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As I was searching for way too go back to the city I heard a cry for help
I saw a beautiful girl being chased by the wolves which had chased me before
She saw me and started shouting for help but I didn't moved I just stood there
I saw her being circled by the wolves, as one wolf attacked , other also followed
I just turned away heading my way
I knew i was being heartless
But I also knew better than anyone not to involve myself in unwanted problems
Birds die for foods
Humans die for wealth
And Some die because of their stupidity
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Protagonist, a new writer, was working on his first novel.
He's poured his heart and soul into the story, but it's still a work in progress.
One day, he dies under mysterious circumstances and gets reincarnated into the world of his own novel.
He finds himself in the body of a young man who is going to be attending in the Eridorian Academy of Magic
A student who is struggling to become a skilled mage While also Capturing some maidens heart in the process for Good Old BENEFITS.
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Things will start to get good after 39 chapters
( I am just writing for experience, a average harem novel)
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author overall, I noticed some mistakes in your novel, but even then it's really good. I've noticed some spelling mistakes here and there, although the main problem I've had with this book is that it goes over the top when it comes to explaining what happens inside the classes, even though it could easily be explained in a couple of sentences at most. when it comes to that it feels like the author is trying to find something to talk about but doesn't have the imagination to do so. even then, pretty good novel, I would suggest reading for at least the first Arc (16 chapters)
the important thing while writing is that you enjoy it yourself too ? if yes then that is okay even if your novel isn't good, even if the story sucks, if you are satisfied with it then it is good don't pay attention to others, don't listen to others, just write whatever you think it is good, whatever your heart is saying to you as long that you enjoy it yourself .... then it is good 😁
Well it's definitely the author's first work, I can tell. I do applaud you wholeheartedly for actually sticking to the story and actually following an upload schedule. Well with that out of the way, I would like to offer some suggestions. The grammar itself isn't the worst. Obviously there are mistakes here and there (mainly about punctuation and sentence structure) but that's about the average quality you can find on webnovel so I wouldn't fault you. You are writing in first person POV which is really good for a character driven writing style, but the problem is that you need to include more descriptive language into your writing to make us engaged with the story as well as adhering to 'show don't tell' thing. You see, humans have 5 senses, but you only describe what the mc sees and exclude hearing and smelling completely which otherwise could have helped in making your world feel alive (here you can also use metaphors and comparisons like many authors do). You should also include more internal monologues so that at the very least make him somewhat entertaining to read, as well as slow down the pace a bit to make actions feel natural.
doesn't really matter what people say as long as you want to write just have fun and do this as a hobby Don't ask for opinions on how you should write your next chapters Just follow what your heart says this is your novel, be sure to enjoy this process of writing it. but most importanly is just to have fun while you write it
just write as you wish you don't have to care what other say I mean it's your first novel ... just earn some exp
My guy, I really hope, you change the cover page, the story is good but the cover page isn't, i even skipped this book when I came across it due to the cover page. So as a reader, i hope you fix this issue, because trust me, i know how it feels when you work hard and most of the people don't even reach out to you... good regards ☺️
I am initially giving you 5 stars for motivation after reading about 2 chapters. I have read "Revenge insanity" twice and am thinking to start it again. Now, I am reading "I am the fated villain.". I have tried many novels that suit my test, but they all have disappointed me after reading about 100 chapters. I will give it a try after you finish at least 100 chapters. I hope you will not disappoint me. Good Luck. [img=recommend]
I have only read about three chapters, but things are building up quite nicely, maybe when I have read more I might change my mind. You could get a bit more creative when describing certain actions and the surroundings of your world.
really good really good, i enjoyed it an done question author .... what you did learn from our great love immortal venerable ? what about our great love immortal venerable lessons ? where are there ? I'm sure the art of being shameless was a main part of his lessons, and here you are, not giving yourself a five star review sigh.... please correct yourself on that, be more shameless, because that is the way to the great love this is a part of our great love immortal venerable's lessons
Keep going bro... You are doing great.... Write as you want... Every masterpiece started with a low number of supporters... You have us... We will support you bro.. Keep going..
First of all I find the novel good and honestly it's a bit early to write review but still , I read first 6 chs and from it I feel like powersystem (add a bit more elements ) can be improved a bit as well as descriptions of mc doing things and the feelings of mc feels a bit bland but this are just small complaints as the novel is just getting started. Good work
slow but good so far . Fights are done well mc doesn't is not dumb . Continue with the good work
As a new writer you are doing a good job . Honestly . Just started the academy arc bro
I just finished Writing Arc 1 ( 16 chapters ) and that was a lot . I seriously didn't thought i would write 2 chapters a day for 8 days . And i am glad I did . over the course of these 8 days I did gained a little experience , even though it's little it's still a experience . I don't have anything major planned ahead before but now i am considering one . Thanks for reading folks 😌