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My 18th birthday, Woah!!!!
Finally that day arrived which he was waiting for..,....
Now I can break free from the shackles of life and have fun like an adult.
The same old common life a city boy changed overnight to a inheritor of Devil's throne..........
A series of events turned his life into a living hell, in a spur of moment, life took a drastic 360° turn. He set off a journey to become the Underlord.
Stuck between the choices of his two fathers, his biological father and the current Daimao. One wants him to turn into a gentleman and lead a normal life, the other pushes him into the depths of hell to become the strongest in both the worlds, the mortal world and the netherworld.
Embark on the adventurous journey of the Underlord.........
Behold, the beginning of the new Dai Mao era (Demon lord era)
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Note: Book title has been changed, comment if you like the new one or the older version.
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Keep up the good work. This is a promising story. Relatable and unique mc! Don't go to beta road plz and Is there any romance afterward? Quite different writing styles, but I saw too many missing or misused punctuation. And how about recheck the excess spacing and some capitalization? Overall is nice!
Absolutely recommended for those who love Gore content, especially those Demonic and other supernatural powers. It's exciting and thrilling at the same time. Imagination about the scenes and the features are beautiful. The MC's life turns upside down in a flash. Well I won't spoil other readers. Read yourself to find out. But I would highly recommend to edit the chaps. There are lot of errors and typos especially missing punctuations which somehow heeds attention. Being a beginner it's a problem to deal with that. Storyline and background is still developing and the MC as well. Interesting plot still needs improvement in dialogues. I'm in initial chapters but I can see it has a very promising plot. Keep improving and keep writing. Have already added your book to my library.☺
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Greetings to the author. Always a sucker for a good fantasy novels. A separate world from the normal with magic and fighting, amazing! I also love the story and character development, amazing stuff. Please do well to edit the chapters and upload more... Kudos!
Ohh It got me curious how will the story end hahahha cause this feels new to me, the story is so unique and I love it! I can't wait to read more chapters of this story the first chap got me curious through the whole story gotta read more of this tomorrow cause gotta go to sleep now. Author-nim keep it up an amazing story!, [img=fp][img=recommend]
Oh, my, it's already making me fall for the MC lol how just the life takes a turn when you are least expecting. MC fighting keep going reacher-chan will give all the powers to you!!
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i couldn't agree more if someone said this is promising. let the rating give the answer to you. since i never once lying on my own rating even it means i'm an author myself
Liking the development of the story. Good character plots.Good novel .....good novel....good novel...good novel......good novel...................................................hope the author fixes the slight errors though.......................💜💜
The characters are good and dimensional, the story is good too. And as far as the grammar is concerned, yeah it's a bit off but hey, these days most of the premium novels have a lot worse grammar and story. I loved your story and hope it does great!
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This a story with great potential, the mc is great, not arrogant. However, the story chapters need rewriting as there are grammatical errors... But overall a gem...
It's not a smooth read because of grammatical errors. I hope you can master this basic skill as soon as you can. Here's my initial review for the potential of your story. Keep working hard and don't forget to enjoy.
The story is quite interesting. It's nice to read but it would really help if the story is polished more with proper punctuation and grammar. After proper editing it will be much better than now. I have high hopes for this.
Another demon lord and a normal one mixed in another novel! Awesome! And with the title itself, the readers can also be hooked in this! Might as well check this out!
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So I like the plot. It is a sort of change I would like to see in this genre. However, the characters feel a little hollow. you should add parts where they express their thoughts to the audience, and more dialogue. The rest of it seems fine. Good Job author! Keep it up~
Interesting. What should I say? I am hooked. Characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work and I highly recommended this work. ^-^
The plot is very nice and the characters are relatable and unique with their own personality. The only problem is that the way you present the story. Proper use of punctuations, capitalizations, and grammar could be improved, and also you could show more attitude in the characters’ dialogues. Other than that, the whole story is amazing and worth reading! You'll love the characters :)
Its really nice and satisfying story but show the more personality of the main character as well as side characters to make tge audiance think of different endings
I wish everyone enjoys the story, it feels awesome to see so many readers . thanks everyone for supporting i will not let it go waste, upcoming stories have improved and i am never gonna stop mesmerizing you guys.😍😍😍 love you guys