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Karisma_5815

So grateful that you're not hear the screaming of Jessi. It would be really disturbing (hahah)😪 Btw I also want work at Stevano's Company😍

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Novelistilia

The title itself is captivating enough. But wait until you read the synopsis and the first chapters. You're going to get hooked! Our author has a unique way of making you immerse with Magenta's character and making you root for her and her happy ending. Im definitely adding this to my library! ❤️❤️❤️

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Namy_Casper

I love your book cover. very beautiful. then, the synopsis is very good. this is truly an amazing fantasy! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Muche_Godwin

I love the synopsis of the story. Both the plot and the characters are unique and interesting. I also love the story progression. Keep up the good work author 👍

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JakaGKJ14

I would have given it aa five but there are so many plot holes in chapter one but the story is really nice an the characters are written really well

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Ruovaf_star

Am falling in love with the story plot. the female lead character has a very calm personality even though she suffering at the hands of her selfish mum. Who in turn treats her like

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LadyE101

Nice work. . the blurb was quite charming and the plot is amazing well done author. . clap for you 👏👏👏👏👏 keep up the good work😊😊😊😊😊 back to reading.

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Denzel_Silver

This is a masterpiece. Very amazing The description alone caught my eye. The MC has a very touching background and I can totally relae. Thats what made me fall for the book. Well done to the author!

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Rin_Nurnia

Wow! I really didn't expect that little twist on the first chapter. I've always imagined a story of someone using contact lenses to become blind and you made it! Great job author👏🏻

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EmpireQuinn

Firstly, I love the name of the lead. It's quite beautiful. The plot of the story is also interesting. The first two chapters captivated me.

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Elona_Alone

This is a fantasy romance novel that's filled with great turns 😊 I have read chapter one, and now I can't put down. This novel would keep you to your seat . Good job author

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Mrs_O
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a very interesting story, romantic fantasy novels are my favorite. The storyline is interesting, very fun to read when you have free time. keep writing author. spirit ! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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NadNadia28

OoooMmmmGggg!!! Why do people who have the name Rion always make love so much? Love the story, waiting for you to update the new story💞💞💞🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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moved_44

Its such a wonderful book with only few chapters, it's enough to capture someone's attention. The Author really did well with the book. Bravo!

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Ashdenroth

Just started reading this book. The first person narration feels very personal and reflective. The language is simple and flows smoothly. I'd just like to offer a couple of suggestions : starting most sentences with 'I' makes it feel a bit monotonous, so the author might consider mixing things up a bit; secondly, the work could use more descriptive details to help the readers better visualise the surroundings. Hope it helps. Keep up the good work.

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Echan_ivu

Wow, I'm very interested in this story. The writing is very good in my opinion, the length of the story per chapter is also satisfying. I'm with Magenta's mother character who is very evil, I'm looking forward to the development of her character

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RosemilOduor

I was drawn to the book by the synopsis and not once do I regret sparing a few minutes to read the book. It's everything you need to get off some steam. Check it out guys, let's support this author.

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iga_emilia

I really like magenta characters. This is also a book that is no less interesting than the author's work. cheer up sis💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

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athena_vivian_1134

First, read the synopsis, I like the name Magenta, such a mystery and strong character. Like the universe around the planet, beautiful but deadly. I will enjoy your reading

2yr
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AntiTeoSensai

After the first couple of chapters I waw already hooked! Magenta's ability is very interesting and I really wonder what the limits of it are. I really hate the mother character already for making Magenta's life a living helll. I can't wait to see what's next!

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shentiments

I like the story. It has interesting synopsis. I wonder what Magenta could do as the synopsis says she can do anything though she's blind. I add this to my library. Keep updating you

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Muche_Godwin

I really like the main story line and I also like that fact that the mom is the antagonist. I would gladly recommend this novel, so please keep up the good work 👍👍

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Shinnystar234

Just reading the blurb and I am quite hooked. I love Magenta character already. Author please update a lot🙌👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌

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Petrashy

After reading several chapters, I am interested in this book, although there are still a few mistakes in writing, but I hope that in the future it will improve. the plot and characters of this story i like it, i am waiting for the conflict of this story

2yr
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Missy_Castillo

A very unique plot with the mother as the antagonist, my writer instinct could tell that there's a twist around her relationship with her mother. The writing style is very simple, though, there are some grammatical errors, but just little. I can't wait to read more to know the full potential of the main character. I love the book cover by the way ☺

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RiyaSarkar24

Magenta being born with supernatural powers still has to face lots of struggle. Her mother is the antagonist and well described by the author. The ML introduction to the story gave very nice impression too.

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PERWEEN
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Great fantasy fiction. The blurb alone is promising and the creator really did a fantastic work pulling all the elements in this story. Added in my read list.

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AbdulfatahFatima

I love the Magenta character in this story,I want to know the extent of his strength. I also find the storyline interesting and I want to know what will happen at the end

2yr
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Piyashere

I love the Magenta character in this story, I want to know the extent of his strength. I also find the storyline interesting, looking at the synopsis, I want to know what conflicts are in this story. author spirit!

2yr
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Qulikeme

I find this story interesting. a fantasy story that is new to me, during the first few chapters it seems that it is still an introduction but it is getting more and more interesting for me. hopefully in the future this story will get better and don't stop to update the story!

