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Life for Naruto Uzumaki changes forever as he is dragged into a world of horrors. it only get's stranger from there.
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good writing, good pacing, and long ass chapters what's not to love.....😁😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
The chapters are long, well writen, nice paced and oh so interesting it has become a tie with my favorite Naruto fanfic. We can see a more open picture of what people thought of Naruto in Konoha and a more indepth interaction among the characters. Having Naruto being able to talk with Kurama and becoming friends since he was little made it so he was able to keep more innocence in his childhood while keeping his firm will and strong yet funny character, his influence has even made Sasuke less emo. Naruto is a story with a lot of characters and this fanfics shows a good understanding of every one of them, even explaining whys we didn't have in the original. Of course, as a fanfic where the mc is to be OP there is a lot of training and information on the logic of jutsus, but it's not overwhelming and can be read easily without confusion. The long time the author takes to update is controversial, but looking at the size of the chapters makes it worthy (moreover the author always tells if the update is going to take time). I still don't know how the changes are going to modify the cannon story because everything until now is from before, but if the generation of Naruto is to be stronger and more united it can't be bad.
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Author Do you want to know why most fanfics are not succesful? Authors wasting time.Making 10 k polls instead of 1 chapter.Who the **** cares of status sheet,instead of those 10 status sheets nobody absolutely cares about,we want chapters.More chapters=more power stones.Stop caring what ppl think,i dont wanna make my own story ,i want to read yours.So please make chapters.
I rarely give reviews but this is the best naruto fanfic in my opinion. nothing's forced in the fic, writing qyality is top-notch, character development is excellent and mc is not OP from the start best naruto fanfic! dont give it a miss
The title of this fanfic is misleading. This fanfic is more about ten ten and saskue than kurama and naruto later on. Like naruto has literally learnt asura's taijutsu style, but somehow still loses to a random uchiha taijutsu style of saskue, like tf? And how does he not sense people who are peeping on him while training after all that chakra training, like, they're not even trained ninjas who can use chakra properly. The whole thing of e.g. Ten ten watching naruto train feels way too forced, like mate, how do u not feel someone who still doesn't know how to tree walk with chakra spying on u, makes no sense. Like, even if u didn't sense her atleast kurama must've, how does the strongest bijuu not feel the presence of academy kids, huh? In summation, it started off pretty good, but good things never last and too many plot holes started appearing later which really annoyed me. On the bright side, this fanfic has readable Grammar as opposed to other fanfics which r unreadable
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friend, excellent story ... not who am I kidding, I haven't read it yet, but the reviews are so good that I also wanted to give a positive one, right now I'm going to read the story, see you,
This is an awesome fan fiction with a great plot and premise. The character development is very satisfying and the power ups are quite realistic. Overall, a great book.
This some good shit right here, great story development and super long chapters... Only downside is the scarse updates presumably an effect of the long chapters. Overall I highly recommend this story.
I really love the novel, my only complaint being that Naruto never seems to learn despite being *perfect* and being unable to be flexible with his abilities (his original good point in canon)
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Great story, it really grabbed my interest to the point I had to continue it, I am really happy Jiraiya became hokage I've been looking for stories like that so if anyone knows more please recommend and I hope you update
I have been reading this since it came out. I really liked it then I still like it now. I have read many Naruto fan fictions, but I can say that this is definitely in the top five. The reason it’s only a 4.2 is because this story does not update regularly, which is a criteria in the review. Author please don’t stop this story 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
I love this novel man i really appreciate your work. Unfortunately people didn't realize how amazing this is and left it, i really wanted you to come back.
such a good book I really hope it doesn't get dropped. love everything about this book. keep up the good work author[img=update][img=update]
almost made a pass on this masterpiece. so glad I didn't [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
One of the best Maruti fan fiction I have ever read. All power up are extremely detailed and realistic to some point. The grammar is impeccable and the plot development is fantastic.
Meh, this isn't bad. However, both Naruto and Sasuke have been working hard for the past four years had less/equal amount of development as lee had in 1 year and several months. Naruto almost passed out from Zabuza's killing intent but was okay with Kuramas, who last time I checked is the strongest of the nine tail beasts. The training in the academy was fine, but the results were underwhelming. They should at least be able to defeat Kakashi without the Sharingan individually. Yes, Kakashi is a veteran, but he is a stagnated veteran. He barely improved from the 14 years old version of himself and highly depends on his Sharingan. Kakashi can't use the Chidori without it. Overall, the power scaling is BS. Here is how it should have been. Graduation: Naruto = Jonin Sasuke (Without Sharingan) = Low Jonin Sasuke (Sharingan) = Jonin Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = Elite Jounin Sakura = Low Genin Kakashi = Jonin Kakashi (With Sharingan) = Elite Jonin Post Wave Arc : Naruto = Elite Jonin Sasuke (Without Sharingan) = Jonin Sasuke (With Sharingan) = Elite Jonin Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = Low S-class Sakura = Low Chunin Time Skip 3-years: Naruto = S-class Naruto ( Chakra Mode) = Low SS-class Naruto (Kurama Mode) = High SS-class Sasuke = Low S-class Sasuke (Sharingan) = S-class Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = High S-class Sasuke (Mangekyo Sharingan) = High S-class Sasuke (Lightning Mangekyo Sharingan) = Low SS-class Sasuke (Perfect Susanoo) = SS class Sakura = Elite Jonin Kakashi = Elite Jonin Kakashi (With Sharingan) = Low S-class
This is one of the best Natuto fanfic I have ever read, and I like to read a lot of Naruto fanfics. This is definitely worth a read!
i love it it does have some writing problems but overall it's great i love it plz make more i don't know how often it updates but i hope soon :)
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I don't give review's often but this story is just too good to not give a review the story has potential and at least for now there is no cliche no forced romance and is a good lighthearted novel which is needed sometimes after reading cliches and AUTHOR please don't drop the novel it is one of the best novel I've read till now. **:Author Thank you for this wonderful story