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***Review up to Chapter 8 It’s clear that you’ve poured a lot of passion into this story, and that shows in the action-packed moments and the tense relationships between the characters. My suggestion would be to dive deeper into the emotional development of the characters and balance the action scenes with more exploration of the world and its rules. You have a strong foundation here, it just needs a bit more fine-tuning for the story to shine even brighter. I’ll keep reading to see how it continues to develop.
***Review up to Chapter 8 It’s clear that you’ve poured a lot of passion into this story, and that shows in the action-packed moments and the tense relationships between the characters. My suggestion would be to dive deeper into the emotional development of the characters and balance the action scenes with more exploration of the world and its rules. You have a strong foundation here, it just needs a bit more fine-tuning for the story to shine even brighter. I’ll keep reading to see how it continues to develop.