/ Fantasy / Beast Evolution
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[WPC #288 - Silver prize winner!]
Ray was more of an average guy in almost everything, whether it was appearance, in sports, or in school except for strength. Ray lost his parents in a car accident when he was little so he grew up in an orphanage.
He had no friends and was always bullied in school cause he was skinny so he was an easy target.
Then one day when he was running away from bullying he ended up in front of a truck that crushed him and he died.
But his life didn't end there as he reincarnated in a fantasy world but as a beast.
But with his bad luck, he was reincarnated as a low level beast with low stats, but he has a trump card, An evolution system that helps him in this new world. How will he evolve and become the strongest of All.
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Author's note
Mind you this is not harem, but a few explicit scenes late in the book.
This is my first time writing so the early chapters are a little sluggish but it gets better, my English is not the strongest but please bear with me, I'm improving everyday.
The cover is not mine I just found it online, so if the owner wants me to take it down, contact me.
Check out my new book: MMORPG: Strongest Assassin Online.
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Firstly, I enjoy how fast paced everything feels and it immediately makes the MC an underdog. Secondly, its a fast read though I’m sure it’ll get gritty into detail. Finally, MC is a furry kuek with a system to boot. So what’s not to like?
The synopsis is enough to get you hooked. It's unique, it's full of interesting elements that I wish for in evolution stories, and the mc is a BEAST!!! I just hope the missing fast paced tag is also added to the book, but otherwise a seriously enjoyable read!
I don't think this novel is that good its pretty inconsistent and its like he's always falling in dungeon Maybe because i am not that sympathetic to his humanitarian beliefs that I don't like that he is always trying to be friendly to human even when they keep on attacking him .Ofcourse i don't Want him to an edgelord and keep on saying "humanity is my enemy ", But its like I am reading just an cliche story with all that 'chosen one' and hero complex Mc and its evolution is truly bad till now at least this story is more of a furry human than a beast I am sorry Author if i hurt your feelings or anything but this ain't cup of my tea
The story feels like a bunch of clichés stringed together. It's confusing sometimes because it feels like the author is working on one storyline remembers a cliche and shoves it into the story.
Overall: Nice idea, bad grammar, written as bad as some other weird translates chinese novels on WN. It sometimes feels like reading something from a child. Sentences are kinda wrong, entire words missing, some letters missing, and overall the formatting is nearly non-existing. Most of the time you can't even know if it's his thoughts, what he has said out loud, or whatever. And no sentence structure, too. Dunno, I can't pay for that story... If the story would be out on one of the free english novel sites like RR etc., okay. But paying for that? Big no no! I read all the free chapters, by the way. Not worth the time and money, in my eyes. Sorry.
I don’t really write reviews but since I read until the current chap I might as well give some feedback. The writing quality is iffy it’s not the worst but it’s definitely not the best. The author is pretty stable with his updates so you don’t have to worry about much on that front. Now for story development there really isn’t much of any. Granted we are only 86 chapters in so I guess you could just chalk it up to it being slow paced. The character design and world background is where this novel truly fails. The characters are pretty generic nothing to really write home about except for the mc and that’s in a bad way. The mc for lack of better terms is an idiot. He reincarnates into a world he knows nothing about and doesn’t even try to find out any general knowledge unless it comes up in a conversation which he just gets made fun of for not knowing anything. He’s more of a go with the flow kind of guy with no real goals or aspirations. Like how he joins the knight academy just because the girl he meets wants to join it. I just mentioned the mc not knowing anything about the world he’s in so we the readers also don’t know anything about the world. Overall I would give this a 2/5
I read what was free as a reference point. The whole academy parts feels so forced and cliche it ruins the stories flow. I can see him not wanting to kill humans and get back into society but he knows nothing of the world and us the readers by extension. The grammar needs work as well due to changing of tense when telling parts and misspelled or just the complete wrong word at times. The flashes of what I assume is the future also don’t help the story in my opinion but to each their own. I was looking forward to a monster mc story but now he is week and pretending to be human
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Just pointing out an inconsistency in the synopsis if he's more of an average guy appearance and "sport" can he really be that skinny to the point of being bullied unless of course it's written like "till his parents died and his health quickly deteriorated or sumthin😃
This book has been great so far and am loving every bits of it. A splendid work of imagination and art. Bravo, author. Bullies in school this days can be very tiring and annoying. Look at how they made Ray end his life dead after being hit by a truck. He funny thing is that, he reincarnated as a rabbit. That's funny.
This is one of those stories that out very well then it gets good then it get great then turns into a page turn. Than you read it get lose in the story just to be addicted to it just be slapped in the face of a cliffhanger. Then you check every single day for a update.
The novel was good until the academy arc began. Am very disappointed. You can do better
I am 142 chapters in and I enjoy the concept, the pace, the system.. but there are inconsistencies in the writing that cause it to stumble.
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Overall it is fine idea and good story for newbies. Indeed it had great potential. Ray start from someone literally always rnning away, now bcame someone up to the challenge. Sorry but for me, you may wish to added more character like Lily and his little pet to gave more feeling to the story. but who i am but a noob. so well. Keep it up Author. Learn and keep your progress. I like it so far.
the novel is worth a read and can do well, the storyline is amazing and writer fighting you can do well and keep writing and working hard. you will be popular.
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