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Avatar: The White Demon's Revenge

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作者: SrCuervo

4.82 (13 レビュー結果)

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In a world marked by the invasion and massacre of his village, Thorian, the sole surviving child, harbors a fierce resentment towards the invaders from the Fire Nation. From his adolescence into adulthood, his quest for revenge leads him down a dark path of learning centered on violence. Eventually, he is compelled to gather the survivors to end the war, facing a crucial decision: resign himself to the endless conflict or seek a way out that will halt the bloodshed.

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SrCuervo

Short novel that I imagined in a weekend, this story is about revenge and I hope you will forgive me if there is a lot of gore. Some parts of the story will not be taken into account, I set something I want to tell and things will move too quickly. Maybe a few 100 story chapters, maybe more.

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Abdul_Rahman_5112

Is it just me or is there some inspiration for this fic, thorian? Thorfinn? Basically the same origin story, dad running from the fighting life, idk but i see the VS inspiration 😭

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imagination1

Hey man I love your stories, you don't or listen why I have to say I'm just curious can you do, Kakegurui or classroom of the elites or date a life, the reason why because I haven't seen any good fiction of down, and the reason why I came to you because I like your fanfiction and I think you do pretty good job of the fictional novels, anyway I'm taking up your time you don't have to answer or fulfill my quest, I hope you have a great day and keep up your good work, bye.

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Green_Wildfyre

One of the best Avatar stories i have ever read , the plot is quite new but very well thought out , and although it was a short story it was better than most long ones ive read.

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6mth
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Waddel_Casimir

Rushed the ending , which didn't sit right with me .

7mth
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Ebo_Eboo

Muy buena historia de avatar, me gusta como manejas el desarrollo del personaje y que y retrates como funciona la realidad de que en una guerra no reconcilian no,as por unas palabras, pregunta tendrá alguna pareja si es así espero que no pongas a suki sinceramente a alguien como el no sería buena

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Jesse_vi

I love this story, the innocence that Ang's story had is finally over 🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡

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Robocop_123321

The start kinda threw me off a bit but overall good Ps what I think the mc look’s like starring off the wall

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9mth
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Bob80085

the story is well written and I think that it's quite great. although I see a lot of negatives * The avatar isn't involved in the story, wich he and the gang were involved more or at least see their pov * it's all war. It would have been great if there was some slice of life or word exploration *more than one element, every avatar fanfic has the mc either have a system or can bend more than one element, which is frustrating these are my own opinion

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Patricio_Venezia

corta pero buena lo importante no es que sea larga sino que tenga desarrollo y un buen final medio apresurado pero fue como avatar realmente

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OveRlord

great story as always, keep writing and don’t burn out, and I’ll give it a 5 and go into oblivion and a little more to fill the word count..

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Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Alex_Boen

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