概要
warning?!!! 18+
In this world, only the most powerful hold the final say...
In this world, the weak must bend to the will of the strong...
Such is the belief in the realm of cultivation.
But has anyone ever considered that even the most powerful have their weaknesses?
What if the mightiest man among the Twelve Worlds can become the most vulnerable?
Well, no one can escape the cycle of death—except for one man.
He fought death countless times, becoming the embodiment of fear itself.
Despite his terrifying reputation, he showered affection upon the women in his life.
Who would believe that such a formidable being could fall to death’s embrace, pierced by the blade of his beloved?
Though he lies lifeless, he did not become weak. His soul, memories, spirit, and essence scattered throughout the Twelve Worlds.
For this fallen terror to rise again, his fragmented pieces must be reunited.
But instead, his very elements took form, becoming sentient beings that wandered off into the unknown.
Now, a weak soul, devoid of cultivation or abilities, has emerged. What will become of the others?
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レビューを書く***Review up to Chapter 8 It’s clear that you’ve poured a lot of passion into this story, and that shows in the action-packed moments and the tense relationships between the characters. My suggestion would be to dive deeper into the emotional development of the characters and balance the action scenes with more exploration of the world and its rules. You have a strong foundation here, it just needs a bit more fine-tuning for the story to shine even brighter. I’ll keep reading to see how it continues to develop.
作者 Lovegold
i will just leave this review to encourage you. keep it up