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Bad faith

歴史 28 章 44.5K ビュー
作者: Hartika_Sharma

4.69 (32 レビュー結果)

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Akshita_Ranga

Outstanding job. Everything is so good. You should read it I promise you won't regret 🤗🤗🤗🤗☺️😍🌺😊 I like the character development and the emotion are expressed so well.☺️

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Webstar3493

Just reading the first line of this book and I'm already hooked. This book is sure to soar high💓💓💓💓

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Hartika_Sharma

This story is a historical romance. It is a slow burn romance novel. This Story focuses on a princess from teen to adulthood. You will find attraction, jealousy, anger and love. Good part starts from ch 11

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_Nightingale

The story is really interesting but there could be made some tiny adjustments in the writing. I suggest using Grammarly to help you improve your work. I'm not saying it's bad but it just feels kind of uncomfortable while reading it. Aside from that, it's really good! Added to my collection!

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Maeve_Lindley

You have a great story here. There are a couple of mistakes in the writing, but it is still smooth and readable. I like the development and pace from the beginning and the development between MCs Well done Author, Keep up the great work! (Part of Review Swap!)

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Mask_Xd

The author tells a beautiful love story between Alaric and Madeline, showing that love can conquer any obstacle. Despite challenges, the story remains captivating, and Alaric's poetic words add a special touch.

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Annran

Badge Annran Just what to say about this novel...I just don't have words. The plot,characters development and all the things needed in a novel are all here. Huhu...so nice. Excellent I promote you all to read it. ^^*TT. Loved it.

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Ninestar619_5803

Great book. sweet plot. The book has a lot of beautiful plots that suits its genre and is the most relaxing while reading. The character designing and world setting is good. Plus, the writing style is excellent. Easy flowing. Keep it up

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Goosey_Goo

👋👋 this story was one that progressively got better the more I read. Keep it up author👍

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Darja_Renen

There are no grave mistakes in writing, it’s smooth and addictive, there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment and I took a liking in Alaric, you can say he is a well written character. I genuinely enjoyed the story. 10/10 I’d gladly do as many reviews as needed. Leave one under mine novel and I’ll track you down and help you with yours 😉

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Visionary_M

The story is progressive and easy to read. I also like that the princess had support while growing up. My only suggestion is to ensure there are spaces between words. I think doing that will transform the novel greatly and it will also improve reader experience. All the best author

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Rara_Jasmin

It's a great story, recommended for those who love historical romance. The poem in the story's synopsis is truly heart-touching. Your descriptions of the characters were well done. While there are some grammatical errors in the story, they don't significantly impact the overall experience. I suggest using shorter paragraphs instead of longer ones. Keep writing, author. I hope my review doesn't demotivate you.

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ricebucket0_0

A very well written story with an interesting concept and superb writing. Overall, a good read, love the princess and her backstory btw 👍

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Goosey_Goo

This is a very easy read for those of you who love a lovable princess story. Let's hope everything goes okay for our princess. Is an HEA in her future?

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UelUel

The author really excels in portraying the personality and characteristics of the characters in her story. Also, the dialogues are very written which makes reading it very intriguing. The story itself is very interesting and has its own uniqueness. There are some flaws in writing like the unchecked spacing between the paragraphs but it's not something that can't be fixed by a short editing. Overall, this novel is really fun to read. Keep it up and upload more chapters.

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Reshoph

Loved it, author. How you started this story is how you grabbed my attention. I felt like I am there with the princess. I am genuinely pleased in it. I don't know much about novels but this touched my heart. You will do great in future.

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Zeera_Jay

Great story, nice description, I love how the story starts, it was quite sad but I'm glad the FL was able to be strong despite what has happened to her. Keep it up. .

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Mystic_Chronicler

This book tells a love story that defies borders and obstacles. Alaric and Madeline's love is beautifully depicted. However, the reality they face adds complexity to the tale. The poem in the synopsis adds a nice touch to the story. 💖📖🌙

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Sarmishta_Nayak

Although we are bff and live far away now but we have deep respect towards eachother.Earlier we are not so much close to each other but after pendemic we got to know eachother while others in our class busy in building their realtionship stronger we both were planening and thinking cretive things so that we build ourselves different.no matter what she does i will always support her not because she is my bff but as a person and a girl we should support eachother to achieve our goals .she is doing what she like sooner i hope i will also what i wanted in my life all the best and keep the work going.

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Evara_Freya

I think writing needs a little improvement. However, the storyline is good and the character design is perfect. I suggest you try showing instead of just simply telling the story.

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  • キャラクターデザイン
  • 世界の背景

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