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"I was supposed to be sent to earth. But I ended up in a completely different world. A world where magic exists. And here I thought I`m a Hollow—born without magic. That was until my system activated and guided me to embrace my past, deal with my present, and prepare for my future."
"With the memory of my past, information from the earth, and a bizarre world I`m in, my implanted A.I. will do everything to ensure my survival and venture the unknown. But first, I must deal with my past to move on, leave the island, and explore the world and become a Legend!"
"But how can I, if my Master is all weak and alone?"
"May the Maker have mercy upon my enemy, Because I won`t" - Ned, Becoming Legend.
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Good writing. Minor grammar mistakes, unnoticeable. The flow of the story is smooth. Solid world building so far. Slow yet not too slow. Promising story, and the author is proactive. Try it, maybe this is your cup of tea.
Because ur story has high emotional rollercoaster rides. There are very positive characters and they are self efficient and motivated. We can read these chapters with smile on your face and positively in your heart.
The book is good no doubt about it Good job The problem is the mc he's not getting strong at all he's getting weaker every chapter 2ndly his reasonings is so flawed it's borderline stupid like he forgets that he used to b an old soul 00179 3rdly the pure mana requiment hollow thing makes no sense at all his body was made by the best of the best in the world but took him 12year to absorb miniscule mana am like wtf. Without all this inconsistencies this book would b great I still recommend it.
Story is extremely fragmented, repeated perspective changes that don't really develop the story, repeated memory skips to different times without warning or reason. Trying to read this is like trying to pay attention after taking a heroic dose of mushrooms and you're at the peak.
I don’t know how you guys gave it a 4.8. Have you actually read the story? It’s so confusing. When the mc starts to take the exam for the academy the author decides to backtrack but add a little different in each beginner chapter. Like dude backtrack is usually one paragraph and it’s the exact same thing that happened in the last chapter not a different renovation of what happened next. Also isn’t he supposed to have control over his emotions after he remembers he’s a clone? So why is he acting like he’s 10 when his party is in danger? You probably fi some of these problems in future chapters but it’s the beginning chapters that get people hooked. Not the ending. The clone chapters was awesome no backtracking there awesome.but now backtracking with a different twist is horrible. Probably your first novel.
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Author I have a question if you can answer it I will be happy! Is there a romance in this novel? TKeep it up and thank you nevertheless. ♥♥♥
theme, story line were very good. but the description was very bad. eg: if the MC has a scene to open a cap on bottle. it is enough to say " MC opened the cap of bottle". But the writers describes as " MC touched the cap. then holder the cap on to parallel sides with thumb and forefinger. He then applied torque to rotate the cap......blah....blah...blah........" making the whole story boring.
World background is extremely complex and in some strories it's good but here it doesn't make any sense. You don't understand anything to the point that I doubt even the author knows where this is going. I mean lot of reactions don't make sense at all and the transitions between all the timeline are horrible (no indication or even clues about what's happening) Then the MC. In a great number of LN the MC is one if not the problem and unfortunately in this story it's the case. The MC is not entirely stupid (sometimes it's okay) but he is naive, like really naive. And he stay naive even after he get back his memories. I was expecting if not a cunning MC at least a sly MC who could use his past knowledge to help protect the ones he love (it's his only goal). So for example, a girl he likes told him she doesn't like nobles and then a noble girl ask him to spar with her cause she's interested. He could have accepted to show the girl he likes that until she is strong enough she has to play along with others even if it's only to protect herself. But no the MC straight up reject the noble girl who's by the way narrow minded, which lead to another major problem: the originality. This story is the generic story but with a background a lot more messy than usual but that's all. The same product with a different packaging. It could have potential.
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Started reading this, haven't gotten that far, about 20 chapters in now, but have given up due to the grammar. There were just too many cases of wrong pronouns, mixed tenses and then weird cases of stating something with the name of the item used, e.g. The masters sword, with the author then right afterwards asking what it was, even though the MC has been using swords his whole life.
It seems interesting I've not read it yet tho just read the first and last part(I justwantspoiler) chapters and I'm hook and confused anyway I've got to read this next to my list cuz my hands are full I added you on my library (Add more Chapters tho Please) idk😍
thumbs up. good reading. will read again, need more edits story so good so far. good job author. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
First of all it seems interesting I've not read it yet tho just skimming the first few chapters I think the grammar,spelling,or whatnot need to be edited idk english is not my first language but I can tell if it's comfortable to read or not Lastly, author what's the MC alignment? good, neutral, evil?
So the story goes like this...... ch:1 . . . . . . . . so on .... . ch:300 hope u got that one 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 so the story here is a bit peculiar and i dunno but i find that much intersting than some of i've read b4(wont give an e.g. though!) the story till the 3rd century is well proped, quality designed but after sometime the protagonist seems somewhat underpowerd considering his situations but that ain't so, his powers are just not that matured to the point of the current word. Also the background, fight scenes and the pov are top notch. so if the readers that r abt to strt it by asuming they'll get a broken op character from the start u will be disappointed. Give this novel a read for some chs b4 judging and i think this will b filling for everyone's plate.🙂
Interesting! I want to give this a chance ... Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo!
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just how many clones are there of 179 or Ned and when will there real use of magic start?. He has pure magic then anyone in the world but can't use it. that kinda suck.
This novel is very good. amazing fighting. magic and technology combining very well and characters are also written very well. world background is amazing too. But the story has a little flaw and I'm not gonna spoil you. Read it yourself 😂😂 Ohhh and also put your seat belt on. It's gonna be a bumpy ride. Sometimes it might jump into hyperspace 😂😂😂 Good luck fellow reader
One of the best novel i read on this platforn and its still developin in quiet a good way. i hope its a long story 😁. keep up the good work neo from matrix 😇🤣 lol me
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