better in this novel..... Only thing i felt is astral pet store has better and exciting action scenes which this novel lacks but i think that it is just 90 chapters so we might see better action in future....
Same template as Astral Pet Store, but i feel its a hurried version. The pets are not the main focus since theres so little part they played for the MC.The world power level is not empathize since the MC just brushed past the ranks. And theres so little restriction placed on the OP side characters that the MC were never put in real danger since he has OP bodyguards accompanying his every adventure.
I have read astral pet store in start it was more about pets and less about human cultivation. your pet are the main fighting force and you are the support but later mc got way powerful for his pets that they kind of became useless for the story.
Can anyone tell me if this is a harem im on chapter 300 but it looks like something might Be happening with that girl. i know him and the angel have feeIings for eachother. ………
Well I'm the author, so I have to give it 5 stars, but here are some reasons why you should as well. 1. You like face slapping? There will be plenty of that! 2. You like dark comedy? This novel's dark enough that I can't even see the light switch in front of me. 3. You like cultivation? Well join an adventure where each step will be a slow climb. 4. You like systems? I got all the system you can want, you'll seriously get sick of it. If that didn't convince you, then maybe this will, cute girls...