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CLOSE YOUR EYES

Fantasy 18 章 18.3K ビュー
作者: Melsdar

4.86 (31 レビュー結果)

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Magenta Savili, a blind girl who can do anything she closes her eyes, she can be said to be perfect but unfortunately she always fails in her love relationship. She is investigating about her powers to escape the restraints of her mother who used her.

Rion Stevano, CEO of the country's largest coal company. He recruits Magenta as his employee because he is attracted to its powers and uses Magenta to his advantage.

Some scenes in the story:

Magenta smiled at them as she raised one hand and then uttered her signature line before starting the show.

"Close your eyes, "

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"Find out who the girl is, as soon as possible," - said Rion giving orders to his secretary.

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Karisma_5815

So grateful that you're not hear the screaming of Jessi. It would be really disturbing (hahah)😪 Btw I also want work at Stevano's Company😍

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Melsdar
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Hello, I'm the author! Welcome to my second book, hope you enjoy it. Please leave criticism and suggestions for my book so that this story will be better in the future!

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Novelistilia

The title itself is captivating enough. But wait until you read the synopsis and the first chapters. You're going to get hooked! Our author has a unique way of making you immerse with Magenta's character and making you root for her and her happy ending. Im definitely adding this to my library! ❤️❤️❤️

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Namy_Casper

I love your book cover. very beautiful. then, the synopsis is very good. this is truly an amazing fantasy! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Muche_Godwin

I love the synopsis of the story. Both the plot and the characters are unique and interesting. I also love the story progression. Keep up the good work author 👍

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JakaGKJ14

I would have given it aa five but there are so many plot holes in chapter one but the story is really nice an the characters are written really well

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Ruovaf_star

Am falling in love with the story plot. the female lead character has a very calm personality even though she suffering at the hands of her selfish mum. Who in turn treats her like

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LadyE101

Nice work. . the blurb was quite charming and the plot is amazing well done author. . clap for you 👏👏👏👏👏 keep up the good work😊😊😊😊😊 back to reading.

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Denzel_Silver

This is a masterpiece. Very amazing The description alone caught my eye. The MC has a very touching background and I can totally relae. Thats what made me fall for the book. Well done to the author!

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Rin_Nurnia

Wow! I really didn't expect that little twist on the first chapter. I've always imagined a story of someone using contact lenses to become blind and you made it! Great job author👏🏻

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EmpireQuinn

Firstly, I love the name of the lead. It's quite beautiful. The plot of the story is also interesting. The first two chapters captivated me.

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Elona_Alone

This is a fantasy romance novel that's filled with great turns 😊 I have read chapter one, and now I can't put down. This novel would keep you to your seat . Good job author

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Mrs_O
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a very interesting story, romantic fantasy novels are my favorite. The storyline is interesting, very fun to read when you have free time. keep writing author. spirit ! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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NadNadia28

OoooMmmmGggg!!! Why do people who have the name Rion always make love so much? Love the story, waiting for you to update the new story💞💞💞🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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moved_44

Its such a wonderful book with only few chapters, it's enough to capture someone's attention. The Author really did well with the book. Bravo!

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Ashdenroth

Just started reading this book. The first person narration feels very personal and reflective. The language is simple and flows smoothly. I'd just like to offer a couple of suggestions : starting most sentences with 'I' makes it feel a bit monotonous, so the author might consider mixing things up a bit; secondly, the work could use more descriptive details to help the readers better visualise the surroundings. Hope it helps. Keep up the good work.

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RosemilOduor

I was drawn to the book by the synopsis and not once do I regret sparing a few minutes to read the book. It's everything you need to get off some steam. Check it out guys, let's support this author.

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iga_emilia

I really like magenta characters. This is also a book that is no less interesting than the author's work. cheer up sis💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

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athena_vivian_1134

First, read the synopsis, I like the name Magenta, such a mystery and strong character. Like the universe around the planet, beautiful but deadly. I will enjoy your reading

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AntiTeoSensai

After the first couple of chapters I waw already hooked! Magenta's ability is very interesting and I really wonder what the limits of it are. I really hate the mother character already for making Magenta's life a living helll. I can't wait to see what's next!

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