2yr
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Karisma_5815

So grateful that you're not hear the screaming of Jessi. It would be really disturbing (hahah)😪 Btw I also want work at Stevano's Company😍

2yr
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Novelistilia

The title itself is captivating enough. But wait until you read the synopsis and the first chapters. You're going to get hooked! Our author has a unique way of making you immerse with Magenta's character and making you root for her and her happy ending. Im definitely adding this to my library! ❤️❤️❤️

2yr
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Namy_Casper

I love your book cover. very beautiful. then, the synopsis is very good. this is truly an amazing fantasy! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

2yr
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Muche_Godwin

I love the synopsis of the story. Both the plot and the characters are unique and interesting. I also love the story progression. Keep up the good work author 👍

2yr
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JakaGKJ14

I would have given it aa five but there are so many plot holes in chapter one but the story is really nice an the characters are written really well

2yr
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Ruovaf_star

Am falling in love with the story plot. the female lead character has a very calm personality even though she suffering at the hands of her selfish mum. Who in turn treats her like

2yr
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LadyE101

Nice work. . the blurb was quite charming and the plot is amazing well done author. . clap for you 👏👏👏👏👏 keep up the good work😊😊😊😊😊 back to reading.

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2yr
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Denzel_Silver

This is a masterpiece. Very amazing The description alone caught my eye. The MC has a very touching background and I can totally relae. Thats what made me fall for the book. Well done to the author!

2yr
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Rin_Nurnia

Wow! I really didn't expect that little twist on the first chapter. I've always imagined a story of someone using contact lenses to become blind and you made it! Great job author👏🏻

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2yr
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EmpireQuinn

Firstly, I love the name of the lead. It's quite beautiful. The plot of the story is also interesting. The first two chapters captivated me.

2yr
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Elona_Alone

This is a fantasy romance novel that's filled with great turns 😊 I have read chapter one, and now I can't put down. This novel would keep you to your seat . Good job author

2yr
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Mrs_O
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a very interesting story, romantic fantasy novels are my favorite. The storyline is interesting, very fun to read when you have free time. keep writing author. spirit ! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
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NadNadia28

OoooMmmmGggg!!! Why do people who have the name Rion always make love so much? Love the story, waiting for you to update the new story💞💞💞🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

2yr
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moved_44

Its such a wonderful book with only few chapters, it's enough to capture someone's attention. The Author really did well with the book. Bravo!

2yr
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Ashdenroth

Just started reading this book. The first person narration feels very personal and reflective. The language is simple and flows smoothly. I'd just like to offer a couple of suggestions : starting most sentences with 'I' makes it feel a bit monotonous, so the author might consider mixing things up a bit; secondly, the work could use more descriptive details to help the readers better visualise the surroundings. Hope it helps. Keep up the good work.

2yr
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Echan_ivu

Wow, I'm very interested in this story. The writing is very good in my opinion, the length of the story per chapter is also satisfying. I'm with Magenta's mother character who is very evil, I'm looking forward to the development of her character

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2yr
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RosemilOduor

I was drawn to the book by the synopsis and not once do I regret sparing a few minutes to read the book. It's everything you need to get off some steam. Check it out guys, let's support this author.

2yr
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iga_emilia

I really like magenta characters. This is also a book that is no less interesting than the author's work. cheer up sis💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

2yr
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athena_vivian_1134

First, read the synopsis, I like the name Magenta, such a mystery and strong character. Like the universe around the planet, beautiful but deadly. I will enjoy your reading

2yr
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AntiTeoSensai

After the first couple of chapters I waw already hooked! Magenta's ability is very interesting and I really wonder what the limits of it are. I really hate the mother character already for making Magenta's life a living helll. I can't wait to see what's next!

2yr
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shentiments

I like the story. It has interesting synopsis. I wonder what Magenta could do as the synopsis says she can do anything though she's blind. I add this to my library. Keep updating you

2yr
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Muche_Godwin

I really like the main story line and I also like that fact that the mom is the antagonist. I would gladly recommend this novel, so please keep up the good work 👍👍

2yr
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Shinnystar234

Just reading the blurb and I am quite hooked. I love Magenta character already. Author please update a lot🙌👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌

2yr
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Petrashy

After reading several chapters, I am interested in this book, although there are still a few mistakes in writing, but I hope that in the future it will improve. the plot and characters of this story i like it, i am waiting for the conflict of this story

2yr
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Missy_Castillo

A very unique plot with the mother as the antagonist, my writer instinct could tell that there's a twist around her relationship with her mother. The writing style is very simple, though, there are some grammatical errors, but just little. I can't wait to read more to know the full potential of the main character. I love the book cover by the way ☺

2yr
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RiyaSarkar24

Magenta being born with supernatural powers still has to face lots of struggle. Her mother is the antagonist and well described by the author. The ML introduction to the story gave very nice impression too.

2yr
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PERWEEN
LV 11 Badge

Great fantasy fiction. The blurb alone is promising and the creator really did a fantastic work pulling all the elements in this story. Added in my read list.

2yr
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AbdulfatahFatima

I love the Magenta character in this story,I want to know the extent of his strength. I also find the storyline interesting and I want to know what will happen at the end

2yr
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Piyashere

I love the Magenta character in this story, I want to know the extent of his strength. I also find the storyline interesting, looking at the synopsis, I want to know what conflicts are in this story. author spirit!

2yr
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Qulikeme

I find this story interesting. a fantasy story that is new to me, during the first few chapters it seems that it is still an introduction but it is getting more and more interesting for me. hopefully in the future this story will get better and don't stop to update the story!

2yr
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