celestino

Author.. i think you posted the wrong chapter..

looks good!

good

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Good. Can you send me the link of the cover?

you need to change the cover, put a woman in there, it's a ero novel after all.

please more description of the characters like hair,eyes and skin colors and more interaction between them, It would have been good to read about the first interaction with his grandparents or others like maids or guards.

looks good! the system could be good for a slowpaced novel in my opinion