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the story is well written and I think that it's quite great. although I see a lot of negatives * The avatar isn't involved in the story, wich he and the gang were involved more or at least see their pov * it's all war. It would have been great if there was some slice of life or word exploration *more than one element, every avatar fanfic has the mc either have a system or can bend more than one element, which is frustrating these are my own opinion
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corta pero buena lo importante no es que sea larga sino que tenga desarrollo y un buen final medio apresurado pero fue como avatar realmente
One of the best Avatar stories i have ever read , the plot is quite new but very well thought out , and although it was a short story it was better than most long ones ive read.
great story as always, keep writing and don’t burn out, and I’ll give it a 5 and go into oblivion and a little more to fill the word count..
Muy buena historia de avatar, me gusta como manejas el desarrollo del personaje y que y retrates como funciona la realidad de que en una guerra no reconcilian no,as por unas palabras, pregunta tendrá alguna pareja si es así espero que no pongas a suki sinceramente a alguien como el no sería buena
Hey man I love your stories, you don't or listen why I have to say I'm just curious can you do, Kakegurui or classroom of the elites or date a life, the reason why because I haven't seen any good fiction of down, and the reason why I came to you because I like your fanfiction and I think you do pretty good job of the fictional novels, anyway I'm taking up your time you don't have to answer or fulfill my quest, I hope you have a great day and keep up your good work, bye.
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The start kinda threw me off a bit but overall good Ps what I think the mc look’s like starring off the wall
Is it just me or is there some inspiration for this fic, thorian? Thorfinn? Basically the same origin story, dad running from the fighting life, idk but i see the VS inspiration 😭
Short novel that I imagined in a weekend, this story is about revenge and I hope you will forgive me if there is a lot of gore. Some parts of the story will not be taken into account, I set something I want to tell and things will move too quickly. Maybe a few 100 story chapters, maybe more.
the story is well written and I think that it's quite great. although I see a lot of negatives * The avatar isn't involved in the story, wich he and the gang were involved more or at least see their pov * it's all war. It would have been great if there was some slice of life or word exploration *more than one element, every avatar fanfic has the mc either have a system or can bend more than one element, which is frustrating these are my own opinion
ネタバレを明かす corta pero buena lo importante no es que sea larga sino que tenga desarrollo y un buen final medio apresurado pero fue como avatar realmente
One of the best Avatar stories i have ever read , the plot is quite new but very well thought out , and although it was a short story it was better than most long ones ive read.
great story as always, keep writing and don’t burn out, and I’ll give it a 5 and go into oblivion and a little more to fill the word count..
Muy buena historia de avatar, me gusta como manejas el desarrollo del personaje y que y retrates como funciona la realidad de que en una guerra no reconcilian no,as por unas palabras, pregunta tendrá alguna pareja si es así espero que no pongas a suki sinceramente a alguien como el no sería buena
Hey man I love your stories, you don't or listen why I have to say I'm just curious can you do, Kakegurui or classroom of the elites or date a life, the reason why because I haven't seen any good fiction of down, and the reason why I came to you because I like your fanfiction and I think you do pretty good job of the fictional novels, anyway I'm taking up your time you don't have to answer or fulfill my quest, I hope you have a great day and keep up your good work, bye.
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The start kinda threw me off a bit but overall good Ps what I think the mc look’s like starring off the wall
Is it just me or is there some inspiration for this fic, thorian? Thorfinn? Basically the same origin story, dad running from the fighting life, idk but i see the VS inspiration 😭
Short novel that I imagined in a weekend, this story is about revenge and I hope you will forgive me if there is a lot of gore. Some parts of the story will not be taken into account, I set something I want to tell and things will move too quickly. Maybe a few 100 story chapters, maybe more.